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Broken Rule, Broken Vow

Don't Open The Door Challenge

By DaphsamPublished about a year ago 1 min read

There was only one rule: don’t open the door…

The head sister of Shadow Veil convent said harshly to the young novice sister as she pointed to the abandoned alcove with a wooden door.

Sister Angelica had just arrived at the convent. Sister Lenore, who looked as old as the bare oak trees, shuffled away from the ominous door.

Tinny scratches and a disjointed moan echoed around the pale, milky walls. Sister Angelica quickly turned her head to the door. A sliver of light peeked out from underneath the door. The shadows looked like icy fingers reaching for help on the wooden floor.

“Did you hear that?” whispered Sister Angelica.

Sister Lenore did not answer; she continued walking down the hall.

A faint sobbing slowly sounded from behind the door. Sister Angelica stopped and turned to the heartbreaking keening noise. As she listened, cold fingers of fear slid down her neck; it sounded like a young woman.

Sister Angelica was torn. She was new here and didn’t want to get in trouble with Mother Superior. She had broken a few rules at other convents. Her punishment was being dumped in this haunted convent.

“H…e….l….p,” the anguished voice cried out behind the door.

Sister Angelia looked towards Sister Lenore, who disappeared.

A shake came from the door.

Sister Angelica walked to the door. “Hello” she tentatively said. “Are you hurt”.

“L…e…t…. m…e…. o…u…t,” the pitiful voice cried.

Sister Angelica knew she would break the rule if someone was hurt. She slowly unlocked the door.

She could hear panting now.

As she turned the doorknob, she saw the shadows more closely; they weren’t shadows; it was crimson blood.

Before Sister Angelica could register what she was seeing…gnarling fingers grabbed her, she realized too late that she shouldn’t have opened that door.

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Daphsam

A dyslexic dreamer who once thought reading and writing were beyond reach. Yet here I am, an artist, wordsmith, and illustrator—ready to weave stories and poems from my artwork.

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  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Ya gotta follow tha rulez!

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! Why shouldn't convents be haunted? It will be in those places we hallow where the veil wears thinnest!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Her compassion was her undoing! Eek!

  • Lol, why can't she just listen. Loved your story!

  • Kageno Hoshinoabout a year ago

    Oh my

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Oh, that poor nun. You have to be careful in those old convents never know what will appear.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh my. This is terrifying. Well done.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Sister Lenore, who looked as old as the bare oak trees, shuffled away from the ominous door. (THIS MADE LAUGH SO HARD, LOL 😆)

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