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👁️ Shadows in the Old House

Shadows in the Old House

By ZidanePublished 4 months ago • 3 min read
👁️ Shadows in the Old House
Photo by Veronika Galkina on Unsplash

The night was colder than usual. 🌑 The wind screamed through the broken windows of the abandoned house at the edge of town. Everyone said it was haunted, but nobody dared to go close.

Except for Lena, a curious middle school girl who loved mysteries more than anything.

Her friends warned her:

“Don’t go there. The old house eats people. They say shadows walk at night.”

But Lena didn’t believe in ghost stories. She thought it was all made up to scare children. One stormy evening, when the moon was hidden and thunder cracked the sky, Lena decided to prove everyone wrong.

She walked alone, flashlight in hand, toward the dark silhouette of the house.

🌫️ The Terrible Beginning

he moment she stepped inside, the air turned heavy.

It felt as if someone invisible was watching her. The floor creaked under her feet, and the smell of dust and rot made her choke.

Her flashlight flickered.

On the wall, she saw words scratched deep into the wood:

DO NOT STAY AFTER MIDNIGHT

Her heart pounded. “Who wrote this?” she whispered.

Suddenly, upstairs, she heard a door slam.

Then footsteps.

Slow. Heavy.

Thud… thud… thud…

“Hello? Is someone here?” Lena called.

No answer.

Only the sound of breathing that wasn’t hers.

Her flashlight went out. The house swallowed her in complete darkness.

Something cold brushed her arm. Fingers. Long, bony fingers.

She screamed.

👻 The House of Shadows

Lena ran toward the stairs, but the house changed. Hallways twisted. Doors that led outside now opened to endless black rooms.

Shadows moved on the walls, stretching and bending, though there was no light to cast them. They whispered her name:

“Leeeena… Leeeena…”

Her breath grew sharp. She clutched her backpack, where she always arried her notebook and pencil. Writing made her feel safe, even now.

She pulled it out and scribbled:

“If I don’t make it out, at least someone will find this.”

The whispers grew louder.

The shadows pulled closer.

Faces appeared in the dark—faces of people who had disappeared long ago. Their hollow eyes stared straight at her.

One shadow reached out, clawed and sharp, wrapping around her ankle. She fell to the floor.

“Why me?” she cried. “What do you want from me?”

The answer came in a voice that rattled the walls:

WE WANT YOUR FEAR.

🕯️ A Light in the Darkness

Lena remembered what her dad once told her before he passed away:

“When you’re afraid, remember—fear is only a shadow. Light is always stronger.”

Tears filled her eyes. She whispered, “Light… light…”

Her flashlight was dead. But she had one thing left—her notebook. On the last page, she drew a candle. She pressed hard with her pencil, sketching flames, sketching hope.

And then, the impossible happened.

The drawing glowed. 🔥

A small golden flame rose from the paper, floating in the air like real fire.

The shadows shrieked and recoiled.

“No…” they hissed. “Not the light…”

🌄 The Terrifying Climax

The house shook violently. Furniture flew. The walls bled black liquid.

The shadows screamed as Lena held her glowing notebook high. The little flame grew into a blazing torch, filling the house with warmth and brightness.

The whispers turned into cries. One by one, the faces on the walls melted away. The claws loosened from her ankle.

But the shadows fought back. They swarmed like a storm, trying to swallow her torch of light.

Lena stood tall. “I am not afraid of you! You are only shadows. And I choose the light.”

With a cry, she threw the glowing notebook into the center of the room. It exploded into a brilliant sunburst, tearing through the darkness.

The entire house wailed as the shadows dissolved into smoke.

And then—silence.

🌅 The Best Ending

When Lena opened her eyes, morning sunlight streamed through the broken windows. The house was no longer dark or cold—it was just an old, empty building.

She stepped outside, breathing fresh air, her face warmed by the real sun.

Her friends ran to her, their eyes wide.

“You survived! We thought the house would take you too!”

Lena smiled. “The shadows are gone. They can’t hurt anyone anymore.”

From that day on, the old house was no longer haunted. Children played near it without fear. People repaired its walls, turning it into a community library where kids could read, write, and share stories—just like Lena had.

And Lena? She kept drawing light in her notebooks, reminding herself and everyone else:

👉 “Even in the darkest place, one small flame of courage can chase away all shadows.”

🌟

The story began with terror—the feeling of being lost in shadows, powerless, and alone. But it ended with hope—because courage, light, and love are always stronger than fear.

That is the secret of horror:

Darkness wants you to believe it will last forever.

But it never does.

The light always wins. 🌞

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Zidane

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