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Two of a Kind equals a Pear

Is it wrong to Grant a final Request ?

By JBazPublished 4 years ago Updated 4 years ago 9 min read

Some call it a felony. I call it a promise. No matter the outcome, I would do it again.

Besides, it really isn't kidnapping. Well, he was napping, but he is no kid. He hadn't been one for about eighty-seven years. I don't know the exact age when someone is no longer referred to as a 'kid.' I am guessing around five years old. The point is, I did not kidnap anyone.

The sun had yet to rise when I begin the two-hundred-mile journey. Giving me time to think and change my mind. Therefore, I cannot later claim what I did was impulsive. A back-pack full of items I need are on the seat next to me. Once I commit there is no turning back.

Three hours later, I did what I came to do. It was easier than I thought. Honestly there wasn't even a struggle. In and out, within ten minutes. Okay, fifteen with parking.

I was now heading back. Shaking from the adrenaline pumping through my body, maybe it was the three cups of coffee I consumed on the way down. Either way I was buzzing.

Glancing over at the unconscious person next to me, my mind wandered, reminiscing about life with my grandfather on his orchard. My parents perished in a car crash twenty-five years ago. I was nine and with them at the time. I lived, they didn’t. I still don’t remember anything. He became my guardian. Ironically we were driving out to see him when the accident occurred.

He taught me everything, about farming and life. Especially our Japanese culture and traditions. He sent me to college to learn how to grow a business, how to run the orchard. When he retired, I took over the farm. His two remaining children had no urge to continue the family trade. Our award-winning pears grew from a simple farm to become a main supplier for all North America. I adore this man. I would do anything for him, hence my actions that now led me to commit a so-called crime.

Snapping out of my memories. The light in my rear-view mirror shines with a warm glow. Another beautiful morning. The figure next to me stirs. The meds were wearing off. I adjust the blanket, covering him.

My cell phone rings, I knew this was coming.

Politely I say, "Hello, Lincoln speaking."

"Lincoln, where the hell are you?" My aunt’s voice is high pitched and hurts my ears. Thank goodness for Bluetooth.

"Why, who wants to know?" Smiling to myself, knowing I just raised her already high blood pressure.

"Lincoln, turn around and bring him back."

I glance at my grandfather, still sleeping peacefully. "Not going to happen aunty."

"This is crazy, why are you doing this? He is an old man who needs professional care."

"He asked me."

"He isn't capable."

"When was the last time you asked him what he wants?" I snap.

"Now, that isn't fair you know he...."

" I know because I listen. Have you truly listened to what he says?”

"Oh, don't be dramatic, we have a life to live. That why we have him in a home with proper caregivers to see to his eve...."

Cutting her off again, no longer polite. "They don't care for him, they drug him. That’s his life now. He deserves better and you know it."

Silence.

"Lincoln, I know this is hard for you. He’s very sick and has Alzheimer's. He isn't going to get better." Her voice is calm, and kind. I hear pain as she says this.

She is right. My aunt Sara isn't a bad person. She loves her father, but I don't think she knows how I feel. I see things others can't. I know him better than they do. It comes from working with him since I was a child. As an adult our bond grew.

People say we are quite the pair. They meant it as a pun because of the pear orchard.

"Lincoln, you haven't committed a serious felony. But if you go through with what I think you have planned." She pauses. I hear sobbing. "Please bring my father back."

Felony? I have done no such thing. Then I glance into the cargo bed of the truck and see the wheelchair. Ok so I may have stolen that. As for the rest. I can live with what I am about to do.

"He asked me for this. I brought it to the attention of the medical staff, and they did nothing."

"Lincoln?" My grandfathers voice breaks through our conversation.

My heart beats a little faster, he is awake, and he recognizes me. "I have to go aunty, goodbye."

Before it fully disconnects I hear her call out, "No wait, Lincoln don't do this…"

I pull the truck over, turn the engine off and look at my hero. He is smaller than he once was, frail. But his eyes are what they have always been. Strong, and intelligent. Taking in the surroundings, awareness creeps onto his face. Turning to me he says in a surprisingly strong voice.

"Where are we?"

"Twenty miles from our orchards." I reply.

