The Whispering Husk
Horror Fiction For World Coconut Day
It's World Coconut Day, so we give credence to a fruit that is the lifeblood of the tropics. The juice within is refreshing-- but tempting to a grieving heart.
It can make you do what you shouldn't.
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Henri was hungry; the call of island coconuts was too strong, even at midnight. He cracked the too-soft shell with a practised swing of his axe.
It cracked open. Too quickly. And--
A tremor of recognition shivered from within.
The white liquid moved--slightly.
A faint whisper---and memory.
His grandfather's smile. And voice.
"Henri..."
His name whispered, strained, billowing through the palms like smoke through the frigid air. The hair on his scrawny arms stood--yet, it was a sound he longed to hear.
The voice cracked with a soft plea.
"Drink deep. The only way to end the strife."
He took a first sip, then stopped, as though guilt had sealed his lips.
The coconut water bore odd, trembling ripples-- it had the pulse of something--
Living.
Waiting.
He looked at the cup towards his lips, then stopped.
And again.
Each lift brought the cup closer to his lips.
Each time the ripples grew stronger, thickening.
Shimmering.
A hush filled the room-- it was pregnant with an unacceptable--yet irresistible--promise.
Henri succumbed to the husk's call--his young form collapsed against a tree. Its branches were outstretched, waiting to catch him.
The husk trembled violently, beating like a trapped heart.
Henri stiffened. His body began to hollow. His skin--too tight, sinking inward.
Fingers-- Bent. Out of place.
Something inside the husk seemed to be answering Death's call. Henri's fingers curled around its emptiness, its voice braiding with his into a single, indistinguishable sound.
The husk had found its echo.
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Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.
For Mikeydred's September prompt:
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

Comments (6)
I guess it's a good thing I don't like coconuts!
Wonderful and creepy. I loved the descriptions of what happened to him. I could envision it as I read. Well done!
Ohhh this one feels like a tropical ghost story told around a fire at midnight. Makes me side-eye every innocent coconut water bottle in the grocery store now.
ooh creepy and great for my challenge
I didn’t even know there was a World Coconut Day! The husk beating like a heart really stayed with me.
I love coconut my Dad did too ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️