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When Rain Wrote Our Names

A Chance Encounter Beneath the Thunderstorm

By Julia ChristaPublished 7 months ago 2 min read

The rain had not stopped for hours. It poured down the windows of the Crestmont Hotel like melting silver, turning the city beyond into a blur of shadow and glimmer. Inside the softly lit lobby, the scent of brewed coffee lingered, and the fireplace crackled faintly, trying to pretend the night wasn’t so cold.

Aarav had just flown in from a tech conference—his third city this month. He was sharp in a quiet way, dressed in business casual with tired eyes that held too many tabs open. He wasn’t looking for anything. Just a room, maybe a strong coffee, and silence.

Mira, on the other hand, had missed her connecting train after a literary event downtown. A writer, with a heart stitched from metaphors and midnight thoughts, she hated unplanned nights—until now. Her umbrella had flipped inside out the moment she’d stepped outside, and the hotel was the only light that felt warm.

They met at the reception—both asking for the last room available.

“One room,” the receptionist said with a tight smile. “One bed. You can flip a coin or share. Up to you.”

They looked at each other, unsure whether to laugh or leave.

“You look like someone who wouldn’t snore,” Mira said with a sly grin, her fingers wrapped around the handle of her soaked luggage.

“You look like someone who’d write about this in a book,” Aarav replied, deadpan, but his lips twitched with amusement.

An hour later, they were in that one room. The rain played a soft rhythm against the windows as they sat on opposite ends of the bed, wrapped in hotel robes, sipping from warm mugs of tea. They spoke cautiously at first—jobs, favorite cities, worst travel fails. Then deeper—childhood dreams, the last time they cried, the secret fears no one else knew.

There was no electricity for a while, just candlelight. The room, dim and golden, felt like it had been carved out of time.

Mira laughed too loudly at his dry humor. Aarav listened too carefully to her stories.

It wasn’t love at first sight.

It was love at second laugh.

By midnight, they had inched closer. By 2 a.m., she had fallen asleep on his shoulder. He didn’t move, not even to adjust his arm that was falling asleep under her weight. Instead, he watched her face, memorizing the moment like a line from a poem he never wanted to forget.

The rain stopped just before dawn.

But the story had only just begun.

Dear Readers,
Have you ever had a moment that felt like it came out of a movie—a coincidence too perfect to explain? Maybe you met someone on a train, at a bookstore, or during a thunderstorm? I’d love to hear: What was your most unexpected, unforgettable encounter with a stranger? Share your story in the comments—we might just find more love stories hidden in the rain. 🌧️💫

Love

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