I watch his mind working. He opens the door and steps outside. I race around to make sure he doesn't fall. I round the back of the truck and see him standing tall, shoulders straight, surveying the land.

"Why are we on the back road?"

Knowing the police were called, I detoured off the main highway an hour ago.

"It's a long story Grandpa."

Bracing himself, he casually leans on the door. "Am I supposed to be here?"

"You belong here."

"Are you taking me home?" I could hear the child in him asking.

Not trusting my voice, I just nod. This was the most lucid I had seen him in months.

Smiling he says, "Well, what are we waiting for?" He climbs back in the cab with ease.

Running back to the driver’s side I catch a glimpse of him through the windshield, looking like a child on his way to summer camp. A nervous smile upon his face.

I speed, no longer concerned about drawing attention. Looking to my grandfather I am satisfied with my decision, knowing this is the right choice.

He rolls the window down and sticks his head out. The wispy hairs upon his head flow and dance in the wind. Stretching an arm out, he surfs the wind. He turns and smiles at me. “I’m flying.”

My heart bursts with love.

Suddenly his demeanor changes. Rolling up the window he says very seriously. "I was hoping you could do something for me. I have asked the doctors and they always decline my request." Taking a deep breath, he looks straight ahead and continues. "I know what I am asking may get you into trouble, but..."

I reach out and place my hand on his shoulder. "We talked about this already Grandfather. Don’t worry." I accept, knowing there will be consequences.

We drive in silence; the smile returns to his face. I wonder if what I am doing is right. Who is this hurting? It's still his life and his wishes should be honored.

Fifteen minutes later we pull into a section of our orchard. I park behind one of the larger trees and place him gently into the wheelchair. Lifting his face to the sun he welcomes the warmth. I wheel him down the path between the fruit laden trees. Pears hang like ornaments on a Christmas tree, their skin glistening in the afternoon light. He takes in a deep breath and speaks. "This is a good crop."

Stretching an aged hand across himself and over his shoulder he searches. I hold mine out for him to grasp. "You have done good, very good indeed."

My chest swells with pride.

We come to an open area. The view is spectacular, the entire Orchard is laid out before him. We stare in silence.

"Grandfather, can I get you anything?"

For the first time today, I see confusion in his face. He struggles to make sense of what is happening. Then he looks out upon his land, and remembers. "I would like some tea."

I pull out a thermos and pour him a cup of lukewarm tea, milk, no sugar. I add two crushed pills. He holds it delicately in both hands and sips.

I want to ask him if he is ready. Before I can get the words out my cell phone rings.

"Hello Uncle." I softly answer.

"Where are you?" No introduction or pleasantries, straight to the point.

Cryptically I reply. "We are where we are meant to be."

"Dammit Lincoln, you have gone too far this time. He is old and frail. Travelling long distances can seriously hurt him."

Looking over to the 'frail old man' I respond. "He looks fine to me."

“We know where you are headed. Just tell us where on the farm you are."

"If you figured the first part out, you should know where we are."

Silence.

"Lincoln, is he happy?"

Taken back by the inquiry, it sounds so soulful. I assure him. "Very happy."

"Has he asked you …to do something?"

"Yes, every time I visited him. Has he asked you as well?"

"Only once, and we refused." His voice is quiet. "I couldn't. I wish I had your strength.”

"Oh."

Another pause.

He whispers a warning, "Sara is with the police, they are on their way." With that he hangs up.

I set my phone on silent and walk over to my idol.

I hear him singing a child's song. 'I grow from flowers pretty and white...I like the Sun with plenty of shine, but in a cool climate I do fine...'

Kneeling in front of him I join him in the song he taught me when I was young. We finish the tune together.

I fear he is slipping back; I ask him. "Grandpa are you ready?"

He is straining to comprehend what I am asking. His eyes pierce into me, then drift past to stare behind me. I turn around to see what caught his attention. On the tree is the most beautiful pear I have ever seen. The narrow neck gripping the stalk, curving down to form a perfect oval shape. The color of the skin is a translucent green on a body of bright yellow. It glows.

