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Whispers of Wings in Blooming Fields

A journey through colors, whispers, and the magic of nature.

By Mukhtiar AhmadPublished 8 months ago 4 min read
In a vibrant field of flowers and hummingbirds, a young artist discovers a hidden realm and a calling to awaken the world through the magic of nature’s whispers.

"The Whispering Wings"

The valley was alive with color. Petals of every hue—red, pink, yellow, blue—swayed in a soft breeze, while tall trees lined the horizon like guardians of a sacred realm. The scent of wildflowers hung in the air, thick with summer’s warmth. Above the blooms, hummingbirds danced, their wings a blur of iridescent green and ruby.

Every morning, Leena came to the field with her sketchbook. It was her place of peace, hidden from the clamor of the village below. Here, surrounded by the hum of life, she could draw, dream, and forget.

But today, something felt different.

The hummingbirds were unusually active, zipping between blossoms as if caught in a storm only they could sense. Leena sat cross-legged beneath the oldest tree, its roots a throne of twisted comfort, and opened her book. Her pencil traced the outline of a coneflower, but her eyes kept straying to the birds.

Then, she heard it—a whisper, like the flutter of wings too close to the ear.

She looked up. Nothing but the field and birds.

Leena shook her head and returned to sketching. A whisper again, this time clearer: “Follow the wings.”

She dropped her pencil. The sound hadn’t come from her mind—it was outside her, real. She scanned the meadow, heart thudding.

One hummingbird hovered alone near a bright red poppy. Its gaze, somehow intent, locked onto hers. It darted forward, paused, then zipped a few meters away, circling back as if beckoning.

“Follow the wings.”

Leena rose slowly. She followed.

The bird led her along a winding trail of flowers. Red to yellow, yellow to blue, pink to violet, as if guiding her through a painting. The trees grew taller, darker. She was deeper in the valley than she’d ever dared to go.

Suddenly, the bird stopped, hovering beside an ivy-covered archway made of stone. A place hidden in plain sight. Leena had never seen it before.

Heart racing, she stepped through.

The world changed.

It was still a field, still trees, still sky—but brighter, as if color had taken a breath and come alive. The flowers pulsed gently, as though exhaling fragrance. The air shimmered faintly, and time slowed.

Leena gasped. She was not alone.

Creatures unlike any she had seen emerged from the blooms. Delicate beings with wings like flower petals, eyes like dew. They hovered on currents of air, whispering in a language of wind and light.

One floated forward, its wings reflecting every shade of the rainbow. “You heard us,” it said, its voice like silver chimes. “You followed.”

Leena could barely speak. “What... are you?”

“We are the Bloomguard, watchers of the whispering fields. Few can hear us. Fewer still answer.”

“I didn’t know I could.”

“You have the heart of a seeker. And you were chosen.”

Leena felt her knees weaken. “Chosen for what?”

“To protect the breath of this world. Flowers speak, trees remember, hummingbirds carry stories in the beat of their wings. But the world forgets. People forget.”

A second creature spoke, its eyes dark and wise. “You will help them remember. Through your art, your voice, your spirit.”

Leena swallowed. “But I’m just one person.”

“One is enough to start a blooming.”

The hummingbird returned, landing softly on her shoulder. She felt its tiny heart, fast as lightning, against her skin.

The Bloomguard gathered around her. One placed a blossom in her hand—petals like fire, cool as moonlight.

“This is the memory of the field,” it said. “When you return, it will guide your hand. Draw with truth. Speak with beauty. Help them see.”

Leena closed her fingers around the flower. “Will I see you again?”

“When the wind calls and the colors stir, we will be near.”

With a soft burst of light, the creatures faded into the air. The field shimmered once more—and returned to its former state.

Leena stood beneath the archway, now just crumbling stone. The hummingbird gave one last glance before vanishing into the trees.

She walked back through the meadow, the flower clutched to her chest, her eyes open in a new way. The colors seemed brighter, the whispers louder. Every wingbeat was a story waiting to be told.

Back in her room that night, Leena opened her sketchbook. The flower glowed faintly, and her fingers moved with purpose.

She drew the coneflowers, the poppies, the birds. She drew the Bloomguard. She painted what she had seen and what she had felt. Her art spoke of wonder, of whispers in the wind, of the memory of nature.

And as people came to see her work, they too began to hear.

Not all could name it. But they smiled longer. Paused at flowers. Listened when the breeze passed.

In time, the field became sacred to many. Not because they had seen the Bloomguard, but because through Leena’s art, they remembered something old, something vital.

And on quiet mornings, when the dew was still fresh and the birds zipped like sparks of magic, some swore they heard a whisper.

“Follow the wings.”

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  • Nikita Angel8 months ago

    Wonderful 👍

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