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VibrationMan

Eyes That See Internally (Thank you momma for being my inspiration)

By Rick Henry Christopher Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2024
VibrationMan created using StarryAI

Little four-pound Johnny Vitelli was born nine weeks premature. His mom called him her little runt. But she didn’t realize that Johnny was blind and with weak legs. He was brought into a world of pain and darkness.

Johnny had an ability that no one could see. He was able to feel vibrations and subtle shifts around him.

He relied on a walker to get around. The kids at school ridiculed him calling him “Robot Legs” and “Slowpoke.” Bothered by this Johnny withdrew into solitude, honing senses that evolved as he grew older.

By the age of 15, Johnny could anticipate movement and distant tremors and sense emotions like fear or anger. Johnny learned to map his surroundings through subliminal and subconscious sensations.

One day, Johnny experienced a severe asthma attack, landing in the ICU where he was put on a ventilator. A power surge hit the hospital which sent electrical waves through Johnny’s ventilator that put him into a state of shock. In a matter of minutes, he flatlined. His prognosis was bleak. The doctor placed the defibrillator paddles on his chest. Nothing happened so he increased the electrical charge and tried again. The shock was so intense that Johnny's entire body began to convulse. Within a matter of seconds, his heart was beating and his breathing restored.

When Johnny awoke, his body and senses were transformed. His legs were stronger, his senses were heightened, and his perception was extraordinary. He could read people’s minds and foresee situations before they happened.

Though his eyes remained sightless, Johnny’s new extrasensory powers gave him the insight to navigate the world with precision and outwit even the most sinister foes. In that ICU, VibrationMan was born, ready to fight the darkest evils with powers far beyond sight.

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With Love, RHC ❤️

AdventureFantasyMicrofictionPsychologicalSci FiShort Storythriller

About the Creator

Rick Henry Christopher

Writing fulfills my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.

I’m an open book. I’m not afraid to show my face or speak my mind

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  • Sarah Danaher11 months ago

    Very creative and with good character building. He is a truly unique superhero.

  • gimy tuntabout a year ago

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  • Go Johnny Go! Very imaginative ✅.

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Vibration man, so awesome. I wish he had gotten his sight, but he has four more, so sweet a story, Congrats Rick.

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Awesome job Rick. This is my favorite piece you’ve written

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Your super hero made Top Story , Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉🥳🥳🥳🦸🏼‍♂️

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Wow! 💖Congratulations on your top story! 🎉🎉🎉

  • William hanryabout a year ago

    Wow, Johnny's story is incredibly compelling! It’s amazing how adversity can lead to extraordinary abilities, and his transformation from a vulnerable boy to a superhero is truly inspiring. I love how his journey shows that even in the darkest moments, there’s potential for incredible change and strength. VibrationMan sounds like a hero with a unique and powerful edge—can’t wait to see how he uses his new abilities to make a difference! I wanna write story on this platform i am new here. I face a problem JSON error. Can you tell me how i shear my thoughts and what is JSON rule. Here is my blog: https://propchax.com/smart-install-maker-crack/

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Let me start by saying I love that this was inspired by your mom. I think yoiu've done a marvelous job of building the character and the circumstances that made him a superhero. Well, done, Rick, and congratulations!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Nice 👍 story!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This is a superb concept. Well done - congratulations on Top Story!

  • Testabout a year ago

    This is an amazing! Well-written.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I feel like he was half way there withouth the shock!

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Great character and original. Congratulations on the top story Rick

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Congrats on your Top Story!🎉🥳⭐️

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Awesome work—what a guy!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic entry!! Love it!!! Congratulations on Top Story!¡❤️❤️💕

  • Not me thinking of something inappropriate when I saw your title hahahahahhaa. So glad Johnny was revived. Loved your story!

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Very liek a Marvel trope, where someone disadvantaged arises from a difficult situation to become a hero. Well-wrought!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Great origin story, Rick. I like the idea of heightened perception.

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    Awesome 🌹🌹

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    I like this character and his origin story. Hopefully, he’ll do good things for humanity.

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Brilliant work Cousin!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Nice Character and story, Rick! I was intrigued the whole way.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Nice one Great back story and character development

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