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Blood in the Whispering Pines

The Forest Remembers

By David DaoPublished 9 months ago 14 min read

The rain was soft, barely more than mist, drifting down like ghosts returning to the forest floor. Towering evergreens swayed gently above the weathered ranger station perched near the edge of Camp Whispering Pines. The station hadn't had visitors in days, but the ranger inside still made his daily report.

“Camp Whispering Pines is off-limits for a reason. Don’t go near it.”

His voice crackled over the old radio, swallowed as quickly as it left the speaker. The woodstove behind him hissed and popped as he turned the dial, trying again. Nothing but static. With a sigh, he leaned back and stared out the window, his eyes locked on the thick trees across the road.

He had warned others before. Hikers. Scientists. Thrill seekers. No one ever listened.

No one ever came back.

The forest road was little more than a gravel scar winding through miles of remote wilderness. A dark green SUV crept along its path, bumping over loose rocks and sinking briefly into soft mud. Cheryl Holbrook sat in the driver’s seat, her jaw clenched as she squinted through the drizzle on the windshield. Beside her, Karen Nguyen studied the GPS on her lap. In the backseat, Bobby Holbrook lazily filmed through a foggy window, narrating to his handheld camcorder.

“And here we are, ladies and gentlemen”, Bobby said with exaggerated showmanship. “The farthest edge of civilization, where cell signals vanish and people go missing in the woods. Perfect place for a relaxing vacation.”

“It’s a scientific expedition, not a vacation”, Cheryl snapped. “And if you’d spent half the time studying the terrain as you did pack GoPros and batteries, you’d know that.”

Karen glanced over the top of the GPS and smiled faintly. “We’re almost at the drop-off point. The trail’s not even listed on most maps anymore.”

Cheryl nodded. “That’s what makes it perfect. No hikers. No noise. Just us, the trees, and a whole new population of Pygmy Short-Horned Lizards ready for study.”

They pulled off onto a wider patch of dirt just before the trailhead. The forest loomed all around, thick and quiet. The air smelled of damp bark, wet earth, and something faintly metallic.

Cheryl stepped out first. She was built for fieldwork—broad-shouldered, lean, and dressed in sturdy green hiking pants, a weatherproof jacket, and a wide-brimmed hat. Her brown hair was tied tightly into a braid that swung behind her like a cord of resolve. Karen followed more cautiously, adjusting her glasses and tucking a raincoat around her light frame. Bobby took his time.

“Five days in the woods”, he muttered as he finally got out. “I should’ve charged rent to be your intern.”

“You’re here because I don’t trust anyone else to carry the gear and not screw it up”, Cheryl said. “Besides, you’ve been tagging along on my research trips since undergrad.”

“Yeah, but back then I got to flirt with your grad students. Now I’m stuck with you two.”

Cheryl tossed him a stern look. “You’re lucky I don’t leave you here with the car and a protein bar.”

Karen rolled her eyes and handed Bobby one of the heavier packs. “Let’s get moving before the rain gets worse.”

The trailhead was overgrown. A weathered wooden sign—half buried in brush—read: “Whispering Pines Trail - CLOSED.”

They started hiking.

The first mile was quiet. Pines towered like green cathedral columns on either side, their trunks straight as spears and crowned with swaying branches. Moss draped everything like forgotten velvet. Cheryl led the way, GPS in hand, watching their coordinates closely.

Karen took soil temperature readings and jotted notes. Bobby filmed the forest floor, the canopy, even the back of Cheryl’s head.

“Seriously?” Cheryl said, glancing over her shoulder.

“I’m making a doc”, Bobby replied. “Science and suspense. This place has Blair Witch written all over it.”

“Keep the horror movie fantasies to yourself”, Karen murmured.

They made camp just after midday beside a crumbling stone fire pit someone had left decades ago. The trees around them were twisted at odd angles, as if frozen mid-writhe. Bobby was the only one who noticed.

“This forest feels... warped”, he said. “Like it’s leaning in.”

“Welcome to geomagnetic anomalies”, Cheryl replied. “It messes with your sense of balance.”

“Or maybe the woods are haunted”, Bobby joked.

No one laughed.

As dusk fell, Bobby panned the camera over one tree where something was carved faintly into the bark: an eye surrounded by antlers.

“Hey, check this out”, he said.

Cheryl stared at it. “Probably a hunter’s mark.”

But she wasn’t sure.

