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WHO IS SHE ?

( My first writing )

By Roosie RosePublished 7 months ago 2 min read
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Who is SHE ?

long ago a lingering memory in my mind which is still articulate and definite . The dream I perceive on a regular basis almost for a year. I still clearly remember each and every moment of that dream more clearly than a reality . Conveying that dream ," I saw a large dark forest surrounded by black thick fog which was suffocating me , choke me and strangle me". I began to run , run toward the exist only to found that there was no place to go , there was neither the beginning nor the exist , I was stuck helplessly , cluelessly , wandering here and there struggling in that dark meadow.

Suddenly I saw a silhouette , vague and blur but a long hair that reach up to her hips , I still remember that black silky long hair , the white fairy gown , that delicate slender soft hand which hold my hand with such intense affection which shatter my fear, terror and apprehension suddenly covering my body with tender and warmth . I call her multiple time ," mam , miss , Excuse me lady " with my quivering , shaking voice . I thought she might not hear it or she think me so insignificant and helpless that there was no reason to communicate further . she hold my hand tight like I would flee away if she loose her grip. I didn't even complain because no one has hold my hand so dearly and with such great affection clearly remembering not even my mom . speaking of my mom has she even ever smile while looking at me? I question myself after waking from that adorably eerie dream.

She slowly and gradually escort me toward the light , toward something similar to sun . I was very radiant that she help me to step out of the shadows . I finally regain my all resilience and call her to thank her for helping me for assisting me . suddenly she turn her face toward me and even before catching a glimpse of her face I snap out of that dream .

I turned to my wall looking at calendar with remarks and said , " Its already 111 days when will I be able to see her ". Its already been that many time I am seeing the same dream .

WHO MIGHT SHE BE ?

Dear reader , this is just a fictional writing . yes I even have a ending to this writing . If you find it interesting than please , comment for part 2 . which is super mysterious and this is my very first writing and it is unaided and unfiltered . open for your feedback and guidence . Thank you If you reach up to here . See you soon in Part 2 . keep thinking who might she be .

- Writer pen name : Rosie Rose.

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About the Creator

Roosie Rose

I believe writing is more than words on a page it is the power to transform pain into purpose, to heal what is broken, and to discover who we truly are. I don't have professional degree but I love what I write and read it millions of time .

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  • Ign0TuS6 months ago

    Wow, this gave me chills! The way you described the dream was so vivid. I’m so curious to know who she is! Can’t wait for Part 2. Amazing first piece, keep writing!

  • Bina Timilsina7 months ago

    Keep going. So who is she ?

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