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My mother in Law's serpent P1

My mother in law is entertaining dark energies

By Yanda MbaliPublished 3 months ago 3 min read


I'm Asiphile from eastern cape , I'm from a poor background but I managed to find me a girlfriend who's from a rich and authentic family, I remember how long it took her to introduce me to her family because she thought they were expecting a rich man.

My girlfriend's name is nobuhle and she has two younger siblings,( Noluthando and sbu).

The mother welcomed me with open arms, she said to me Welcome son, make yourself at home, so after a month she ordered that I marry her daughter and she will pay for everything and I took the offer and married her because I loved her so much

Two weeks into the marriage I started noticing strange things.
I would wake up with my body all tired, with marks all over my body , one day I woke up and told my wife nobuhle "Babe look at what is happening to my body and I'm all tired ? What is this? And she said "Don't worry my love it's not that bad ,just relax ok, bye babe I'm already late for work" by that time I'm feeling pain and all sort of weird stuff on my body

I would just stay at the house most of the time as I was not working and surprisedly my mother in law has said to me. You don't actually have to work, you need all the energy you could have.

So I would stay in the house with two the two siblings,and me and Noluthando got closer to each other when time went on.

This day we was chilling in the couch just talking and she said to me - you know you different compared to other men my sister brings here.

What do you mean ? How many men has your sister actually brought here?

Then mother-in-law walked in, -hey you two what are you talking about there ?

Nothing mom, I was just telling Asiphile here how lucky we are to have him as our brother in law.- Noluthando

Asiphile can you go help me with some plastics from the car, I bought some groceries -said by my mother in law
And I went to the car.

She called Noluthando to her bedroom - you look like you getting close to that boy and I don like it , remember he is your sister's husband and you know like the rest of your sister's ex husbands he won't last long. So stay far from him


So apparently my mother in law in law has told Noluthando, her younger daughter to stay away from me.
Every morning she and nobuhle my wife would go out for work and return around when it's already dark.

I told my wife it's time we have a baby but she angrily refused - and who do you think will support you when I'm here carrying your child ? She asked?

babe I was going to look for a job though and your mom refused, you head what she said-i said
Then just be happy you here living a luxury life you don't even have to work for - my wife

In morning they left again, I went on to watch TV and Noluthando came down to watch it with me, we were watching some TV reality show and
This time she got closer than expected and we ended up kissing, I stopped and told her - I think this is wrong you are my wife's sister. We should stop.

I like you a lot Asiphile and I can see how my sister is not taking care of you, she's never around -Noluthando.

The temptation was just too much and we ended up having s*x.
We started having our own secret relationship.Noluthando was right, my wife don't give me time.

Some day I found a picture book and I went through it , I saw all pictures of my mother in law but what was shocking was there was only baby pictures of Noluthando and Sbu only, I never came across a picture of my wife.
So I asked Noluthando about it - Hi Noluthando, you Know I was looking through a picture book of your family and to my surprise I never saw a single picture of my wife but, all of you guys are there.

She responded nervously - well she doesn't like taking pictures ,
Not even a single picture of her as a baby ? - I said.

Well some got burned in the house we used to live in, so all her pictures got lost in that fire,, can we talk about something else , Asiphile whats with all the questions? - she said.

I dropped the conversation as I was seeing how uncomfortable it was making Noluthando.
But I was starting to worry about all the things I saw happening in that house.

I will drop part 2 tommorrow❤️

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Yanda Mbali

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