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The Echo of Her Name

Some names should never be called.

By Parth BharatvanshiPublished about a year ago 4 min read
The Echo of Her Name
Photo by Erik Müller on Unsplash

It started with a whisper, faint and distant. Just the softest murmur of a name, one that seemed to be pulled from the shadows, lingering at the edge of consciousness. But in that moment, Sara didn’t think much of it. The old house she had moved into was isolated, perched on a hill, surrounded by thick woods. It was perfect for starting fresh—her new life, her new beginning. No one to bother her, no one to disturb the quiet.

She had always been a skeptic, never one to believe in superstitions or ghost stories. But then, it happened again. That whisper. And this time, it sounded closer.

“Sara…”

She froze, the hairs on the back of her neck prickling. It was as if the voice was calling her from just beyond the door, coaxing her to step into the dark, into the unknown. She dismissed it. She had been alone for a few days now, and the silence of the house could play tricks on the mind.

The first few days in the house had been a whirlwind of unpacking, settling in, and exploring the dusty corners of the old place. It was a sprawling mansion, full of old furniture covered in sheets, old portraits with eyes that seemed to follow her, and creaky wooden floors that groaned beneath her feet. But it was the attic that intrigued her most. There was something about it—an aura, a pull that she couldn’t quite explain.

She had tried to ignore it, but the whispering persisted. At night, it became louder, more insistent. And it wasn’t just her imagination. She was sure of it. The voice wasn’t her own. It was soft, melodic, almost soothing, but it carried a chill that froze her heart.

One evening, unable to ignore it any longer, Sara ventured up to the attic. The stairs creaked beneath her feet, groaning as if protesting her presence. The door to the attic was locked, but she found a key hidden in an old drawer—another mystery left by the house’s previous owner. She opened the door, and the smell of mildew and dust filled her lungs. The attic was dim, the only light coming from a small window that let in the fading twilight.

It wasn’t the darkness that disturbed her, though. It was the old rocking chair in the center of the room. The one that rocked slowly back and forth, as though someone had just left it. Sara’s breath caught in her throat. The chair stopped moving when she stepped into the room, but the faintest echo of a song lingered in the air—a lullaby, sweet and haunting.

“Sara… come closer…”

The voice called again, and this time, it was unmistakable. It was calling her name, the same name her mother used to sing when she was a child, when she was safe and warm in her arms. She stepped toward the chair, heart pounding, her steps hesitant but somehow drawn, like a moth to the flame. Her hand reached out, brushing the worn fabric of the chair.

And then she saw it.

A small, framed photograph sat on the dusty floor beside it. It was a picture of a woman, pale and fragile, with hollow eyes that seemed to stare right through her. Her lips were curved into a soft smile, but there was an undeniable sadness in her expression. A name was written on the back in faded ink: Evelyn.

The name hit her like a wave, crashing over her. She knew that name. It was her grandmother’s, a woman who had died when Sara was only a child. Sara had never seen a photograph of her before, and yet, the resemblance was striking. The woman in the picture looked just like her, but older. Older than she had ever been.

She felt an icy hand brush her shoulder, and she spun around, heart racing. But the room was empty. Just the chair, still rocking softly in the corner.

Her breath came in short gasps, her pulse thundering in her ears. Something was wrong. She could feel it now—the oppressive weight of the house, the way the walls seemed to close in around her. It wasn’t just the house that was watching her. It was something else. Something she couldn’t see, but could feel, deep in her bones.

The whispering began again, louder now, rising in intensity until it became a chant. Over and over, the voice called her name, reverberating through the walls, echoing from the corners of the room.

“Sara... Sara... Sara...”

Her eyes darted around the attic, searching for the source. The photo on the floor was gone. The chair had stopped rocking. But the voice, the voice was still there. It was inside her head now, a persistent echo that wouldn’t stop.

“You are mine... you are mine... you are the one...”

It was then that Sara saw it—an old mirror, cracked and tarnished, standing in the far corner of the attic. She hadn’t noticed it before. The reflection staring back at her was wrong. It was her face, but twisted, distorted. Her eyes glowed with an unnatural light, and the air around her shimmered with a dark energy that made her blood run cold.

“Come to me… Sara… Come to me, and you will never be alone again.”

Without thinking, she stumbled backward, the mirror falling to the floor with a deafening crash. The reflection disappeared in an instant, but the voice lingered, still calling to her, still waiting.

Sara turned to run, but the door to the attic slammed shut, trapping her inside. The walls began to pulse, thumping like a heartbeat, and the house seemed to growl in the darkness. The temperature dropped, her breath now visible in the cold air. Her heart raced as the whispering turned to a deafening scream.

And then, for the first time, the voice spoke not just her name—but something else. A warning.

“Sara... you’ve been chosen.”

Thank you for reading The Echo of Her Name. If this tale left you unsettled, don’t forget to hit the like button and share it with those who dare to listen. Who knows—maybe the next name you hear whispered in the dark will be your own.

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About the Creator

Parth Bharatvanshi

Parth Bharatvanshi—passionate about crafting compelling stories on business, health, technology, and self-improvement, delivering content that resonates and drives insights.

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