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A Halloween Never To Forget

A Real Haunted

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago 7 min read
By George’s Girl 16/10/24

It was Halloween night, and the wind howled through the aged trees surrounding the quaint little town of Eldridge. The air was tinged with the sweet scent of fallen leaves, but an undercurrent of dread hung heavily as Sarah and her friends gathered at the edge of town. The moon hung low in the sky, casting silver beams that danced through the branches like ethereal fingers reaching for the ground below. It was a night perfect for ghost stories, for spine-tingling thrills, and for the audacious venture they were about to embark upon.

“Are you absolutely certain we should be doing this?” Mark asked, his voice barely above a whisper as he glanced nervously over his shoulder, the shadows of the trees seeming to loom larger in the moonlight. He stood there, his posture rigid, hands shoved deep into his pockets, as if hoping to draw some comfort from the warmth of his own body.

“Come on, it’ll be fun!” Sarah replied, her voice infused with a bravado that she didn’t quite feel. Behind her infectious enthusiasm lay a thin veneer of apprehension, one that she could sense in her own stomach but was determined to mask for the sake of her friends. They were all here, after all, lured by tales of ghostly apparitions and strange occurrences that surrounded the infamous Hollow Oak House, a dilapidated structure that had been the subject of local lore for decades.

As they stepped onto the creaking porch, the old wood groaned underfoot, sending a shiver down Sarah’s spine. Shadows danced on the walls, animated by the flickering light of their flashlights, which illuminated the path ahead but left the corners steeped in darkness. The door swung open with a reluctant creak, revealing a dark hallway lined with dust-covered furniture, where the smell of dampness clung to the air like a ghostly embrace.

“Let’s split up,” Jake suggested, his voice a mix of daring and trepidation. “We’ll cover more ground that way.”

“Are you mad?” Mark exclaimed, horror etched across his face. “There’s no way I’m wandering off alone in here.”

“Fine, we’ll stay together,” Sarah conceded, casting a sideways glance at the looming stairway at the end of the hall. They wandered through the musty rooms, laughter spilling from their lips like a shield against the encroaching darkness. Each corner held the promise of a fright, and they shared spooky stories, their bravado forging a temporary bubble of safety.

But as they ventured deeper into the house, an unsettling chill settled over them, and the laughter began to fade, replaced by a whispering tension that hung in the air. The atmosphere thickened, and the shadows seemed to deepen, closing in around them like a shroud.

Suddenly, a loud bang echoed from upstairs, reverberating through the stillness, making them all jump.

“Did you hear that?” Sarah’s voice trembled, her earlier bravado evaporating like mist in the morning sun.

Mark nodded, his face drained of color. “Yeah, it came from up there.”

“Let’s check it out,” Jake suggested, though his voice quivered slightly. The thrill of adventure had taken a sharp turn into anxiety.

With hearts racing, they climbed the groaning stairs, each step echoing ominously through the silent house. The corridor at the top was bathed in shadow, with the moonlight barely filtering through the grimy windows. They fanned out slightly but remained close, as if drawn together by an invisible cord.

At the end of the hall, a door stood ajar, an eerie light shimmering from within as if beckoning them closer. Curiosity propelled them forward, yet unease hung heavily in the air.

As they approached, Sarah could hear faint whispers drifting through the crack, a cascade of soft sounds that tickled her ears, sending a chill down her spine. “What is that?” she whispered, her heart pounding.

Jake shrugged, glancing at Mark, who looked even more pale. “Let’s find out,” he said, though doubt clouded his courage.

With a deep breath, Sarah pushed the door open. It swung wide, revealing a room filled with dusty furniture draped in white sheets. Moonlight cascaded through a small window, illuminating distinct patterns of dust swirling lazily in the air. The room felt alive, and for a brief moment, the trio stood frozen by the threshold, eyes wide with wonder and fear.

Suddenly, a loud crash echoed from the bathroom adjoining this room, causing them all to jump.

“Did you hear that?” Mark almost shouted, his eyes darting toward the sound.

“I don’t want to find out what it was,” Jake murmured, his bravado crumbling.

But instead of retreating, curiosity propelled Sarah forward as she tiptoed toward the bathroom door. “Maybe it’s just an animal,” she suggested, though she wasn’t convinced herself.

Mark and Jake exchanged worried glances but followed her lead, reluctant yet unable to resist the thrill of the unknown.

