Fiction logo

Title:"The Monkey's Paw: A Wish's Whisper"

Subtitle:"When wishes come true, the price might be darker than imagined."

By Fannick😇Published 2 years ago • 3 min read
Title:"The Monkey's Paw: A Wish's Whisper"
Photo by Syed Ahmad on Unsplash

The Monkey's Paw: A Wish's Whisper

In a quaint, secluded village nestled within an ancient forest, lived an elderly couple named Henry and Margaret. Their life was simple but richly woven with love and routines that kept them content. However, a silent longing sprouted within them – a yearning to see their son, Thomas, who had perished in a tragic accident years ago. Little did they know that their serene existence was about to be shattered by the sinister echoes of fate.

One rainy evening, an old friend, Sergeant Morris, visited the couple, bringing with him tales of distant lands and arcane artifacts. Among these was a relic bound by a dark history – a withered monkey's paw, said to grant three wishes but at a cursed cost.

Margaret, half intrigued and half skeptical, asked, "What could this old paw possibly grant us?"

Sergeant Morris sighed, "It's not about what it grants, but how. Wishes come true, but they twist upon themselves."

Despite his warnings, Henry and Margaret found themselves drawn to the macabre curiosity. After some persuasion, Morris reluctantly left the paw with them, hoping they’d heed his caution.

That night, with trepidation and desire intertwined, Henry held the paw and made their first wish, "I wish Thomas to return to us." A gust of wind howled through the house, extinguishing the flickering candlelight. They waited in anxious silence, but nothing happened.

Days turned to weeks, and the couple's hope began to wane, returning to their solemn reality. But one baleful night, a knock echoed through their home. Margaret, with a heart pounding like a drum, rushed to the door. Standing there was Thomas, their dear son, but not as they remembered him. His eyes were hollow shadows, his face a mask of lifeless tranquility.

Thomas's return brought joy mingled with dread. Though he was physically present, his demeanor was cold and unsettling. Shadows seemed to gather around him, and an unfamiliar aura chilled the house. Henry began to regret their wish, realizing that Thomas's return defied nature in a grotesque manner.

Desperation clawed at their sanity as Margaret clung to the belief that the paw could right their wrongs. With frenzied determination, she and Henry made their second wish, "I wish for Thomas to be as he was in life." The paw twisted, and the air grew dense, but no change came upon their son. Thomas remained a spectral echo of his former self, his presence a haunting reminder of their tampering with destiny.

Terrors mounted as nights were filled with eerie sounds and unspoken fears. The village whisperers spoke of the unnatural aura surrounding the couple’s home, suggesting that the price of their wish was far from paid.

In a final act of desperation, Henry clutched the paw one last time, tears streaming down his weathered face. "I wish for Thomas’s troubled spirit to find peace, to rest beyond this world’s grasp." The paw convulsed in his hand, and a sharp, bitter wind swept through the house. Thomas’s eyes blinked once, and he vanished into the night, like smoke dissolving in the wind.

Silence fell upon the home. The air felt lighter, but a profound sadness lingered. They had paid a terrible price for meddling with the unknown. The paw lay inert, its sinister power finally spent.

Henry and Margaret mourned anew, but this time, they found solace in knowing Thomas was at peace. They buried the paw deep within the forest, vowing never to speak of it again.

Yet, in the quiet nights, as the wind rustled through the trees, whispers of the past echoed, reminding them of the monkey’s paw – a relic of curses and twisted desires, forever a lesson in the delicate dance between wishes and fate.

MysteryHorror

About the Creator

Fannick😇

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.