That night, as they sat around a modest fire, the GPS started glitching. Cheryl brushed it off as a signal issue, but Karen didn’t like how quickly the battery drained. Bobby told a ghost story to pass the time, about a ranger who vanished in these woods and was found hanging in a tree, antlers jammed into his chest.

“I’m sleeping with a flashlight tonight”, Karen muttered.

“You mean you weren’t already?”, Bobby teased.

A sound echoed in the darkness.

They froze.

It was slow. Heavy. Wet breathing.

“Probably a deer”, Cheryl whispered.

Then the glow of two large amber eyes appeared beyond the firelight.

“Moose”, Bobby said.

“Big moose”, Karen added.

The bull stepped forward. Towering. Muscular. Steam curled from its nostrils. Its antlers gleamed.

“Stay still”, Cheryl whispered.

Bobby panicked.

He ran.

The moose lunged forward like a bolt of living thunder.

Antlers caught Bobby mid-sprint. He flew sideways, screamed, hit rocks.

“Bobby!”, Karen shouted.

The moose stamped. Antlers lifted. Blood sprayed.

Cheryl grabbed Karen’s arm. “We have to run.”

Karen resisted, eyes locked on Bobby.

Then the moose charged again.

They fled into the blackness.

Cheryl's boots crashed through ferns and slick roots as she dragged Karen down the slope. Behind them, they could still hear the heavy breathing of the moose and the wet squelch of soil torn apart by hooves. The scream from Bobby had ended too quickly. Cheryl didn’t let herself think about what that meant.

They reached a shallow ravine filled with mist. The damp air choked their lungs as they slipped and slid through mud and moss, adrenaline replacing reason. Cheryl finally pulled them behind a cluster of windfallen trees.

Karen fell to her knees, gasping, tears mixing with the grime on her face. “We left him”, she choked. “We left Bobby.”

Cheryl crouched beside her, trying to keep her own breathing steady. “He’s gone.”

“You don’t know that!” Karen shouted.

Cheryl’s eyes closed for a moment. She did know. The sound of Bobby’s final scream was still echoing in her skull. “We need to survive.”

They sat in silence for long minutes, the forest slowly returning to its unnatural quiet. The air was too still. Even the birds had gone silent.

“Where are we?”, Karen whispered.

Cheryl checked her GPS. The screen was frozen again, the coordinates stuck and flickering.

“Useless”, she muttered. She dug out a topographical map from her jacket pocket and unfolded it on a flat rock. “I think we’re somewhere near the south face of Dead Man’s Bluff.”

Karen recoiled. “That’s a real place?”

“Just a nickname. Old hiker’s tales. Still—might be close to a trailhead or old campsite.”

They moved again, slower now. Every sound made them jump. A rustle, a branch creak, the occasional hoot of a distant owl. The canopy closed above them like a suffocating dome.

After nearly two hours of weaving through the thickest brush Cheryl had ever encountered, they stumbled into a clearing.

Karen halted. “Do you see that?”

A tattered tent slumped near the center, its poles bent inward like snapped ribs. Around it were sleeping bags, gear, a small cold fire pit, and bones.

Human bones.

Skulls without eyes, jaws twisted, ribs gnawed.

Karen began hyperventilating. Cheryl forced her to turn away. “Don’t look.”

“Oh my God, this was… this was another group. Researchers?”

Cheryl scanned the site. The remains were old — months, maybe years — but one backpack looked newer. She carefully unzipped it, revealing a sealed field journal. Flipping through the pages, her stomach twisted:

“We saw it again today. Massive. Unnatural. The moose watches from the trees. It follows but does not kill unless provoked. Billy ran. He didn’t make it. I don’t think we can leave. The forest feels... alive.”

Karen leaned over, trembling. “We’re not the first.”

Cheryl flipped to the last page.

“We made it to the cave. Something’s in there. We’re going to try to document the herd. If we don’t come back…” — the rest of the page was smeared with dried blood.

A low, hollow sound drifted through the trees.

A snort. A heavy grunt. The sound of soil shifting under massive hooves.

Cheryl grabbed Karen’s arm and yanked her back. “Go. Now.”

They ran again, not even trying to be quiet. Behind them came the crashing of branches. The moose was back. It wasn’t random. It was hunting.

Karen tripped.

“No!”, Cheryl screamed.

She turned back, but the moose was already upon them. Karen’s flashlight bounced wildly as she crawled backward. Antlers glinted in the dim light. Karen let out a scream — and then Cheryl made the decision.

She ran.

