The Man in the Reflection Isn’t Me
It started with a delayed reflection. It ended with him trying to take my place

The Man in the Reflection Isn’t Me
It began the night I decided to quit my job.
I stood in front of the bathroom mirror, brushing my teeth. I was exhausted, half-zoned out, staring at myself. But for a second — just a flicker — he didn’t move when I did.
I thought I imagined it.
People see weird things when they’re tired. A delay in brain processing, some glitch between perception and movement. I laughed it off, rinsed my mouth, and went to bed.
The next night, it happened again.
But longer.
I smiled. He didn’t.
I tilted my head. He blinked first.
I stepped back. He didn’t move at all.
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The third night, I filmed it.
When I replayed the video, everything looked normal.
But when I looked back at the mirror in real time, he was already halfway through a grin I hadn’t started yet.
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That’s when I stopped looking at mirrors.
I covered the bathroom one with a towel. Avoided the hallway’s reflective photo frames. I even disabled the selfie camera on my phone. But reflections are sneaky — they live in spoons, windows, glass doors, even in the shine of a black TV screen.
He was always there.
Watching.
Closer every day.
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He looked exactly like me. Same scar on the jaw. Same birthmark near the temple. But it was the energy — the way he wore my face like a costume. A little too controlled. A little too confident.
And he was starting to smile a lot more.
Not in a friendly way. Not mocking. Just calm. Like he knew something I didn’t.
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I called my brother.
He listened, half-concerned, and told me I needed rest.
I wasn’t sleeping.
He said to get outside, clear my head.
I tried. I really did.
But when I passed a store window downtown, I caught a glimpse of myself standing still while I kept walking.
That was the last time I left the apartment.
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Time got strange.
Days blurred.
I turned every mirror face-down or threw them away.
I stopped brushing my hair just to avoid looking in the chrome toaster.
I even covered the microwave with black tape.
But he still found me.
In the puddle by the sink.
In the dark screen of my phone.
Even in my eyes when I walked by a glass door too quickly.
And every time, he was closer.
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Then, one night, he spoke.
Not through the mirror.
From behind it.
“You’re tired, aren’t you?”
I froze.
“You don’t have to keep pretending. I can take it from here.”
My body went cold.
He wasn’t mimicking anymore.
He was preparing.
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The next morning, I woke up to find the bathroom mirror perfectly hung on the wall.
I hadn’t put it back.
The wall had been bare for a week — but there it was. Clean. Centered. Waiting.
And so was he.
He stood there smiling, while I stood still.
He waved first.
I didn’t wave back.
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I whispered, “What do you want?”
He mouthed something. Slowly. Deliberately.
“Your turn is over.”
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Now I’m writing this down. It’s 11:49 PM. Midnight feels like the end — or maybe the beginning.
He’s behind the mirror again. I can feel him pacing. Smiling.
Practicing.
He wants my place.
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If this post gets published…
If you see someone tomorrow who looks like me, talks like me, acts just a bit too perfect — it isn’t me.
Because I’m still in here.
Behind the glass.
Trapped.
Watching.
And hoping you’ll notice before it’s too late.
About the Creator
Muhammad Hakimi
Writing stories of growth, challenge, and resilience.
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The thumbnail isn’t look scary but when i read the story 😅