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Whispers in the old house

A night they would never forget

By Saim BillPublished 9 months ago 4 min read

The old house stood on a hill overlooking the town, its windows like dark eyes staring out into the night. Everyone in town knew the stories about the house, whispers of strange noises, shadows moving in the windows, and a feeling of unease that settled over anyone who got too close. But Liam, Maya, Chloe, and Noah didn't believe in ghost stories. They were friends, and they were curious.

It all started with a dare. Liam, always the bravest (or the most reckless, depending on who you asked), dared them to spend a night in the old house. Maya, the skeptic, rolled her eyes but secretly felt a thrill of excitement. Chloe, the artist, saw it as a chance for inspiration. And Noah, the quiet observer, was just happy to be with his friends.

They packed flashlights, snacks, and a healthy dose of skepticism. As they walked up the hill towards the house, the air grew colder, and the wind seemed to whisper through the trees. Even Liam felt a shiver down his spine.

The house was even creepier inside. Dust lay thick on everything, and the air smelled of damp and decay. Moonlight streamed through the broken windows, casting long, eerie shadows. They explored the rooms, their flashlights cutting through the darkness. They found old furniture covered in sheets, cobwebs hanging like ghostly curtains, and a strange symbol carved into the floor of the main room.

"See? Just an old house," Maya said, trying to sound confident, but her voice trembled slightly.

Then, things started to happen.

A door slammed shut on its own. A cold breeze swept through the room, even though all the windows were closed. They heard whispers, faint and indistinct, that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Chloe's flashlight flickered and died, plunging them into near darkness.

Liam, despite his initial bravery, started to get nervous. Maya's skepticism began to crumble. Even Noah, usually calm and collected, looked uneasy. Only Chloe seemed strangely excited, her eyes shining in the dim light.

"This is amazing!" she whispered, pulling out her sketchbook. "I have to draw this!"

They decided to stick together, their initial bravado replaced by a growing sense of unease. They huddled in the main room, the strange symbol on the floor seeming to pulse with a faint, dark energy.

As the night wore on, the strange occurrences intensified. They heard footsteps on the stairs, even though they were all in the same room. Shadows flickered in their peripheral vision. And the whispers grew louder, clearer, forming words they couldn't quite understand, but that sounded ancient and menacing.

Then, they saw it.

A dark shape, swirling and indistinct, began to form in the center of the room, above the symbol on the floor. It seemed to suck the light out of the room, making the shadows grow deeper and the air grow colder.

Liam grabbed Maya's hand, his heart pounding. Chloe, still sketching, looked up, her eyes wide with a mixture of fear and fascination. Noah, surprisingly, stepped forward.

"What is that?" he whispered, his voice steady.

The dark shape seemed to respond. The whispers grew louder, coalescing into a single, booming voice that echoed in their minds.

"You have awakened me," the voice said. "Now you will pay."

Fear turned to panic. They tried to run, but the doors wouldn't open. The windows were sealed shut. They were trapped.

Chloe, surprisingly, was the one who acted. She threw her sketchbook at the dark shape, yelling, "Leave us alone!"

The sketchbook passed right through it, but the sudden act of defiance seemed to disrupt the shape. It flickered and wavered.

Liam, inspired by Chloe's bravery, grabbed a heavy candlestick from a nearby table and threw it. Maya followed suit, throwing a book. Noah, surprisingly strong, shoved a heavy chair towards the shape.

Their combined efforts, fueled by fear and desperation, seemed to have an effect. The dark shape recoiled, the booming voice fading.

"You cannot stop me," the voice hissed, "I will return."

Then, as quickly as it had appeared, the dark shape vanished. The doors flew open, and the windows shattered, letting in fresh air and moonlight.

They stumbled out of the house, gasping for breath, their bodies shaking. They ran down the hill, not stopping until they reached the safety of the town.

They never talked about what they had seen that night. They tried to explain it away, to convince themselves that it had all been a trick of the light, a shared hallucination. But deep down, they knew the truth. They had awakened something dark, something ancient, something supernatural.

Their friendship, once tested by love and loss, was now forged in fear and a shared secret. They knew that whatever they had faced that night, it wasn't gone. It was out there, waiting. And they knew, with a chilling certainty, that one day, they would have to face it again. They were bound together, not just by friendship, but by a shared experience that had changed them forever. They had looked into the darkness, and the darkness had looked back. And now, they were forever marked. The old house still stood on the hill, silent and watchful. And the friends knew, in their hearts, that their adventure was far from over.

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About the Creator

Saim Bill

I’m a passionate article writer who loves sharing ideas, stories, and insights with the world.

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