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Echoes at Midnight

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By Theodore HomuthPublished 4 months ago 7 min read
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Echoes at Midnight

The knock was sharp, deliberate — the kind that vibrated in the bones before the mind even registered the sound.

Elias Voss sat alone at the kitchen table, papers scattered like fallen leaves. He had been half-listening to the hum of his refrigerator and the occasional sigh of the old house settling, but the knock cut through everything.

He froze.

Nobody came here. Not this late, not ever.

The clock read 12:03 a.m.

Another knock. Louder this time.

Elias rose, every muscle braced. His hand brushed the cold handle of the coffee mug as he passed it — still half-full, though he couldn’t remember when he’d made it. He approached the door slowly, quietly, as though the thing on the other side might hear him and grow impatient.

The porch light glared across the frosted glass panel. A silhouette stood there — tall, still.

He opened the door.

A girl — no, a young woman — stood barefoot on the step. She wore an oversized gray hoodie streaked with something dark, her hair plastered to her head by rain. Her wide, glassy eyes reflected the light.

“Mr. Voss?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper.

He felt a chill that wasn’t from the night air.

“Yes,” he said cautiously.

She glanced over her shoulder as if making sure no one had followed her. Then, quickly, she thrust something toward him — a folded piece of paper, edges damp and curling.

“You have to help me,” she said.

And then she bolted, vanishing into the dark like a deer startled by headlights.

Elias didn’t move for several seconds. The night was silent again, save for the hiss of light rain. He unfolded the paper.

A single line was scrawled across it in hurried, uneven handwriting:

“She knows what you did.”

By the time he shut the door, Elias’s pulse was hammering in his ears.

He stumbled back to the table, paper still in his grip. The words seemed to grow heavier the longer he stared.

She knows.

Who was she?

And what did she think she knew?

Elias had spent five years burying the past. After the tribunal stripped him of his license, after the newspapers printed his name in bold above words like NEGLIGENCE and DISGRACED, he’d moved here — to this tiny town, this old house with its leaky roof and quiet streets.

He’d thought he was safe from reminders.

But the past, apparently, had knocked on his door.

He barely slept.

When dawn broke, he walked the road outside his house, looking for footprints in the mud, any trace of the girl. He found none.

By noon, he’d almost convinced himself it had been a dream — some twisted projection of his guilty mind — when a second knock came.

This time, when he opened the door, no one stood there. Just a small object on the step.

A locket. Tarnished silver, its chain broken.

He knelt, picking it up carefully. Inside was a picture of a child — a girl of maybe eight, smiling with missing front teeth.

He knew that face.

Her name was Lila Harrow.

Five years ago, she had been one of his patients. Severe PTSD after her mother’s sudden death, uncontrollable night terrors. He had worked with her for months.

And then, one night, she vanished.

The police had searched everywhere. The father had been inconsolable, the media relentless. Elias’s treatment protocols came under scrutiny — did he push her too hard, force her to relive trauma that fractured her even more?

The answer had been yes, at least in the public eye.

The tribunal’s ruling had been the end of everything for him.

And now, her face had shown up on his doorstep.

That night, he sat with the locket on the table and the note beside it. The rain had started again, harder now, rattling against the windows.

When the third knock came, he was already halfway to the door.

This time, the girl didn’t run.

She stood shivering, looking both terrified and determined.

“Please,” she said again.

“Who are you?” Elias asked.

“I’m Mara,” she said. “Lila’s sister.”

Elias blinked. “Lila’s— but you can’t—”

“She’s alive,” Mara interrupted.

The words hit him like a blow.

“She’s alive, but she’s not safe,” Mara continued. “And you’re the only one who can get her back.”

He let her in.

Mara told him everything as she clutched a mug of tea in both hands, knuckles white.

Lila had been taken, not run away. A man who had been “helping” their father with grief counseling — a volunteer from some shady support group — had groomed and abducted her. The police never found him.

Now, five years later, Mara had tracked him down — alone, because no one believed her anymore. She’d seen Lila through a cracked basement window in a run-down farmhouse outside town.

“She didn’t even look at me,” Mara said, tears cutting tracks through the dirt on her face. “She just sat there, like… like she wasn’t even Lila anymore.”

Elias felt the old part of himself stir — the profiler, the doctor, the man who used to fix things.

“You went there alone?” he asked.

Mara nodded. “I can’t go to the police. I tried before. They just said it was a dead case.”

She looked at him, pleading. “You used to be good at this. Please. Help me get her back.”

The old farmhouse lay five miles out, past the edge of town where the road turned to gravel. They went after dark.

Elias hadn’t planned to — he’d meant to call the sheriff, to report what Mara told him. But something gnawed at him.

If Mara was right, every hour they waited could push Lila further into the abyss.

And if Mara was wrong, if this was some elaborate delusion — Elias needed to see for himself.

The house loomed like a black tooth against the sky. Its windows were dark except for a single faint glow in the back.

They crept closer, keeping low. Elias’s heart thudded in his chest.

Through the grimy basement window, he saw her.

Lila.

She was sitting on the floor, hair long and matted, her gaze fixed somewhere far away.

And then — footsteps overhead.

A man descended the stairs.

Elias’s breath caught.

He recognized him.

Dr. Adrian Price.

He’d been at the tribunal. Testified against Elias. Called him reckless, unethical.

And now here he was, keeping Lila Harrow in a basement.

Elias’s hands curled into fists.

Mara looked at him. “What do we do?”

He swallowed hard. The right answer was call the police. But the sight of Lila sitting there, the smug look on Price’s face as he spoke to her — words Elias couldn’t hear but felt sure were poison — pushed him past reason.

He found the bulkhead door at the side of the house and forced it open with a rusted iron bar.

The noise brought Price running.

The struggle was brief but brutal. Elias hadn’t thrown a punch in years, but rage made him strong. When it was over, Price lay unconscious on the basement floor.

Lila flinched at the noise, curling into herself.

Elias crouched beside her.

“Lila,” he said softly, using the same calm, steady tone he’d used in their sessions. “It’s Elias. I’m here to take you home.”

Slowly, she raised her head. Her lips parted.

And she whispered one word:

“Door.”

They left Price bound with an extension cord and drove back to town with Lila in the back seat, silent and small.

By the time they reached Elias’s house, sirens wailed in the distance — someone had called it in. Maybe a neighbor, maybe Price himself after waking.

Elias didn’t care.

For the first time in five years, he felt clean.

At dawn, after the police took Lila into care and arrested Price, Elias stood on his porch and looked out at the wet, gleaming street.

Another knock sounded behind him — softer this time.

Mara stood there, eyes red but hopeful.

“She asked for you,” Mara said. “At the hospital. She remembers you.”

Elias nodded, a lump forming in his throat.

The past had knocked on his door.

And this time, he had answered.

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Theodore Homuth

Exploring the human mind through stories of addiction, recovery, and the quiet places in between.

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