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Whispers of the Moonlake

A Love That Burned Too Bright

By Shakespeare JrPublished 6 months ago 5 min read

Chapter One: The Lake That Remembers

They say the Moonlake sings only for those who have truly loved and lost.

No one knew this better than Elira, the girl with stardust in her hair and silence in her heart. For three long years, she walked the shores of the cursed Moonlake, whispering the name of the boy who vanished beneath its silver surface—Kael.

People said he was a myth. A dream. A shadow created by Elira’s loneliness.

But he was real. As real as the ache in her chest that never stopped blooming like winter roses.

Kael was not born of earth. He was born of moonlight—a celestial boy fallen from the stars during the blood eclipse. He landed in the forest of Eldra, glowing, gasping for breath, and completely unaware of who he was. Elira found him. And instead of fearing him, she fell in love.

Deeply. Instantly. Unapologetically.

She gave him her world. He gave her the universe.

Until the lake called him back.

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Chapter Two: A Love That Burned Too Bright

They were seventeen when they made the pact.

“If the lake ever tries to take me,” Kael had whispered, fingers brushing her cheek under the willow tree, “promise you’ll remember the way I loved you.”

“I’ll do more than remember,” she said. “I’ll find you. Even if I have to dive into the stars.”

He smiled, but sadness laced his eyes. The kind of sadness that only belongs to those who were never meant to stay.

On the night of the Solstice Festival, Kael disappeared. One moment he was dancing with her in the moonlight, and the next—he was gone. No trace. No sound. Just a shimmering ripple in the lake.

Elira didn’t cry.

She screamed.

She searched the forest. Climbed the cliffs. Spoke to every priest, witch, and wanderer. All said the same thing:

*"He’s gone. The Moonlake takes what doesn’t belong."*

But Elira believed in impossible things. Because love made her reckless.

And some hearts never learn to stop hoping.

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Chapter Three: The Stranger Beneath the Stars

Three years later, the lake began to hum.

It was soft at first—like a lullaby carried by the wind. Then louder. Clearer. Until the village of Mirrenwood began to whisper.

“Something stirs beneath the water.”

That night, Elira returned to the lake. She lit a lantern and waded in waist-deep, ignoring the freezing bite.

“I’m still here,” she said, voice cracking. “Come back to me, Kael. Please. I’m tired of talking to ghosts.”

The water shimmered.

And then she saw him.

Floating just beneath the surface, eyes closed, glowing faintly like he once did—Kael.

Her knees buckled. Tears blurred her vision. But before she could reach, he vanished again.

Only this time, he left behind something—a single silver feather.

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Chapter Four: The Binding Spell

Elira ran to the only person who never laughed at her grief—the blind witch of Eldra Woods, Maelen.

“This is a feather from the moon realm,” Maelen said, tracing it with trembling fingers. “It means he is alive. But trapped.”

“Where? How do I reach him?”

Maelen turned her pale eyes to the stars. “You must perform a binding spell. Love is the key. But so is pain. The kind that tears you apart.”

Elira didn’t hesitate. She offered her memories—each one a golden thread of laughter, kisses, stargazing, and whispered dreams. With every memory Maelen took, a part of Elira dimmed.

When the final thread was pulled from her soul, Maelen wept.

“You have given up everything,” she said.

“I’d give up the world,” Elira whispered, “if it means I can see him again.”

The spell opened a door—a portal in the lake that glowed with silver fire. Elira dove in without a second breath.

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Chapter Five: The World Between Worlds

She fell through stars and sorrow. Through memories that were no longer hers but felt like home.

And then she landed on a floating island under a violet sky.

The world between worlds.

There stood Kael—tall, radiant, but broken. Chains of starlight bound his wrists. His eyes widened when he saw her.

“Elira?” His voice trembled. “How—how do you remember me?”

“I don’t,” she said. “But my heart did.”

He wept then. For the first time. Because even in a world that didn’t allow them to exist, their love had found a way back.

But love, like all magic, has a price.

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Chapter Six: The Price of Eternity

To break the chains, Elira had to offer her last memory of Kael—the very feeling of loving him.

“It’s the only way,” he said softly, holding her hand. “And when you return, you’ll forget me. Completely.”

“I’d rather lose the memory than lose you forever,” she said.

So she did it.

The spell broke.

The stars screamed.

And the world between worlds began to collapse.

Kael pushed her through the portal. She cried out for him. Reached for him.

But his voice faded with the wind.

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Chapter Seven: The Girl Who Forgot

Elira woke up by the lake.

Empty.

Alone.

The village celebrated the sudden stillness of the water. No more whispers. No more disappearances. They believed the curse was over.

Elira couldn’t explain the ache in her chest. Or the boy who visited her dreams. Or why silver feathers appeared on her windowsill every full moon.

She didn’t remember Kael.

But her soul did.

And every time the lake shimmered, she felt a pull.

A longing.

A whisper.

**“Remember me.”**

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Epilogue: Love Beyond Time

Years passed. Elira became a storyteller. She wrote tales of moon boys and forgotten love. Of cursed lakes and violet skies. Of silver feathers and blind witches.

People said she had an incredible imagination.

But sometimes, when the moon was high, villagers swore they saw a glowing boy standing at the edge of the lake, waiting for the girl who once promised to dive into the stars for him.

And sometimes—just sometimes—they saw her walking beside him, hand in hand.

Even though she didn’t remember him...

She never stopped loving him.

Because real love doesn’t need a memory to live on.

It just needs a soul brave enough to carry it.

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[The End]

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About the Creator

Shakespeare Jr

Welcome to My Realm of Love, Romance, and Enchantment!

Greetings, dear reader! I am Shakespeare Jr—a storyteller with a heart full of passion and a pen dipped in dreams.

Yours in ink and imagination,

Shakespeare Jr

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