Charlotte
a cautionary tale for spoiled children
There was only one rule: don’t open the door.
Charlotte's nursery was in the room furthest from the door: up many stairs and down a long hall. There, she spent her early days keeping her nurses busy, filling diapers, throwing toys, screaming, and biting. But no number of stairs, length of halls, or thickness of doors could keep the music from reaching her ears. Fortunately, infants don't know what a door is, much less how to open one.
Once Charlotte had learned to walk, the mansion was hers. She would run, scratch, scribble, pound, and stomp anywhere and everywhere. All things that might break or be ruined were moved out of the reach of little tiptoes. Treats purchased by absent parents were doled out to quiet shrill shrieks.
An exasperated servant, pining for peace and quiet, might duck into some closet or guest bedroom, ears plugged to block out the incessant hammering of tiny hands on the door. Every door would eventually open if she kept beating against it, Charlotte learned.
Except for that door.
A door that never opened stood between Charlotte and some haunting, dulcet air -- not quite a voice, but not quite strings -- that sang day and night, and sometimes whispered her name. No one said a word about the door, except to remind Charlotte it was off-limits. This annoyed her to no end.
What strange and lonely thing lived in the forbidden room? If it were a friend, she'd make it hers. If not, well... Charlotte would have her way, in any case. Every day her fingertips stretched closer to the glittering glass knob, until finally, she could grasp it.
The tired servants were relieved to know the resulting puddle of blood was the last mess of Charlotte's they'd ever be expected to clean.
About the Creator
Rebekah Conard
33, She/Her, a big bi nerd
How do I write a bio that doesn't look like a dating profile? Anyway, my cat is my daughter, I crochet and cross stitch, and I can't ride a bike. Come take a peek in my brain-space, please and thanks.
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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The story invoked strong personal emotions




Comments (18)
Whoa! Good job and sharp ending 😮
Haha those servants clearly weren't paid enough! Great tale with a sting in the tail 😂
lovely piece
Well done. I could feel the tension build line by line. The ending was perfectly done. Very deserving of the Top Story.
Very twisted and engrossing. I felt on the other side of that door there just might be a troop of Oompa Loompas singing a pointed lesson about curiosity, spoiled children, and absentee parenting.
Ha! The servants were so casual about it. Love how and where your story ended.
I can feel Charlotte's curiosity about the door and the strange music behind it. It's so sad how it ended for her.
well written
Ouch! lol, but you know what they say about curiosity! Great story and congrats on Top Story!
The ending of your story made my spine crawl. Congratulations on Top-Story.
Oh (expletive)! I didn't see that coming! Ha ha Great bit of micro horror fiction. Congratulations, too, on the well-earned Top Story!
Wow. That ending was amazing. Congrats on the TS.
nice story
OMG Nooo Charlotte...... What happened to you? lol Great story.
Ha! Bye Charlotte! Gosh she was a pain. Your story was brill though! Great writing.
Absolutely delightful. Bravo, great work. You did an awesome job!
Wow, that last line was something else! What an insane and powerful story. Great horror!
Oh snap!! Charlotte finally met her match!! or end actually, lol. I was all caught up in the story. Wonderful entry :)