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“The Midnight Visitor: When Shadows Have Eyes”

The visitor

By Hawa BarrowPublished about a year ago 2 min read

Title: “The Midnight Visitor: When Shadows Have Eyes”

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In the dead of night, when silence blankets the world, there are whispers of an unseen presence lurking just beyond the edge of sight. You’ve felt it before—the faint prickling at the back of your neck, the goosebumps rising on your skin, the feeling that someone, or something, is watching. Most people dismiss it as paranoia, just shadows playing tricks in the dark. But what if those shadows are watching? And what if they’re waiting?

In the town of Hollow’s End, locals have long whispered of the Midnight Visitor, a spectral figure rumored to haunt the quietest hours. Those who’ve encountered it say it appears at exactly 3:33 AM, a time steeped in mystery. They describe a figure shrouded in shadow, with hollow eyes that burn like embers. Some claim they only catch glimpses—a reflection in a window, a dark silhouette lingering in doorways. But the most terrifying stories come from those who’ve been brave, or foolish, enough to look closer.

One witness, a man named Sam, recounts a night he’ll never forget. Alone in his apartment, he awoke to a strange noise—a soft scraping, like nails dragging along a wooden floor. At first, he dismissed it, assuming it was his mind playing tricks. But the sound persisted, growing louder. Unable to ignore it, he ventured into his hallway, his heart pounding. And there, standing in the shadows, was the Midnight Visitor, watching him.

Sam describes its face—or lack thereof. “It was like looking into a void,” he says, “but somehow, I could feel its eyes, feel them staring right into my soul.” Paralyzed, Sam could only watch as the figure drifted closer, its bony fingers reaching out. Just as he felt its icy grip, it vanished, leaving only a lingering chill and an overwhelming sense of dread.

Psychologists dismiss such encounters as sleep paralysis, a trick of the mind. But what if there’s more? What if the Midnight Visitor isn’t a figment, but a harbinger of something darker, a spirit that feeds on fear?

For those brave enough to test the legend, remember this: if you hear the soft scraping of nails at 3:33 AM, don’t open your door. And whatever you do, don’t look into its eyes. Some doors, once opened, can never be closed.

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About the Creator

Hawa Barrow

“I’m an aspiring writer and nursing student, blending creativity with compassion. Passionate about storytelling and healthcare, my aim is to inspire connection and empathy through both writing and patient care.”

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