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A Tale of Brothers and Demons

Thirst for Flesh

By joseph ganthuPublished 10 months ago 4 min read
The two Brothers

A Tale of Brothers and Demons

In a land steeped in shadows and sorcery, the kingdom of Achinpur stood on the brink of destruction. A sinister force loomed, threatening to consume its very essence. At the heart of this peril was a mysterious woman who had ensnared the king's heart, weaving her way into the royal family. What the king did not know was that this enchanting figure was no mere mortal; she was the daughter of the matriarch of the rakkhoshes, a terrifying class of demons. Beneath her captivating exterior lay an insatiable thirst for flesh and chaos.

The king, blissfully oblivious to the darkness swirling around him, had a human queen who bore him a son. Meanwhile, the demonic queen also gave birth, her son inheriting her formidable powers. Thus, two princes emerged: Neelkamal, the king's beloved child, and Lalkamal, the son of the rakkhoshi queen. Despite their contrasting heritages, the brothers shared an unbreakable bond, united against the malevolence that surrounded them.

As they grew, the differences between their mothers became starkly evident. Neelkamal's mother radiated warmth and love, while Lalkamal's demon mother cloaked her true nature beneath a veil of charm. Behind palace walls, the rakkhoshi queen indulged in her dark appetites, secretly devouring the kingdom’s majestic elephants and horses, while also siphoning the life force from Lalkamal’s mother. This insidious consumption went unnoticed until one fateful night.

Neelkamal discovered the horrifying truth when he stumbled upon Lalkamal ensnared in the clutches of their demonic mother. The king, paralyzed by her dark magic, could only watch as the brothers faced imminent doom. In a desperate moment, the rakkhoshi queen attempted to feast upon them, but fate intervened. She regurgitated two metal eggs, hiding them deep within a secluded bamboo grove of a distant kingdom, unaware that the brothers had evaded death, encased within.

With Achinpur now firmly under the rakkhoshi queen's control, the realm descended into chaos. Humans became prey, hunted mercilessly by the demons. Yet, the time of reckoning was not far off. One day, the brothers burst forth from the eggs, fueled by a shared determination to vanquish the rakkhoshi queen and liberate their kingdom from the demonic scourge.

Their first challenge lay in a neighboring land, plagued by lesser demons known as khokkoshes. The brothers devised a plan to confront these creatures, with Lalkamal taking the first watch while Neelkamal rested. As night fell, khokkoshes approached, demanding to know who resided within their lair. In accordance with their strategy, Lalkamal boldly proclaimed Neelkamal’s name. The mere utterance sent shivers through the monsters, for they recognized Neelkamal as the son of a powerful rakkhoshi.

To enhance the illusion, Lalkamal cleverly manipulated the surroundings. He thrust the tip of Neelkamal’s crown through a crack, claiming it was his brother’s fingernail. He then splashed scalding oil from a nearby lamp, calling it Neelkamal’s spit, and brandished a sword, asserting it was his brother’s tongue. The khokkoshes, pricked by the crown, burned by the oil, and cut by the sword, retreated in fear.

However, their victory was short-lived. When the khokkoshes returned, Lalkamal, still groggy, accidentally revealed his own name first. The creatures burst into their hideout, awakening Neelkamal. With swift precision, he drew his sword and dispatched the khokkoshes, proving their ruse effective yet again.

Word of their triumph reached the rakkhoshi queen, who devised a cunning plan to ensnare the princes. She sent a deceptive message to Achinpur, claiming that the king lay gravely ill and that the only cure was oil extracted from a rakkhoshi head. The princes, determined to save their father and rid the kingdom of the demon’s influence, sharpened their swords and set out for the dark heart of Rakkhosher desh, the rakkhoshi homeland.

Upon their arrival, they remained stealthy and inconspicuous, evading the rakkhoshi queen's traps. Neelkamal, ever the strategist, called upon his grandmother, the matriarch of the rakkhoshes. To prove their lineage, she demanded that they consume iron peas. Neelkamal complied effortlessly, while Lalkamal discreetly substituted the peas with chickpeas, fooling the matriarch into believing they were indeed her grandchildren.

Welcomed into the rakkhoshi lair, the brothers feigned fear of being devoured if the matriarch left them alone. She reassured them that nothing would befall them, revealing that deep within a well lay a box containing two hornets—one containing her daughter, the rakkhoshi queen's life; the other, the essence of every remaining rakkhoshi.

Once the rakkhoshes departed for their nightly hunt, the brothers seized the opportunity. Neelkamal descended into the well, retrieving the box. As soon as the hornets met the open air, the rakkhoshes sensed danger. However, Neelkamal acted swiftly, slaying the first hornet before the demons could react. The rakkhoshes fell lifeless, their power extinguished.

With their mission accomplished, the princes returned to Achinpur riding on divine birds. Heeding the instructions from the rakkhoshi queen's message, they carried with them the head of the rakkhoshi matriarch. When the rakkhoshi queen beheld this trophy, shock washed over her, and in that moment, Neelkamal struck down the second hornet.

As the second hornet fell, the grip of darkness released its hold on Achinpur. The king emerged from the rakkhoshi queen's spell, and the kingdom began to heal. With their bond unbroken and their courage unwavering, Neelkamal and Lalkamal had not only liberated their father but also saved their kingdom from the clutches of evil.

In the aftermath of their victory, the brothers became legends, their tale of bravery and resilience echoing through the ages. Achinpur flourished once more, a testament to the strength of brotherhood and the triumph of good over evil. The rakkhoshes, now vanquished, faded into the shadows, but the legacy of the princes endured, inspiring generations to fight against darkness and uphold the light.

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  • Joseph Ganthu10 months ago

    A good story

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