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The Devil's True Name: A Shocking Twist on Good & Evil

When Lila makes a deal with the devil to save her brother, she uncovers a shocking truth—about him, and about herself

By unknown writerPublished 12 months ago 6 min read

Lila sat on the cold linoleum floor of the hospital waiting room, her knees pulled tightly to her chest. Her eyes were red and swollen from crying, but tears no longer came. She felt hollow, like all the life had been drained out of her. Across the hall, doctors rushed in and out of Sam’s room, their faces grim as they whispered about his chances.

Her little brother—only twelve years old—had been in a coma for three days after a devastating car accident. The driver who hit them had fled the scene, leaving Lila to piece together what remained of their shattered lives. With no insurance and mounting medical bills, she knew there was no way she could afford to keep him alive much longer. Every option had been exhausted; every prayer unanswered.

Desperation clawed at her insides as she stared blankly at the wall. “I’d give anything,” she muttered under her breath, her voice barely audible over the hum of fluorescent lights. “Anything to save him.”

The air around her seemed to grow colder, though not unpleasantly so. A faint scent of sulfur wafted through the sterile environment, mingling oddly with the antiseptic smell of the hospital. At first, Lila thought it was just her imagination—a trick of exhaustion—but then she heard it: a low chuckle, soft yet unmistakable.

She turned sharply, scanning the empty corridor. No one was there. Still, the laughter lingered, echoing faintly in her ears. Then, stepping out of the shadows near the vending machine, appeared a man dressed in a sleek black suit. His presence was both magnetic and unsettling, as if he didn’t quite belong in this world but commanded it nonetheless.

He smiled at her, revealing teeth that gleamed unnaturally white. His amber eyes glinted with mischief, and his posture radiated confidence. He looked like someone who always got what he wanted—and enjoyed watching others squirm to give it to him.

“You’d give anything ?” he repeated, tilting his head slightly. His voice was smooth, almost melodic, but carried an undertone of danger.

Lila hesitated, her heart pounding. This wasn’t real—it couldn’t be. Yet something about him felt undeniable, as if he existed outside the boundaries of logic. Desperation overrode fear. “Yes,” she said firmly, her voice shaking but resolute. “Anything.”

The man’s grin widened. “Very well. Your soul in exchange for your brother’s life. Do we have a deal?”

Her stomach churned at the words, but she forced herself to nod. “I accept.”

He extended a hand, his fingers unnaturally long and elegant. Hesitating only briefly, Lila reached out and shook it. The moment their palms touched, a surge of heat coursed through her body, leaving her breathless. When she opened her eyes again, the man was gone—and somehow, she knew her brother would live.

Chapter 2: The Price of Salvation

True to his word, Sam began recovering almost immediately. Within hours, his vitals stabilized, and by morning, he was awake and asking for pancakes. Doctors were baffled, attributing his miraculous recovery to some unexplainable phenomenon. For weeks, Lila tried to convince herself it had all been coincidence—or divine intervention. But deep down, she knew better.

Then came the dreams.

Every night, she found herself standing in a desolate landscape bathed in perpetual twilight. Jagged mountains loomed in the distance, and the ground beneath her feet crackled faintly, as if made of glass. Shadows stretched unnaturally long, even though there was no sun to cast them. And always, somewhere in the distance, she could hear whispers—soft, indistinct murmurs that seemed to beckon her closer.

By day, strange occurrences plagued her waking hours. Shadows followed her everywhere, stretching unnaturally long even under bright sunlight. Mirrors became her enemy; sometimes her reflection moved slightly out of sync with her, and other times it smiled when she didn’t. Once, while brushing her hair, she swore she saw horns sprouting from her forehead—but blinked, and they were gone.

Sam noticed her growing unease. “Are you okay, Lil?” he asked one evening as they sat together on the couch. “You’ve been acting weird lately.”

“I’m fine,” she lied, forcing a smile. “Just tired.”

But she wasn’t fine. Something was wrong—terribly wrong. And she knew exactly who to blame.

Chapter 3: Confrontation

Unable to endure the torment any longer, Lila returned to the abandoned church where she’d made the deal. It stood on the outskirts of town, its stained-glass windows cracked and its pews covered in dust. She lit a single candle and called out into the emptiness.

“I know you’re here!” she shouted, her voice trembling with anger. “Show yourself!”

A low chuckle echoed through the halls, sending shivers down her spine. From the shadows emerged the man in the black suit, leaning casually against a crumbling pillar. His amber eyes glimmered with amusement as he regarded her.

“You’ve been avoiding me,” he said, his tone playful yet edged with something darker.

“What did you do to me?” Lila demanded, clutching her arms tightly.

“I gave you exactly what you asked for,” he replied smoothly. “Your brother lives because of your sacrifice. Now it’s time to pay the price.”

“What price?” she snapped. “You said my soul!”

He smirked. “Oh, I never specified which soul.”

Before she could react, the ground beneath her feet cracked open, plunging her into darkness.

Chapter 4: Limbo

When Lila woke, she wasn’t in the church anymore—or anywhere familiar. She stood in a vast, desolate plain bathed in perpetual twilight. The sky churned with storm clouds, and jagged mountains loomed in the distance. Standing before her was the man in the black suit, but now his appearance shifted subtly. His once-charming demeanor was replaced by an aura of quiet authority, his amber eyes glowing brighter.

“Where am I?” Lila asked, her voice trembling.

“This is Limbo,” he said simply. “A place between worlds.”

“Why am I here? What do you want from me?”

Instead of answering directly, he gestured behind her. Turning slowly, Lila saw a figure approaching—a young woman who looked eerily familiar. As the woman stepped closer, realization hit Lila like a freight train.

It was her . Or rather, it was the version of herself she remembered before the accident.

Because suddenly, everything clicked.

Plot Twist: The Shocking Revelation

The man watched silently as Lila pieced together the horrifying truth.

“You’re not real,” she whispered, staring at her doppelgänger. “I’m…dead.”

Her double nodded sadly. “You died in the crash with Sam. You pushed him out of the way and took the full impact yourself.”

“No…” Lila staggered back, shaking her head. “That’s not possible. I’ve been alive this whole time! I saved him!”

“That’s because I kept you tethered to the mortal plane,” the man interjected. “You begged me to save him, so I granted your wish. But there was a cost—you became my agent, tasked with guiding lost souls to their final resting place.”

Lila’s mind raced. The whispers, the shadows, the eerie reflections—it all made sense now. She hadn’t been living; she’d been haunting her own life, unaware of her true nature.

“But why didn’t you tell me?” she demanded, turning to him.

“Would you have believed me?” he countered calmly. “Humans fear what they don’t understand. They call me the devil, the adversary, the bringer of chaos. But I am merely a guide, ensuring balance between life and death. Without me, souls like yours would be trapped forever.”

Chapter 5: Redemption or Damnation?

Now faced with the truth, Lila had a choice: continue serving as his agent, helping others transition peacefully, or refuse and risk being cast adrift in Limbo for eternity.

As she grappled with her decision, the man offered one final revelation.

“By the way,” he said softly, “my name isn’t Lucifer. It’s Azrael—the Angel of Death.”

And with that, he vanished, leaving Lila alone with her thoughts—and the knowledge that sometimes, the devil isn’t evil at all. Sometimes, he’s just misunderstood.

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