The Forsaken Twenty
A Reckoning in the Cursed Woods of Maine

In the unyielding heart of Maine, beneath a sky that sneered with a lethal cocktail of terror and longing, Lena was ensnared by a suffocating, twisted fog. The mist snaked around barren, skeletal trees like desperate, reaching arms of vengeful phantoms, while the wind exhaled a nauseating stench of decay—a reeking perfume that repulsed and seduced all at once. Abandoned by the villagers for generations, these cursed woods—where shadows bleed into the earth and murmur ancestral sorrows—dared Lena, her defiant curiosity clashing with a primordial terror, to challenge their dire warnings.
Deep within the rotting forest lay a key, buried beneath the black, gnarled roots of an ancient oak whose creaking limbs groaned beneath the burden of corruption. Its surface, slick with an unspeakable residue, pulsed like a living, malignant heart beneath her trembling grasp. Twisting symbols writhed across it, as if the key itself were locked in an eternal battle between obliteration and rebirth, despair and hope. In a fleeting moment under the pale, accusatory moonlight, it seemed to curl into a smile of spite and seductive menace—forcing Lena to doubt every step she took.
Her heart pounded not merely with fear but with a voracious hunger steeped in regret and inner torment—a craving forged by a soul splintered by conflicting wills. The moment her fingers closed around the icy metal, a deep, disquieting resonance stirred beneath the surface of the earth. The ancient trees groaned in defiant protest, while the very ground writhed as if recoiling from the oncoming cataclysm. Soon, insidious whispers—both sultry and malevolent—urged her deeper into the labyrinth of twisted timber.
They led her further until she beheld a chest, half-swallowed by fetid muck and strangled by writhing vines that pulsed like the veins of some long-forgotten abomination. The air became a suffocating shroud of decay and a silent terror that gnawed at her conscience. As Lena knelt before that cursed relic, every fiber of her being fought the instinct to flee against the relentless lure of forbidden secrets. She knew a horror beyond imagining lurked within, yet felt an agonizing pull more potent than desire—a rift deep within that she could neither control nor understand.
The key slid into the lock with a revolting click, and as she turned it, a low, wet moan burst forth—from not merely the lament of the earth, but the anguished cry of a tormented soul. The chest creaked open like the gaping maw of an ancient beast, unleashing a wave of malodorous darkness that twisted her stomach in knots. This darkness was no simple void of light; it was a virulent, malevolent force that stoked both her abject terror and a perverse, gnawing curiosity.
From that unfathomable abyss, twenty monstrous figures emerged—twisted, broken parodies of humanity whose very forms defied nature’s laws. Their grotesque bodies convulsed in unnatural terror, faces marred by shriveled, peeling skin strained over jagged bones. Hollow eyes, void of mercy and fatally insatiable, glittered with an appetite that shattered her inner resolve. Crawling forth like ravenous maggots rising from a desecrated corpse, each emaciated limb tapping a foreboding rhythm on stone, Lena was caught in a savage internal battle: the desperate urge to understand clashing with the instinct to flee.
One creature slithered forward—a revolting amalgamation of man and beast, its features grotesquely shifting from human gentleness to animalistic savagery. With a void where a nose should be and a permanent grimace carved into its misshapen face, it whispered her name in tones that were both intimately beckoning and soul-chilling—a siren’s call born of a thousand shattered lives. Its voice, layered with ancient sorrows and screams long buried, broke through Lena’s defenses, leaving her both haunted and magnetically drawn.
Not long after, another creature advanced—its spine shattered and ribs a macabre lattice of decay, yet it moved with an unholy speed that belied its mutilated form. Every grotesque bend and impossible joint showcased a nightmarish agility as it closed in relentlessly. Then its mouth unhinged in a bloated, monstrous bloom, revealing rows of serrated teeth glistening with corrosive, black bile—a sight that plunged Lena into a chasm of abject revulsion and an unwilling, maddening fascination.