Karen’s cries were cut short by the sound of bone against bark. A thud. A wet snap.

Cheryl didn’t stop.

She ran until her legs gave out.

She collapsed behind a thick pine, hidden by shadow. Blood roared in her ears. Tears streamed down her face.

“I’m sorry”, she whispered to the dirt.

And then she saw it — a low, dark hole near the base of a tree. Barely wider than a crawlspace. The air flowing from it was cool and smelled of minerals.

Cheryl looked back.

Nothing followed.

She crawled inside.

The crawlspace was tight—too tight. Cheryl’s shoulders scraped against the dirt ceiling, and her elbows protested every inch forward. Her breath came in shallow gasps, echoing off packed earthen walls. Behind her, the tunnel narrowed to nothing. Ahead, a faint glimmer shimmered like moonlight reflecting off wet stone.

She inched forward.

The earthy scent thickened. Roots brushed her arms like fingers reaching from above. Her flashlight’s beam flickered, casting long shadows that danced with every tremble of her hand. After what felt like hours—though it couldn’t have been more than fifteen minutes—her fingers met air.

The tunnel dropped away beneath her.

With no space to turn, Cheryl braced herself and slid forward. The dirt gave way beneath her knees, and she tumbled into open space.

She landed hard on her hip, the wind knocked from her lungs. Her flashlight clattered away and came to rest near a shallow pool of crystal-clear water. Above her, the ceiling glistened like frost. Strange, bioluminescent fungi crawled up the walls like veins.

And then she saw them.

Moose. Dozens of them. Females, calves, old bulls—all resting, breathing slowly, their eyes aglow with soft blue reflections from the stream.

Cheryl froze.

None of them moved. None of them charged.

Instead, they watched her.

The cavern was silent, save for the sound of water trickling over smooth stone. The air was warm, sacred. For a moment, Cheryl felt like an intruder in a cathedral.

She slowly stood. Her knees shook.

“I’m not here to hurt you”, she whispered, more to herself than them. “I just needed a place to hide.”

One of the calves snorted softly. A massive mother shifted but didn’t rise. Instead, she turned her head toward the back of the cavern.

A narrow path. Another tunnel.

Cheryl hesitated only a moment before retrieving her flashlight and following it.

The second tunnel was drier, rougher, as though carved less by nature and more by desperation. She found claw marks—deep gouges in the stone. Not from moose. Something else had tried to get out.

And failed.

Half a mile in, she reached a chamber smaller than the last. A rusted camp stove. A battered tent. Inside, a corpse.

Dried out, slumped against the wall, arms still clutching a leather journal. Cheryl approached slowly, whispering apologies as she uncurled the dead fingers. The journal’s cover bore initials: R. M.

She opened it. The last entry read:

“They won’t let me leave. I tried. Every path leads back here. I hear them walking when I sleep. I think… I think they’re not animals. Not anymore. Something woke up in them. Something old. They remember what we’ve done.”

Cheryl turned the page. More notes—observations about behavior, sketches of the cave layout, trails that looped back.

Then one final scrawled line:

“She’s still alive. I hear her crying in the walls.”

Cheryl froze.

A soft sound echoed above her.

A sob.

“Karen?”, she breathed.

She ran.

The tunnels twisted like intestines, every turn a cruel trick. Cheryl passed markings—charcoal drawings, warning sigils, old survey flags. All of it left by people who had walked these paths before. People who didn’t return.

Then she heard it again.

A voice. Weak. Croaking.

“Help… me…”

She pushed through a narrow fissure and entered a side chamber. Karen lay on the ground, pale, covered in scratches, her right leg twisted unnaturally beneath her.

“Karen!”, Cheryl dropped beside her.

Karen’s eyes fluttered open. “Cheryl… you… left me.”

Tears filled Cheryl’s eyes. “I thought you were— I thought—”

“I crawled. I don’t know how far. It brought me here.”

“What did?”

Karen’s eyes widened. “It… speaks. Not in words. In… thoughts. Feelings.”

Cheryl took her hand. “We’re going to get out.”

Karen shook her head. “No. It doesn’t want us to leave. Not unless we understand. Not unless we remember.”

A tremor rolled through the cavern floor.

The sound of hooves.

They were coming.

Cheryl stood, bracing herself.

“Then let’s hear what it has to say.”

They came like ghosts in the dark.

Cheryl had just helped Karen sit up when the first moose entered the chamber—silent, massive, and glowing with a strange inner light that reflected off the cavern walls. Then came another, and another. They moved not like animals, but like sentinels performing a sacred rite.

