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The Last Knock:

Some doors are better left closed, because not every knock comes from the living.

By syedPublished 4 months ago 3 min read
The Last Knock:
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It was late evening in a quiet mountain village. The streets were empty, the wind was sharp, and the sound of the river rolled steadily through the valley. At the far edge of the road stood a small house made of wood and stone. Inside lived a young man named Imran. He was used to being alone at night, but that evening felt different. The silence seemed heavier, and the darkness carried a strange weight, almost as if it was aware of him.

Imran lit his lantern and placed it on the table. Its soft glow pushed the shadows back, but only just enough. He picked up an old book and tried to read, letting the words distract him from the strange chill crawling through the room. But halfway through a sentence, he froze. A sound echoed from the front door.

Knock… knock… knock.

It was soft, slow, and steady. Imran raised his head, startled. Visitors were rare in the village after dark. For a moment, he thought it might be a neighbor, or perhaps a traveler looking for shelter. Slowly, he stood and walked to the door. The wood creaked as he unlatched it.

But when he opened the door, no one was there. The road stretched out into the night, empty. Only the wind moved through the trees.

Imran frowned, whispered to himself, “Must be the wind.” He shut the door firmly and returned to his chair.

Minutes later, the knock returned. Knock… knock… knock. This time it was heavier, slower, and more deliberate. Imran felt his chest tighten. He stood again, walked quickly to the door, and opened it wide.

Once more, the doorstep was empty. The night air bit against his skin. The lantern’s glow spilled only a few steps onto the ground, but nothing moved in the shadows. The silence pressed on his ears.

He shut the door again, but unease filled him. Sitting back down, he tried to steady his breath. He told himself over and over that it was nothing, just wood shifting in the cold or branches brushing against the wall. But then the sound came back, louder.

KNOCK… KNOCK… KNOCK.

The knocks shook the frame. The lantern rattled on the table.

Imran froze, unable to move. His hands trembled. He stared at the door, his thoughts racing. What if the sound wasn’t from outside at all? What if it came from inside the walls, or even beneath the floor?

He forced himself to rise. Step by step, he walked toward the door again. His heart pounded so loudly he thought the whole house might hear it. He leaned forward, pressed his ear against the wood.

At first, silence. Then suddenly—another knock, harder than before, so strong it rattled the hinges. Imran stumbled backward, his body shaking.

Still, he gathered courage. With trembling fingers, he unlatched the door and pulled it open wide. The night waited silently. The path was empty again. But this time, something caught his attention.

Just at the edge of the lantern’s glow, he saw footprints. Bare, wet, and glistening in the dirt. They led from the direction of the river straight to his doorstep.

But the footprints stopped at the door. No signs of anyone leaving. No second trail going back.

Imran’s mouth went dry. His stomach twisted. Whoever had knocked was no longer outside. The thought chilled him more than the cold air.

He turned slowly, his lantern flickering weakly. His own shadow stretched unnaturally long across the wooden floor. For a moment, everything was silent. Then, from behind him, a whisper brushed against his ear.

“You finally opened.”

The lantern went out.


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Reflection

True horror is not always about monsters with faces or creatures in the night. Sometimes, it hides in the smallest of things—a knock on a door when no one is there, a whisper in an empty room, or wet footprints that stop where they should not. Stories like these stay with us because they touch the deepest part of our imagination.

We may laugh them off in daylight, saying they are only tales, but when the night is quiet and the world is dark, we remember them. Maybe that is the real power of horror. It does not need to show itself fully; it only needs to make us wonder what might be waiting just beyond the door. And sometimes, the fear is not in the knock itself—it is in the silence that follows.

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syed


Dreamer, storyteller & life explorer | Turning everyday moments into inspiration | Words that spark curiosity, hope & smiles | Join me on this journey of growth and creativity 🌿💫

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  • Zidane4 months ago

    Knock… knock… knock. How are you today :)

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