Electric Awakening
A Journey into the Silent Agony of Unseen Forces

Consciousness returns with the crackle of a severed dream, jagged and raw, like the torn remnants of a scream that never escaped. Sound swells and recedes in waves, a distant ocean of static and noise that swallows all semblance of calm. He jerks awake, his body convulsing in panic, but he is paralyzed—immobilized, strapped to the unyielding embrace of an electric chair. His breath catches, ragged and shallow, a helpless gasp that echoes within the hollow chambers of his chest. The air is thick, smothering, an unbearable mix of burnt dust, decay, and the fetid stench of something far more sinister—something wrong. Straps cut into his skin, each one a cruel reminder of his helplessness, each pulse of his frantic heart tightening their grip until he feels his bones might snap under the pressure. The more he struggles, the more the leather and metal constrict, an iron vice on his very soul. Every desperate inhale is a battle against suffocation, the icy air sharp and bitter in his lungs, filling him with a dread that spirals deeper with each breath.
How did he get here? The thought claws at the edges of his consciousness, but it’s no use—his mind is a fog, and the terror gnaws at him, pulling him deeper into a pit of confusion. Slowly, in spite of himself, terror begins to yield to a slow, cautious clarity. His eyelids flutter, heavy and reluctant. He opens his eyes, peeling them open like a man waking from a deathless nightmare, only to be confronted by a room that doesn’t seem to belong in this world.
The basement surrounds him, an oppressive void of dim light and shadow. His vision struggles to adjust to the sickly brown glow that seems to ooze from the walls, as though the very air has been tainted by decay. The dimness pulses, alive, pressing in on him from every angle, and with it, the slow realization settles in: this is no ordinary place. The room itself seems to exhale, each breath a whisper of ancient malice, as if the walls have been waiting—no, watching—for his return. His heart stutters, but he forces himself to stillness, his skin crawling, every nerve on fire. He stares at the barren walls—gray, cold, unyielding—wondering who, or what, has left him here. He cannot remember.
Time stretches in unnatural ways. Seconds swell and shrink, distorting reality, and every breath seems to stretch beyond reason, as though the very fabric of time has been twisted to torment him. His gaze flickers to the ceiling, where a bulb hangs precariously, swaying with a creak that grates against the quiet. The sound feels unnatural, as if something is toying with the air itself, drawing out the anticipation of the inevitable. Below him, a hum stirs from the depths of the floor—subtle at first, but growing louder, insistent, a predatory vibration that gnaws at the bones, vibrating through the very ground beneath him. It is the hum of electricity, or something far worse—alive and hungry. It will not forget him.
The cold light flickers, casting grotesque, contorted shadows that stretch across the floor like crawling fingers, reaching for him. His eyes scan the room, desperate for escape, but there is nowhere to go. The basement has no doors, no windows. Just the heavy, suffocating air and the oppressive presence of something watching from the darkness. He tries to breathe, but each breath is choked with the oppressive weight of the room. The straps dig deeper into his flesh, cutting into his wrists, his ankles, his waist, until he is certain that the blood flowing through him is no longer his own. His pulse quickens, pounding in his temples, threatening to crack his skull open with the sheer force of his terror.
The hum grows louder, louder—until it feels as though his entire body is vibrating in sync with it. His teeth ache, his bones ache, and his mind begins to unravel. Something is waiting in the darkness, something that will not show itself, but is no less present for it. Who did this to him? His mind latches onto the question, desperate for answers. But the shadows around him seem to laugh, a quiet, malicious whisper that drips with the certainty of something far older, far darker, than anything his mind can comprehend.
He closes his eyes again, unable to bear the sight of the suffocating shadows, but they follow him—always present, always watching. And somewhere, in the suffocating quiet, the air thick with the anticipation of agony, he hears a voice. Faint, distant, but unmistakably there. It is his own. Whispering, pleading, begging for release.
But there is no release. Not here. Not in this place. And whatever waits in the dark is coming closer.
Author's Note:
Electric Awakening delves into the raw, unrelenting nature of fear and the unknown. This story explores the terrifying experience of being trapped, both physically and mentally, in a world where the boundaries of time and reality twist into an inescapable nightmare. The silence of confinement is often more oppressive than the loudest screams, and here, the protagonist faces the agonizing challenge of not just survival, but understanding the darkness closing in around them. It is a tale meant to unsettle, to immerse the reader in the claustrophobia of a mind trapped in an endless, maddening loop.
As you read, I invite you to question the nature of torment and the forces that lurk just beyond the edge of comprehension—forces that, once awakened, will never let go. Thank you for journeying through this dark place with me.

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Comments (4)
This is so gripping and intense!
This could be a story the describes what death penalty convict feels when sitting in 'The Chair' or laying on the stretcher for the 'Final injection'. It's chilling and intriguing to read. Good job.
Another fantastic virtual visit to the land of intricately-woven words. Great writing, despite the dark.
Omg frighteningly fabulous. ♦️🏆♦️