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Where the Rain Waits

Some storms never pass—they just wait to be heard.

By ibrahimkhanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

The rain had fallen every day since Mara arrived in Larkspur Bay. Not in storms or violent tempests, but in a soft, persistent drizzle, like a memory the sky couldn't forget.

She came seeking quiet, not answers. After her mother’s passing, the noise of the city had become unbearable—buzzing lights, rushed footsteps, sympathy wrapped in rushed voices. Here, on the coast where her mother was born and never returned, Mara hoped to find... not closure, exactly, but space. Maybe silence. Maybe something she didn’t yet have the words for.

The cottage sat on the edge of the village, surrounded by wild rose bushes and overgrown stone paths. The locals called it “The Waiting House.” It was a name they said without emotion, but with a strange reverence, as if the place held a breath too long.

Inside, the cottage smelled of rain-soaked wood and dried herbs. Her mother had left it untouched, though she’d paid for its upkeep all her life. Mara found old letters in drawers, unopened boxes in the attic, and a photograph on the mantel—two women in raincoats standing beside a misty cliff. One was her mother. The other, Mara didn’t recognize.

Rain tapped against the windows each day. It whispered at night, like footsteps on the roof. It seemed to wait for her to listen.

On the third morning, she met Elias, the village’s quiet carpenter, who lived at the edge of the sea. He had salt in his beard and kindness in his eyes. He carried her a bundle of dry wood and said only, “This house remembers things.”

Mara asked, “What kind of things?”

He paused. “Things people tried to forget.”

Each day, she walked the trails behind the cottage, where fog clung to the trees like breath. She’d find old stone walls, half-swallowed by ivy, and broken benches facing nothing but mist. Birds didn’t sing here. Even the sea sounded distant, like it too waited for something.

On the sixth night, she dreamed of her mother.

In the dream, her mother was young, standing on the edge of the cliff from the photo, rain in her hair and a letter in her hand. “I couldn’t stay,” she said. “But I left you pieces.”

When Mara woke, there was mud on her feet. She had no memory of leaving her bed.

That morning, the rain felt warmer. The wind carried voices—not words, exactly, but the rise and fall of them. She followed them past the trees, past the edge of the known trail, until she reached a place not marked on any map.

It was a glade, soft and mossy, where the rain fell in slow spirals. At its center stood an old wooden bench, and on it, the woman from the photo—aged now, pale hair tucked beneath a scarf, her hands folded neatly on her lap.

“You look like her,” the woman said before Mara could speak. “But you hear the rain better.”

Mara’s voice came like a breath. “You knew my mother.”

“We waited for her to return,” the woman said. “But she didn’t. She left you instead.”

“I don’t understand.”

“She could hear the rain too. It told her stories. Secrets in the water, memories in the mist. But it frightened her. So she ran.”

Mara sat beside her, the bench creaking beneath their weight. “What does the rain want from me?”

“Not want,” the woman smiled gently. “It remembers. And when someone listens, it speaks.”

The woman pressed something into Mara’s hand—a small silver key, rusted with time. “There’s a drawer in the attic. The locked one. You’ll know.”

When Mara returned, dusk had fallen, and the rain had stopped—for the first time in days.

The key fit perfectly. Inside the drawer were pages. Dozens of them. Her mother’s handwriting, soft and looping, filled each line. Memories. Fears. Love. Stories of a girl who heard the rain and dreamed too much. Regrets for leaving, hopes for healing.

And at the bottom: a letter to Mara.

“If you’re reading this, I’m gone. I don’t know what you’ll find in Larkspur, but I hope you find peace. This place—this rain—it remembers everything. Maybe it will help you remember too. I love you. I always did, even when I didn’t know how to say it.”

That night, Mara stood on the cliff where her mother once stood. The fog curled around her like a shawl. The rain began again—but now, it felt like music.

Not grief. Not silence.

But memory. And forgiveness.

🌧️ End

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  • ibrahimkhan (Author)8 months ago

    nice story

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