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Charlotte

a cautionary tale for spoiled children

By Rebekah ConardPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2024
Charlotte
Photo by Perry Merrity II on Unsplash

There was only one rule: don’t open the door.

Charlotte's nursery was in the room furthest from the door: up many stairs and down a long hall. There, she spent her early days keeping her nurses busy, filling diapers, throwing toys, screaming, and biting. But no number of stairs, length of halls, or thickness of doors could keep the music from reaching her ears. Fortunately, infants don't know what a door is, much less how to open one.

Once Charlotte had learned to walk, the mansion was hers. She would run, scratch, scribble, pound, and stomp anywhere and everywhere. All things that might break or be ruined were moved out of the reach of little tiptoes. Treats purchased by absent parents were doled out to quiet shrill shrieks.

An exasperated servant, pining for peace and quiet, might duck into some closet or guest bedroom, ears plugged to block out the incessant hammering of tiny hands on the door. Every door would eventually open if she kept beating against it, Charlotte learned.

Except for that door.

A door that never opened stood between Charlotte and some haunting, dulcet air -- not quite a voice, but not quite strings -- that sang day and night, and sometimes whispered her name. No one said a word about the door, except to remind Charlotte it was off-limits. This annoyed her to no end.

What strange and lonely thing lived in the forbidden room? If it were a friend, she'd make it hers. If not, well... Charlotte would have her way, in any case. Every day her fingertips stretched closer to the glittering glass knob, until finally, she could grasp it.

The tired servants were relieved to know the resulting puddle of blood was the last mess of Charlotte's they'd ever be expected to clean.

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About the Creator

Rebekah Conard

33, She/Her, a big bi nerd

How do I write a bio that doesn't look like a dating profile? Anyway, my cat is my daughter, I crochet and cross stitch, and I can't ride a bike. Come take a peek in my brain-space, please and thanks.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Whoa! Good job and sharp ending 😮

  • Addison Alderabout a year ago

    Haha those servants clearly weren't paid enough! Great tale with a sting in the tail 😂

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    Well done. I could feel the tension build line by line. The ending was perfectly done. Very deserving of the Top Story.

  • A. J. Schoenfeldabout a year ago

    Very twisted and engrossing. I felt on the other side of that door there just might be a troop of Oompa Loompas singing a pointed lesson about curiosity, spoiled children, and absentee parenting.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Ha! The servants were so casual about it. Love how and where your story ended.

  • MT Poetryabout a year ago

    I can feel Charlotte's curiosity about the door and the strange music behind it. It's so sad how it ended for her.

  • Testabout a year ago

    well written

  • Heather Zieffle about a year ago

    Ouch! lol, but you know what they say about curiosity! Great story and congrats on Top Story!

  • Carol Ann Townendabout a year ago

    The ending of your story made my spine crawl. Congratulations on Top-Story.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Oh (expletive)! I didn't see that coming! Ha ha Great bit of micro horror fiction. Congratulations, too, on the well-earned Top Story!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wow. That ending was amazing. Congrats on the TS.

  • Sanjay Upadhyayabout a year ago

    nice story

  • Elle Colonabout a year ago

    OMG Nooo Charlotte...... What happened to you? lol Great story.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Ha! Bye Charlotte! Gosh she was a pain. Your story was brill though! Great writing.

  • R. B. Boothabout a year ago

    Absolutely delightful. Bravo, great work. You did an awesome job!

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Wow, that last line was something else! What an insane and powerful story. Great horror!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh snap!! Charlotte finally met her match!! or end actually, lol. I was all caught up in the story. Wonderful entry :)

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