We have witnessed perfection. I know it is time. I begin rummaging inside my backpack. In the distance I hear sirens. Dust billows in the air, behind the speeding cruisers. I dig deeper, and retrieve my blade. Grandfather is back to humming the tune. I walk softly so I do not disturb him.

The wailing from the sirens is louder now. They turn onto the road entering the orchard.

Gripping my knife I slice once, then pressing into the flesh, I cut again.

When the Police arrive, I am kneeling in front of my grandfather. My hands sticky, I toss the blade on the grass and rub my hands with the soil that nurtures our trees. They are too late.

A commanding voice breaks the peace "Lincoln, lie face down on the ground."

I look up, and freeze. Guns are drawn and aiming directly at me. Raising my hands, I throw myself down onto the dirt. Strong hands grip my arms, forcefully twisting them behind me.

Aunt Sara’s voice cries out "Dad, oh daddy..." She runs towards us.

They hoist me up. I’m feeling dazed and confused. Everyone is talking, there is so much noise, I’m having a hard time focusing.

Suddenly a soft song fills the air. "I like the Sun with plenty of shine, but in a cool climate I do fine..."

Everyone freezes, all eyes turn to the man in the wheelchair. Grandfather is humming and smiling, chewing on one of the best pears in the country.

"He's alive?" Sara blurts out.

"Of course he's alive, why wouldn't he be?" I shoot back.

The officer who is gripping my arms, rather forcefully I might add, speaks. "We were told you were going to kill your grandfather."

"What?" I stammer out. "Why, what on earth made you think I was going to kill him?"

Sara pipes in, "Because he asked you too, you said so. He asked us once, but we refused to listen to such a thing."

I say honestly. "He never asked me to do that."

"Well, what did he ask you to do?”

"He wanted to return to the farm and eat one of his pears, but the doctors kept refusing. Something about travel and dietary restrictions."

Everyone pauses, observing the little ole man in the chair. Watching him nibble on the pear I had cut up for him. A very sticky and juicy pear indeed.

With a huge grin on his face, grandfather looks to me and asks. "Lincoln, may I have one more please?"

I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my story. If you enjoyed it, please leave a heart, and help yourself to view my other writings. Should you decided to leave a tip or share the story with others, it is not expected, but always appreciated.

Jason,

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About the Creator

JBaz

I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.

I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.

Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.

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  • Rick Henry Christopher 6 months ago

    Jason, you have written many great stories in your time. But it is this one that sits far above the rest. This story has a gut-wrenching heart and soul. It resonates like none other.

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Fabulous ✍️♦️♦️♦️

  • Laura Pruettabout a year ago

    Wonderful job!

  • Sweileh 8882 years ago

    Interesting and delicious content, keep giving more

  • This is the story that made me a JBaz fan!!!

  • Such a poignant story with a twist! I sure was fooled. Delightful ending… “ With a huge grin on his face, grandfather looks to me and asks. "Lincoln, may I have one more please?" Excellent title too!🤩

  • Sian N. Clutton2 years ago

    Beautiful. Utterly beautiful.

  • Judey Kalchik 2 years ago

    I wonder what my last and biggest wish would be? Thank you for the small details that made such a brilliant story come alive

  • Test2 years ago

    Awesome story!!! Loved it!!!❤️

  • Alena Whittle2 years ago

    I like this jason Read amazing blog https://bestacademicexperts.co.uk/

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I knew it was the pear, so he was asking other people to end his life then, or maybe they misunderstood what he wanted. Clever story.

  • Test2 years ago

    I love this Jason, it's such a heartfelt a beautifully written story about the love this young man had for his grandfather!! Great work!

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    First of all, now I want a pear! And then, I loved your story and your loyalty and spirit! I'm still smiling :)

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Oh you! You had me! 😁

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    I LOVED this. That intro was perfection. Can’t comment much without potential spoilers for other readers but 😮😮. Also, that description of the pear was so amazingly vivid.

  • Tiz Moore3 years ago

    I was hooked with the first line.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    I love this story and really enjoyed the reread. Previously hearted.

  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    I love how this story wraps up! :)

  • The time I spent reading this mini masterpiece was well worth it. Not only was it entertaining but it was also a learning experience in writing. Thank you.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    What a fantastic story! It was so sweet but also full of suspense. Very well done :)

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