Karen began to cry.

“It’s here”, she whispered. “The one that speaks.”

Cheryl stood between her and the approaching herd. She held up her hands—not in defense, but reverence. The air had changed. It felt dense, ancient. Sacred.

And then it came.

The bull.

Its antlers nearly scraped the ceiling, branched like petrified lightning. Its fur shimmered with veins of pale silver. Its eyes glowed, not yellow like a beast, but cold and white-blue—like stars staring through centuries of memory. The earth beneath them seemed to hold its breath.

When it stepped into the chamber, the others lowered their heads and backed away.

Cheryl stared, her throat dry.

It didn’t snort. It didn’t charge. It simply lowered its massive head until its nose hovered inches from her chest. Its breath was warm and rhythmic.

Then the voice came—not as sound, but as thought.

“You were warned.”

Cheryl’s knees buckled. She gritted her teeth and stayed standing.

“You came anyway. Like the others. The cutters. The burners. The takers.”

Images slammed into her mind. Trees felled like broken spines. Calves dragged screaming from their mothers. Fire licking at roots older than memory. Campsites littered with blood and wrappers. Bones buried under plastic.

“But we didn’t—”

“All mean harm. Eventually.”

Karen whimpered behind her. “Why let us live?”

The moose’s massive head turned slowly, eyes resting on her.

“To choose.”

Cheryl blinked. Her pulse thundered in her ears.

A vision bloomed within her: A stone grove hidden deep beneath the forest—older than time, older than language. At its center: a crystalline pool surrounded by bones, some animal, many human. Carved in the stone altar that stood above it: Let Memory Serve.

She understood.

This was not just a sanctuary.

It was a vault.

A keeper of time. A cathedral of consequence.

The moose weren’t beasts. They were sentinels. Guardians. Archivists of the forest’s soul.

She dropped to her knees.

“What do you want from us?”, she whispered aloud.

“To carry what others forgot. To hold the story. To remember… or sleep beneath the roots forever.”

Behind her, Karen clutched her ribs, trembling. “It’s giving us a choice.”

The bull turned, leading the way through the herd.

The others parted in silence.

Cheryl looked back once at Karen. She helped her up, and together they followed.

The final tunnel was like falling through time. Antlers carved in stone. Circles within circles. Moons. Flames. Bones and breath.

They emerged into a cavern unlike the others.

The Memory Grove.

The pool shimmered with light that had no source. The altar stood at the far end, etched with the runes from Cheryl’s vision. And above it, a mural carved into the very ceiling — moose and man standing side by side under stars.

The bull approached the altar and knelt.

The ground rumbled. The air shifted.

A voice returned, not with accusation now, but with finality:

“Speak.”

Cheryl stepped forward, heart pounding, hands trembling.

She remembered Bobby’s laugh. His blood. The twisted bodies at the old camp. The journal. The bones.

She closed her eyes.

“I remember”, she said.

Karen echoed behind her. “So do I.”

The altar glowed.

The bull stood.

A light—warm, terrible, eternal—swept over them both.

And then—

Darkness.

One year later.

The wind rolled in soft across the trees at the edge of Camp Whispering Pines. The ranger stood by the wooden gate, thumbing through his notes, frowning. A new research team was scheduled to arrive next week — but the request had come from an email he didn’t recognize.

And the permit hadn’t been approved. Not officially.

He looked out over the road winding into the forest. The pines swayed gently, whispering like they always did — but something about them felt heavier today. Still.

He turned to head back inside the station.

Then froze.

A figure stood at the tree line. Just far enough to be blurred by mist and shadow, but close enough to see she wore a weather-beaten hiking coat. Her hair was bound in a braid that hung down her shoulder. She wasn’t moving. Just watching.

The ranger squinted. “Ma’am? Are you—”

But she was already gone.

No crack of twig, no shifting leaf. Just… gone.

Behind her, deeper in the trees, something shifted. Antlers. Dozens of them. Flickering like silver brush strokes painted into shadow.

And then stillness again.

The ranger backed toward the door. His pulse thundered in his ears.

He sat down at his desk and picked up a pen.

He scratched out the permit.

Then he wrote a new sign.

CAMP WHISPERING PINES: CLOSED — NO EXCEPTIONS.

He hammered it into the dirt himself.

And somewhere behind him, the forest watched.

THE END.

supernatural

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David Dao

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