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The Last Stop

Some trains are meant to go nowhere…

By Parth BharatvanshiPublished about a year ago 3 min read
The Last Stop
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The train rolled into the empty station late one foggy night. Olivia boarded it with a shiver, grateful to be inside and away from the unsettling silence outside. The last few stops had been desolate, with no one in sight, and the entire station seemed swallowed by mist.

She had taken this late-night train many times before, but something was different tonight. The air felt colder, stale, as if it hadn’t been breathed in for a long time. She looked around the compartment and noticed something odd—every passenger seemed to be staring straight ahead, unmoving, silent. No one blinked. No one shifted in their seat.

As the train lurched forward, Olivia felt a sudden, inexplicable fear. She reached for her phone to distract herself, but it showed no signal. Odd. She looked up, and to her shock, one of the passengers—the man in the dark suit across from her—was staring directly at her now, his eyes wide and unblinking. His mouth was set in a strange, tight smile that seemed almost too wide, too forced.

The train sped on, its wheels clicking rhythmically. Olivia tried to calm herself, telling herself it was all in her mind. But when she looked out the window, she noticed something chilling: the scenery outside wasn’t changing. The same trees, the same fog, the same stretch of track, looping over and over again. They were going in circles.

“Excuse me,” she whispered to the man in the suit, forcing a smile. “Is this train… stuck?”

The man didn’t reply, his eyes still fixated on her, the eerie grin stretching even wider. She looked around, realizing that more of the passengers were now looking her way, their eyes just as hollow, just as blank.

Panicking, she rushed to the front of the train, hoping to find the conductor. The further she walked, the more passengers she saw—each one sitting motionless, each one staring straight ahead with that same hollow look. She noticed something else, too: every passenger seemed slightly faded, like an old photograph left too long in the sun.

She finally reached the conductor’s compartment and banged on the door. “Hello? Is anyone there?”

The door slowly creaked open, and she saw him—a tall, thin figure in a conductor’s uniform, his back turned to her. She felt a surge of relief. “Sir, I think something is wrong. We’re just going in circles!”

The conductor turned around, and her relief turned to terror. His face was devoid of any features—a smooth, blank slate where eyes, nose, and mouth should be. He lifted one long, pale finger to where his mouth might have been, a silent warning.

“Shhh.”

The compartment grew colder, and the lights flickered as the train suddenly stopped. Olivia stumbled, her heart racing, and looked back at the passengers. They were all standing now, their hollow eyes staring at her, moving as one toward her in a slow, synchronized shuffle.

“No!” she cried, pushing past them, stumbling back to her seat. She looked out the window and saw that they had stopped at another station. But this one was darker, older, covered in shadows that writhed like living things. And standing on the platform was a woman… a woman who looked exactly like her.

Olivia felt her heart drop. The other version of her stood still, dressed in clothes she hadn’t worn in years, a blank expression on her face, eyes lifeless.

“What… What is this?” she whispered, backing away, looking desperately for an exit. But the passengers were closing in, their eyes empty and their hands reaching out.

Suddenly, the other “Olivia” outside the window began to move, raising her hand in a slow wave, her lips forming words that Olivia couldn’t hear. But she understood them anyway.

“Your stop has come. Leave… so I can take your place.”

The train doors opened with a slow hiss, and as she was pulled toward the platform by unseen forces, Olivia’s scream echoed through the station. The passengers watched in silence as the doors closed, and the train lurched forward once more.

In the last moments before the train pulled away, the woman on the platform—the new Olivia—turned to face the train, her eyes now blank, joining the crowd of silent passengers on the endless, ghostly journey to nowhere.

Thank you for reading The Last Stop. If this tale of the unknown left you with chills, please hit the like button and share it with fellow horror lovers. And remember… not every journey is meant to end where it started.

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Parth Bharatvanshi

Parth Bharatvanshi—passionate about crafting compelling stories on business, health, technology, and self-improvement, delivering content that resonates and drives insights.

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