Her heart thundered in a frenzied protest, yet her body lay paralyzed, locked in the throes of an internal war as eerie, insidious whispers invaded her mind, burrowing into every thought and demanding submission. Every fiber of her being screamed for escape, yet a dark, inescapable part of her—one that she could neither repudiate nor fully embrace—drew her hopelessly into their beckoning.
Not far from this forbidden forest, beyond the dark memory of despair, lay a village—a village soon to be ravaged by unbridled terror. Then came the screams: a cacophony of unholy terror that melded with the inner tumult within her. The creatures surged forth like a tidal wave of living nightmare, each deformed embodiment an exemplar of twisted brutality and fiendish delight as they descended upon the helpless hamlet. Walls trembled under their shrill, maniacal laughter—a sound that clawed at the fragile remnants of sanity. Homes crumbled beneath the relentless assault, while the bloodcurdling cries of children were swallowed by the encroaching darkness, leaving behind only pools of crimson and fragments of shattered bones. What was once a vibrant community transformed into an unholy massacre, every breath saturated with the choking stench of decay and despair.
In the ruins of a desecrated chapel stood Father Guiseppie—a spectral figure draped in endless sorrow, his face etched with grief and resignation. Clutching a silver crucifix that trembled like the final ember of a lost hope, he spoke in a hoarse, fated tone.
“You’ve unleashed them,” he rasped, words soaked in abject despair. “The Forsaken Twenty were sealed away for a reason—your reason. Only the blood of the one who set them free can imprison them once more.”
His declaration hammered into Lena’s trembling soul, each syllable intensifying the relentless internal strife that rent her very being.
A crushing weight of realization slammed down upon Lena, a suffocating truth that the cost of her reckless defiance was more monstrous than she could ever fathom. Even as she yearned to dissolve into oblivion, an unseen, inexorable force dragged her toward a fate as nightmarish as the creatures themselves. Outside the chapel, the abominations gathered, their bloodlit eyes glowing fiercely in the darkness, their contorted forms writhing in a deranged, grotesque ballet of insatiable hunger and unending agony. Their murmurs coiled through the night—a maddening, endless dirge that dangled the promise of both oblivion and eternal damnation.
With trembling, conflicted hands, she accepted a dagger from Father Guiseppie—a blade so cold it seared like the essence of death incarnate. The monsters inched ever closer, their fetid breath and clawed scrapes against the ancient walls echoing a relentless dirge of impending ruin. In that excruciating, harrowing moment, Lena recognized with searing clarity that she stood at the very crossroads of redemption and damnation, every instinct locked in a cataclysmic internal war.
And so, with her splintered heart overwhelmed by indecision and despair, she plunged the dagger deep into her chest. A visceral scream ripped from her throat—not solely her own, but an entire chorus of accumulated torment and anguish spanning centuries of hidden agony. In that agonizing instant, as a piercing light exploded from within, even the abhorrent invaders recoiled in a discordant outcry of despair and delirium. Their shrieks and frantic, flailing limbs were whirled back into the abyss, ensnared by spectral chains that coiled relentlessly around them, until the infernal chest clanged shut with a final, resounding thud.
Yet, the horror was far from extinguished. Lena’s spilled blood seeped into the ravenous soil like bitter, unrelenting regret, while the key—now fractured beyond repair—tumbled into the murky depths of the sludge. The villagers, left in a state of stunned, haunting silence, would forever remain oblivious to the true depth of her transgression and the harrowing toll it exacted. The chest was reburied, its sinister secrets sealed away once more, but the broken key lingered—a grim promise of unresolved torment.
For the Forsaken Twenty were never meant to vanish entirely, and neither would the unyielding, maddening whispers that would forever haunt Lena’s every tortured, conflicted thought.
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The Poe in me relished every word of this story. The Hemmingway in me, on the other hand, struggled a bit. I did love the way you write and especially the word choice, but around the middle/end it started to become repetitive, and dragged a bit. There were many places where you described the same thing with two words separated by a comma that I believe would have only needed one. At the beginning, you use this same technique but use opposite words/meanings and it helps the narrative. But again towards the end, you do the same thing but with similar words, and it seems to lose the narrative feeling that the beginning of the story had. Overall, excellent story. Will be reading more of your work soon!
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