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The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 10

Suspicious Shadows and Sinister Spirits

By Mara EdwardsPublished about a year ago 12 min read
The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 10
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"East wing?" Luke's voice cut through the dimness, not waiting for a response before he strode off in that direction. Alice hurried after him, her flashlight beam dancing over peeling paint and cracked tiles.

Luke led the way with a briskness that seemed out of place in the suffocating atmosphere of the asylum. Alice couldn't help but notice how his head kept whipping to his phone, the screen casting an eerie glow on his face. She tried to focus on the task at hand but found herself watching him intently, curiosity piqued.

"Is everything okay?" she asked, breaking the oppressive silence that had settled between them.

"Fine," he muttered without looking up. His thumb scrolled rapidly, a frown etched deep on his brow.

Alice's grip tightened on her flashlight. This wasn't just absent-minded scrolling; Luke's behavior was bordering on frantic. Every few steps, he would pause, tapping out a message with a sense of urgency that sent tremors of unease down Alice's spine. Each time his attention snapped back to his phone, shadows seemed to press closer, as if drawn by the distraction.

"Are you sure? If there's something wrong—" Alice began again, only to be cut off.

"Nothing's wrong," Luke's tone was sharp, almost defensive. He shoved his phone into his pocket, but not before Alice caught a glimpse of an unreadable message flashing on the screen. Her mind raced with questions, yet the uncertainty of Luke's actions was a puzzle she couldn't solve with the pieces she had.

They continued onward, deeper into the bowels of the asylum. Luke's staccato footsteps echoed around them, punctuated by the soft chime of a new message arriving, pulling his attention once more. It was clear to Alice that something—or someone—outside these walls held sway over Luke's thoughts, rendering their shared quest secondary.

Alice couldn't shake the feeling that they were not alone in their exploration, that Luke's suspicious behavior was a harbinger of things unseen and unspoken. With every suspicious glance he cast towards his phone, the creeping dread within her grew, as if the very walls whispered warnings she could not yet comprehend.

The air turned thick with the scent of mold, and Alice's flashlight beam seemed to dim as they ventured deeper into the asylum. The walls were scarred with the remnants of desperate scratches, each one a silent testament to the agony once housed within these now-abandoned halls. With every step, the darkness felt more oppressive, pressing in on Alice from all sides, as if eager to suffocate her with its weight.

"Luke?" she whispered, her voice barely piercing the heavy silence.

"Hmm?" He sounded distant, his silhouette a faint outline against the encroaching gloom.

"Never mind." She repressed the shiver threatening to travel down her spine. Trusting Luke felt increasingly like grasping onto smoke; he was there but not quite present, distracted by whatever secrets his phone harbored.

"Hey," Luke's voice cut through her spiraling thoughts, "I think we should split up. We can cover more ground that way."

"Split up?" Alice's pulse quickened, the very idea sending a jolt of fear through her already tense body. "Are you sure that's wise?"

"Completely," he affirmed with a confidence that didn't reach his eyes. "I'll head down the east wing. You take the west. We'll meet back at the junction in fifteen minutes, tops."

"Luke—"

"Trust me, Alice. It's faster this way.” His gaze held hers for a moment—a flicker of something unreadable crossing his features—before he turned away, leaving her alone in the darkness that now seemed alive with unseen threats.

As Luke's footsteps receded, Alice fought the urge to call him back, to cling to the safety of numbers. Instead, she squared her shoulders, directing her flashlight toward the west wing. If they were going to uncover the asylum’s secrets, they had to be thorough, even if it meant facing the darkness alone.

Alice's flashlight beam danced across peeling paint and cracked tiles, the light a small comfort against the pressing darkness. With each step, her eyes darted to the fringes of the illuminated circle, where darkness seemed to quiver with anticipation. The stillness was oppressive, broken only by the sound of her own breathing and the occasional drip of water from somewhere unseen.

The air felt thick, making each breath an effort as she moved cautiously into what had once been a patient's room. Her heart hammered against her ribs, not just from the exertion but from the tightening grip of dread that coiled in her stomach.

"Get a grip, Alice," she muttered to herself, trying to focus on the task at hand.

It was then, in the peripheral vision that lay just beyond the reach of her flashlight, that shadows began to twitch and flicker. She paused, steadying the beam, but found nothing to explain the fleeting movements that teased the edges of her sight. They were like whispers of motion, suggesting forms that weren't quite human, nor entirely real.

"Luke's right," she whispered. "This place plays tricks on you."

But deep down, Alice wasn't convinced. These shadows were different, more purposeful somehow, as if they were sentient tendrils of the asylum's dark history, reaching out towards her.

She shook her head, trying to dispel the unease that gnawed at her resolve. With a breath meant to steady her nerves, she pressed on, moving further into the labyrinthine corridors of the west wing.

That's when it came—a low, guttural growl that rolled down the hallway like a wave of malice. It was distant yet distinct, a sound that had no place in the abandoned asylum. Alice froze, her pulse surging as the growl reverberated through the decrepit walls.

