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What should I have done?

The thief or The priest?

By Elizabeth UshiePublished 3 years ago 3 min read
What should I have done?
Photo by Ning Shi on Unsplash

Oh, how ones fate changes within a split second...

In the quiet town of Greenwood, there lived a notorious thief named Lucas. He was known for his agile skills and cunning nature, always managing to evade capture. Lucas had a reputation for targeting wealthy families, seeking to relieve them of their valuables while they slept peacefully in their homes.

One fateful night, Lucas set his sights on the Jenkins family, renowned for their opulent mansion and extravagant lifestyle. Little did he know that this particular heist would be unlike any he had ever undertaken. As he skillfully bypassed the intricate security measures, he made his way inside, ready to fill his bag with the family's treasures.

Unbeknownst to Lucas, a sinister secret was concealed within the walls of the Jenkins mansion. Father Michaels, the local priest, had been harboring a dark desire and had been preying on vulnerable children in the community. Tonight, he had set his sights on the Jenkins' youngest daughter, Emily.

As Lucas silently moved through the house, he overheard a muffled cry for help. Intrigued, he followed the sound, leading him to a small study where Father Michaels had cornered Emily. Rage surged through Lucas as he witnessed the depravity unfolding before him.

Without a second thought, Lucas sprung into action. Bursting into the room, he caught the priest off guard, causing him to momentarily lose his grip on Emily. Taking advantage of the distraction, Lucas swiftly moved toward the terrified girl and gently pulled her behind him.

Father Michaels, seething with anger, launched himself at Lucas, attempting to overpower him. But Lucas, driven by the desire to protect Emily and fueled by years of evading capture, fought back with a fierce determination. A desperate struggle ensued, each man fighting for their own twisted agenda.

Outside the study, the sound of commotion caught the attention of Mr. and Mrs. Jenkins, who had been blissfully unaware of the danger their daughter was in. Worried for Emily's safety, they rushed toward the source of the disturbance, only to find Lucas locked in a battle with the priest.

With renewed strength, Lucas managed to deliver a decisive blow, causing Father Michaels to stumble and fall to the ground, defeated. The Jenkins family, stunned by the scene before them, quickly realized the gravity of the situation.

Grateful for his bravery, Mr. Jenkins called the authorities while Mrs. Jenkins embraced Lucas and Emily, tears of relief streaming down her face. The police arrived promptly and apprehended Father Michaels, putting an end to his reign of terror.

News of Lucas's heroic act spread through the town, transforming his reputation from a notorious thief to a reluctant hero. The community hailed him as a savior, grateful for his quick thinking and courage in the face of evil.

As for Lucas, the encounter with the Jenkins family had a profound impact on him. He realized that there were greater injustices in the world than the pursuit of material wealth. Determined to make amends for his past deeds, he decided to use his skills for the greater good, assisting the police in capturing criminals and protecting the innocent.

From that day forward, who would have thought- Lucas became known as the Guardian Thief, a mysterious figure who operated in the shadows to ensure justice prevailed. He vowed to protect the vulnerable, using his unique set of skills to bring peace to the town of Greenwood.

And so, the once-infamous thief, Lucas, found redemption and purpose in his unexpected encounter, forever changing the lives of the Jenkins family and inspiring others to believe in the power of transformation.

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