As they stepped cautiously into the bathroom, the air turned noticeably colder, and the hairs on Sarah’s arms stood on end. The faint glimmer of their flashlights revealed cracked tiles and a rusted tub laden with spider webs.

Another crash made them jump again—the sound was louder now, reverberating through the walls, a shuddering sound of something heavy and unseen.

“Let’s get out of here!” Mark exclaimed, eyes wide and wild with fear.

But as they turned to leave, the door slammed shut behind them with a resounding bang, trapping them in darkness.

“Are you freaking kidding me?” Jake shouted, panic seeping into his voice.

“Stay calm! We’ll find a way out!” Sarah insisted, though her own heart raced.

Without thinking, Sarah grabbed the doorknob and tried to turn it, but it wouldn’t budge. “It won’t open!” she shouted, desperation creeping into her voice.

Suddenly, the air filled with whispers—words unrecognizable yet filled with urgency, urging them to leave. Goosebumps prickled Sarah’s skin as she pressed her ear against the wooden door, trying to decipher the murmurs.

Mark pounded on the door with his fists. “Let us out! Please!”

And just when they thought despair would consume them, the door creaked open slowly, as if some unseen force had released its grip.

“Run!” Sarah yelled, shoving past her friends as they scrambled back into the hallway.

They barreled down the dark corridor, breathless but fueled by sheer panic. The sound of footsteps echoed behind them—heavy and relentless, urging them forward.

“Where do we go?” Jake gasped, glancing back as if what pursued them might be visible just behind the gloom.

“Downstairs! We have to get out!” Sarah called, leading the way, her heart pounding against her ribs as they descended the creaking staircase, each step echoing their growing fear.

Suddenly, the lights flickered on and off, casting eerie shadows that danced along the walls. The whispers grew louder, swirling around them like a tempest, drowning out their thoughts and filling them with dread.

As they reached the first floor, the front door slammed shut once again with a force that rattled the old structure, trapping them inside.

“No! Please!” Mark shouted, panic flooding his voice.

Sarah spun around, frantic. “We need to find a window!”

They dashed into the living room, which was dimly lit by a flickering candle that seemed to appear out of nowhere. Shadows played tricks on their eyes as they searched for any way out. The thickest layers of dust on the furniture suggested that the house had remained untouched for years, yet they could feel an ancient energy pulsing within the walls.

“Look!” Jake pointed to a set of French doors leading to a patio that had long been overtaken by creeping vines.

“Help me!” Jake pulled on the door, but it wouldn’t budge.

Mark joined him, and together they shoved against the weathered wood, while Sarah frantically glanced around, looking for any sign of whatever was haunting them.

Then, without warning, a window shattered in the adjoining room. Glass rained down on the floor like icy droplets, making them jump.

“Quick! We have to move!” Sarah urged.

Finally, after what felt like ages, the doors creaked open, allowing a thin sliver of moonlight to pour in.

“Go! Go!” Sarah shouted. They squeezed through the narrow space, feeling the cool night air wash over them as if it were a lifeline.

Just as they thought they were free, the ground beneath them shook with the weight of something enormous lurking close by. They stumbled onto the patio, breathless and disoriented, but when they turned to look back at the Hollow Oak House, its windows flickered with lights that danced like life caught in the throes of a storm.

“Did we… make it?” Mark panted, leaning against the wall for support.

But before anyone could respond, a chilling breeze swept past, whispering through the trees like distant voices calling their names, wrapping them in a shroud of icy fear.

“We need to get out of here—now!” Jake insisted, urging them down the path.

The trio sprinted away from the house, back into the welcoming embrace of the moonlit streets of Eldridge. Their hearts raced as they stumbled through the chill night, the sight of streetlights flickering into view seeming like the only safety they craved.

Yet, even as they caught their breath, something felt different. The laughter of children celebrating Halloween nearby echoed sweetly in the air, but the shadows of the house loomed in their minds, a dark reminder of the terror they had experienced.

Over the next few days, they tried to forget what had happened, laughing it off as a mere adventure. But there was an unspoken understanding among them that they had danced with something far more sinister than they had ever anticipated.

And every Halloween afterward, a part of them feared that the whispers would return, that the Hollow Oak House would call out to the curious, and that one day, someone else would venture into its depths, unaware of the spirits lying in wait, eager for their next tale to weave into the fabric of its dark history.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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