"Animals?" she thought, her mind scrambling for a logical explanation. But another part of her, the part that had been piecing together the asylum’s morbid past, knew that some horrors were not so easily rationalized.

"Luke?" she called out, her voice barely above a whisper, though she knew he wouldn't hear her. He was too far away now, lost to both sight and hearing.

The growl did not repeat itself, but its memory lingered in the heavy air, leaving Alice acutely aware of her vulnerability. Alone and unarmed, she realized that whatever dangers lurked within the asylum’s walls might not be confined to the past. Fear, sharp and cold, wrapped around her, and for a moment, she couldn't move, caught in the sudden, terrifying understanding that she was no longer the hunter, but the hunted.

Gathering her courage, Alice's voice cut through the stillness, a stark contrast to the suffocating silence. "Luke?" There was an edge of desperation in her call, yet it seemed to dissipate as quickly as it emerged, absorbed by the thick, unyielding quiet of the asylum's walls. No reply came; the stillness returned with a vengeance, enveloping her plea and extinguishing it like a candle snuffed out by the dark.

The absence of an answer weighed heavily upon her, amplifying the isolation gnawing at her nerves. Not even the echo of her own voice reached back to offer comfort. The disquiet within her swelled as she considered that Luke, her only lifeline in this forsaken place, might have been swallowed up by the same shadows that danced mockingly at the edges of her vision.

With no choice but to push forward, Alice's movements became measured, each step deliberate. Her shoes made contact with the cracked tiles, the sound sharp and intrusive in the hush that hung over the abandoned halls. The echoes served as a grim reminder of her solitude, bouncing off the peeling paint and shattered windows, creating a cacophony that seemed impossibly loud amidst the prevailing silence.

Her eyes darted across the darkness, searching for any hint of movement or threat. Her hand brushed against the cold wall for guidance, flinching as her fingertips grazed something unexpectedly moist. Every shadow appeared sinister, every creak and groan of the dilapidated structure a potential harbinger of danger.

Alice's breath came in shallow bursts, her chest tight with anticipation. Each echoed footstep propelled her forward, deeper into the bowels of the asylum, while the vestiges of reason urged her to turn back. Yet she knew there was no safety in retreat—not with the growl that had promised unseen horrors lurking just beyond the reach of her senses.

She pressed on, her heartbeat pounding in her ears almost as loudly as her footsteps, both sounds merging in a discordant symphony that underscored the fear gripping her. Alice could feel the oppressive history of the asylum pressing down upon her, threatening to smother her resolve with its malignant past. She was alone, but not unwatched—she could feel eyes, countless and unseen, tracking her every move.

Alice's flashlight beam quivered as a sudden chill swept through the corridor, raising goosebumps on her arms despite the heavy fabric of her jacket. She paused, her breath visible in the air before her, and listened intently. The whispers were back, a susurrus of indistinct voices that seemed to dance just at the edge of hearing, like dry leaves skittering across an abandoned graveyard.

"Who's there?" Her question was a mere whisper, a futile attempt at bravado against the encroaching dread. There was no reply, only the quiet mockery of her own voice as it was absorbed by the darkness.

Continuing with reluctant steps, Alice entered a room that reeked of decay. Here, the remnants of the asylum's tragic history lay strewn about—a wheelchair with one wheel missing, its seat stained dark with age; a toppled gurney twisted in a grotesque angle; scattered papers that once might have been patient records now reduced to pulp by time and neglect.

The air was thick, almost palpable, as if charged with the desolation of countless souls who had once inhabited this forsaken place. She swept the beam over walls where paint hung like flayed skin, revealing cryptic scratches that hinted at frantic attempts of communication from residents long past.

A tattered curtain fluttered as though caught in a breeze, yet there was no window through which wind could enter. The sound it made was out of place, a soft rustling that crescendoed into a cacophony within the confines of her mind. With each heartbeat, the feeling of impending doom grew stronger, tightening around her chest like a vice.

Alice's hand reached out involuntarily towards a broken picture frame, its glass shattered across the floor, reflecting the flashlight's beam in a dozen fragmented stars. As she withdrew her hand, a shadow darted across the wall, independent of any movement she had made.

"Luke?!" she called again, the hope in her voice a fragile thing, easily crushed by the realization that Luke was not going to answer.

She was about to step back, to retreat from the oppressive atmosphere of the room, when the shadows themselves seemed to stir, coalescing into darker patches that defied the laws of light. Each gust of wind carried with it voices, now louder, clearer, speaking words she couldn't understand but felt deep within her bones—a warning, a lament, an incantation.

Alice realized then that the asylum was awake, and she was not merely an intruder, but prey.

Determined to escape the oppressive atmosphere, Alice pivoted on her heel, her eyes searching for the doorway that led back to the relative safety of the main hallway. The darkness seemed to pulse around her, swallowing her tentative steps and making her question the direction from which she had come.

