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The Hollow Watcher

Some eyes are meant to be seen, others are meant to never blink.

By Parth BharatvanshiPublished about a year ago 4 min read
The Hollow Watcher
Photo by Malik Earnest on Unsplash

Lena had always considered herself a skeptic. She didn’t believe in ghosts or spirits, and certainly not in the strange legends her grandmother often told her about the old mansion at the end of the street. But when she inherited the mansion after her grandmother’s passing, she felt obligated to move in. The old woman had left no instructions, no will, just a set of keys, and a cryptic letter that simply read, “Be careful with the eyes.”

The mansion was everything she had imagined—a sprawling, decaying relic of another time, with peeling wallpaper, creaky floors, and an oppressive air that seemed to weigh down on her from the moment she stepped inside. Lena had no intention of staying long. She planned to sell the house, but something about it felt wrong. Every corner seemed to hold a secret, every room a whisper.

One evening, while exploring the attic, Lena found it—a painting, hidden beneath an old, moth-eaten blanket. It was an oil painting, framed in gold, depicting a man with hollow eyes. His face was gaunt, his skin stretched tight over his skull, and his expression was one of torment. But it was the eyes—empty, dark pits—staring directly at her, even though she had not yet touched the canvas.

Her heart skipped a beat, and for a moment, she thought she had imagined the way the eyes seemed to flicker. But no. The longer she stared, the more she felt the weight of those eyes, the more she felt like they were watching her. A shiver crawled down her spine.

Lena shrugged it off. "Just a painting," she whispered, trying to convince herself that her grandmother’s old superstitions had no place in her life.

That night, as Lena lay in bed, she couldn’t shake the feeling that she wasn’t alone. She lay perfectly still, staring at the shadows cast by the moonlight, her breath shallow. From somewhere deep in the mansion, she could hear the soft sound of something scraping against the walls—slow, deliberate. It echoed through the empty halls, as if something were moving, just out of sight.

She pulled the covers up over her head, trying to block out the noise. But it wasn’t just the scraping that unnerved her. It was the feeling—the overwhelming sensation that someone, or something, was watching her. The hairs on her neck stood on end.

It wasn’t until the next morning that Lena finally made her way back up to the attic. She knew she had to get rid of the painting—it was disturbing her, and the feeling of being watched was becoming unbearable. But when she approached the painting, her breath caught. It was gone.

Panic surged through her. She searched the attic, but there was no trace of the painting. She checked the other rooms in the house, but it had vanished completely. She stood in the middle of the room, her pulse racing, her heart pounding in her ears. It was as if the house had swallowed it whole.

That night, the feeling of being watched intensified. Lena no longer dared to sleep. Every creak of the floorboards, every shift of the house made her jump. She felt a cold breeze, even though the windows were shut. The air felt thick with anticipation.

It wasn’t until the fourth night that it happened.

Lena had been sitting in the drawing room, staring at the empty space where the painting had been. She couldn’t explain why she was so fixated on it. The absence of the painting was worse than its presence. Then, she saw it—just out of the corner of her eye, a flash of movement. She turned quickly, but there was nothing there.

Her heart raced. The room felt colder, the shadows deeper. The clock on the mantel ticked, each second louder than the last. She stood up, the urge to leave the room overwhelming her, but as she reached for the door, the lights flickered. And there, in the darkness, she saw them—the hollow eyes.

They weren’t on the wall, or in a painting, but in the mirrors. They were there, staring at her from the reflective surfaces of the room—every mirror, every window. And they were moving closer.

Lena staggered backward, her legs weak, but the eyes followed her. They didn’t blink, didn’t move, but they were closer now—closer than they had ever been. She could hear them—faint whispers, like a chorus of voices echoing from the depths of the house.

The house seemed to shift. The walls closed in, the air thickened, and the whispers grew louder. Lena backed into the corner, clutching at her chest, gasping for air. She could feel the weight of their gaze, their unblinking stare piercing through her very soul.

Then, from the shadows, a figure emerged. It was tall, its skin stretched tight over its bones, its face hollow and gaunt. But it was the eyes—those eyes. They were the same eyes as the ones in the painting, the ones in the mirrors. They were hers.

Lena screamed as the figure reached for her, its bony hand grasping her wrist with an icy grip. And as it did, she realized the horrifying truth. The eyes were not meant to watch. They were meant to take.

The house had claimed her. She was never meant to leave. The hollow watcher had finally found its prey.

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Parth Bharatvanshi

Parth Bharatvanshi—passionate about crafting compelling stories on business, health, technology, and self-improvement, delivering content that resonates and drives insights.

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