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The House That Watched

Some Walls Remember Everything

By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 10 hours ago 3 min read

The house at the end of Willow Lane had been empty for nearly twenty years. Its windows were dark, its garden overgrown, and its gate hung crooked on rusted hinges. Children dared each other to touch its door before running away in panic. Adults avoided speaking about it altogether. Rumors drifted through the town like cold wind—strange noises at night, shadows moving behind curtains, lights flickering in rooms without electricity. But no one had ever confirmed anything. The house simply existed, silent and waiting.

When the Ahmed family moved into town, they did not know its history. The property was affordable, spacious, and far larger than anything they could have purchased elsewhere. Despite a few cautious warnings from neighbors, they decided to buy it. “It’s just an old building,” Mr. Ahmed insisted. “People are afraid of what they don’t understand.”

The first few days passed without incident. Mrs. Ahmed cleaned layers of dust from shelves and cupboards. Their daughter, Mariam, chose the upstairs bedroom overlooking the backyard. Their son, Hamid, explored every corner with curiosity. The house creaked occasionally, but that was expected in a structure so old.

On the fourth night, Mariam woke to a faint sound. It was not loud enough to alarm her, but it was persistent—a soft tapping, as though someone lightly knocked against her wall. She sat up, listening carefully. The sound stopped. Convinced it was tree branches brushing the exterior, she lay back down. Moments later, the tapping resumed, slower this time, almost rhythmic. Tap. Tap. Tap. Her heart quickened.

The next morning, she mentioned it at breakfast. Her parents dismissed it kindly. “Old houses settle,” her mother explained. Hamid laughed and suggested it might be a bird trapped in the attic. Yet that evening, as the family gathered in the living room, the chandelier flickered twice before stabilizing. A sudden chill passed through the room despite the closed windows.

Over the following week, the disturbances grew stranger. Doors that were firmly shut creaked open. Footsteps echoed faintly along the upstairs hallway when no one was there. One night, Mr. Ahmed found every kitchen cabinet open, though he clearly remembered closing them before bed. He checked for intruders, but nothing was disturbed or stolen. It was as if the house itself were restless.

The turning point came when Hamid discovered an old photograph hidden behind loose wallpaper in the hallway. The image showed a family standing on the same porch decades earlier. Their expressions were serious, almost tense. On the back of the photo, faded handwriting read: “We never felt alone.”

That night, the tapping returned—louder and closer. This time, it came from inside the walls. The sound traveled from Mariam’s room down toward the staircase, as if something moved within the structure itself. The lights flickered violently before plunging the house into darkness. In the silence that followed, a low whisper seemed to pass through the corridor—not clear words, but an unmistakable presence.

Fear finally replaced denial. The Ahmed family gathered in the living room, flashlights trembling in their hands. The air felt heavy, charged with unseen attention. It was not the chaos of a storm or the threat of an intruder. It was something quieter, more unsettling—the sense of being observed.

By morning, they had made their decision. Some places, they realized, carry histories that refuse to fade. The house had not attacked them, nor caused visible harm. But its constant awareness, its silent watchfulness, was enough. They moved out within days.

Years later, Willow Lane remained unchanged. The house still stood at the end of the road, windows dark, garden wild. New families occasionally considered buying it, drawn by its size and price. Yet somehow, deals always fell through at the last moment.

Neighbors would sometimes glance toward it at dusk and feel a strange sensation—as though something behind those dusty windows was patiently waiting. Watching. Remembering.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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