Before she could confirm her bearings, a violent, thunderous crash reverberated through the room—the sound of a heavy door slamming shut with finality. Instinctively, she spun towards the noise, her flashlight beam slicing through the darkness only to reveal the solid, unyielding frame of the now-closed entrance.

"Luke?" her voice was less a call than a whisper, disbelief painting its edges. It was one thing to be alone; it was another entirely to be caged.

Her heart began to hammer against her ribcage as the realization dawned: Luke had suggested they split up, and in doing so, had left her stranded. Was it intentional? Did his distracted demeanor earlier have a more sinister purpose? The thought sent a fresh wave of panic coursing through her veins.

Alice scrambled to the door, her hands pounding against the cold, unresponsive wood. "Luke!" This time her shout was laced with desperation, but the asylum absorbed her cries, leaving her pleas unanswered.

The whispers grew louder, feeding off her fear, and Alice knew with chilling clarity that she was not alone. The malevolent forces she had felt lurking in the shadows were closing in, emboldened by her isolation. Luke's absence was no oversight; it was abandonment, and she was left to face the darkness without an ally.

Alice's fingers traced the frigid perimeter of the room, her breath coalescing into a cloud of mist that seemed to linger before her eyes. The chill seeped through her clothes, wrapping around her bones like an icy shroud. With each shallow gasp, the air grew colder, denser, as if an invisible winter was taking hold within these decaying walls.

Frantically, her gaze swept over the peeling paint and broken furniture, hunting for any sign of escape—a window, a secondary door, anything. But her search only led her deeper into the heart of the asylum’s madness. This was not just abandonment; it was betrayal—a deliberate act by Luke, leaving her as prey in a predator's den, and her trust in him shattered as sharply as the glass beneath her trembling feet.

The shadows in the corners of the room began to writhe and twist, stretching towards Alice with purpose. At first, she thought her mind was playing tricks, the product of fear and dim light. But then, the darkness itself seemed to pulse and churn, and from its depths, figures emerged—blacker than night and more solid than mirages.

They darted back and forth, flickering at the edge of her vision, their movements erratic and yet somehow predatory. She could feel them drawing nearer, feel the malice that radiated from them like a palpable force. The whispers that had been so indistinct earlier now took on a sinister cadence, echoing words that twisted the very fabric of her sanity.

Alice stumbled backward, her hand clasping over her mouth to stifle a scream. They were upon her—the dark figures with their gaping voids where faces should have been. Each one was a nightmare brought to life, a specter of all the pain and suffering that had soaked into the asylum's walls over the decades.

"Stay back!" she cried out, her voice cracking with terror. But the malevolent forces paid no heed, drawn to her panic like sharks to blood. She was cornered, the spirit of the place encircling her, ready to claim another victim for its eternal torment.

With her back pressed against the cold wall, Alice closed her eyes, summoning every ounce of willpower she had left. If there was a way out, she had to find it. And if this was to be her end, she would not go quietly into the clutches of whatever horror awaited her in the shadows.

Alice's pulse throbbed in her ears, a frantic drumbeat as the shadows slithered closer. Her breaths came in ragged gasps, misting in the frigid air that seemed to grow colder with every passing second. The malevolent entities that had once lurked at the edges of reality now bore down on her, their forms more defined—tattered remnants of hospital gowns clinging to their ethereal bodies, eyes hollow and endless.

One figure, taller than the rest, stretched out a hand with fingers that ended in points like broken glass. Alice recoiled, her spine pressing against the crumbling plaster of the asylum wall, its gritty texture scraping through her shirt. She could almost feel the icy touch of the specter before it made contact, an anticipatory chill that threatened to paralyze her limbs.

"Luke!" she tried again, her voice a desperate whisper, but it was lost in the cavernous emptiness of the room—a plea for salvation unanswered. She was alone, abandoned, with only these harbingers of doom for company.

Her mind raced, thoughts disjointed by fear. Luke's suspicious behavior flashed through her memory—his constant glances at his phone, the unease that had crept into his voice. Had he known what would happen? Was this some twisted betrayal? No time to ponder—the present danger was all too real, all too close.

The dark figures encroached, their presence oppressive, suffocating. Alice forced her eyes to remain open, to confront the nightmare that advanced. If she was to face her end in this forsaken place, she would not cower behind closed lids.

"Please," she breathed, the word barely audible over the sound of her own heart. It wasn't clear whom she was begging—the spirits, some higher power, or perhaps just the remnants of her own fractured hope.

As the closest apparition drew near enough for Alice to see the void where its soul should have been, her back went rigid against the unyielding wall. The air around her hummed with the electricity of their malice, the room seeming to constrict, as if intending to crush her between the forces of the dead and the decaying walls of the living.

Alice stood still, her silhouette framed by the faint light seeping through a boarded-up window. She could feel the malevolent spirits inching closer, their twisted faces looming in the darkness. Their presence was suffocating, threatening to engulf her in an endless abyss of despair. As she stood there, her fate hanging in the balance, she couldn't help but wonder if she would ever escape the clutches of the sinister asylum.

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Mara Edwards

I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!

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