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🌧️ The Weight of Raindrops

Sometimes the smallest moments drown the loudest storms.

By shakir hamidPublished 3 months ago • 2 min read

The rain began the day Samuel decided to stop waiting.

He stood at the edge of the pier, his reflection trembling in the dark water, and wondered if the sky could feel as heavy as his chest.

He had written her a letter—a short one, only seven lines—and folded it into his coat pocket.

It wasn’t a love letter.

It was an apology that came too late.

He met Clara five years ago in a bookstore that smelled like dust and lavender. She had been sitting on the floor, surrounded by open books, tracing her fingers over lines of poetry like they were secrets meant only for her.

He asked what she was reading.

She said, “Something about rain and forgiveness.”

He didn’t know what she meant then. He does now.

They fell in love the way storms form—slowly at first, then all at once.

But love, Samuel learned, could also flood and drown.

He was a musician. She was a painter. Both of them dreamed too loudly for a small apartment with thin walls and unpaid bills. The fights started as whispers, then grew into thunder.

Until one night, she walked out with only her brushes and a suitcase, leaving him with silence so thick it hurt to breathe.

A year passed.

He played in bars that smelled of regret and cheap whiskey. She sold her art in a city that forgot her name.

He tried to move on, but every song he wrote came out sounding like her.

Every note was a confession.

Then, one rainy afternoon, he received a message from a gallery—“Clara Myles: Final Exhibition.”

The word final sat in his throat like stone.

He went. He had to.

The gallery was small, quiet, and full of people pretending to understand pain.

On the far wall hung her last piece: a painting of a man standing in the rain, staring at the sea. The strokes were wild, desperate, alive.

The plaque beneath read:

“The One Who Waited.”

Samuel stood frozen. His hands trembled, not from cold but memory.

That night on the pier—the night she left—he had stood in that same pose, under that same rain. She had painted his grief without ever seeing him again.

He found the curator, a woman with kind eyes and a tired smile.

“She passed two weeks ago,” she said softly. “Cancer. She painted until she couldn’t hold a brush.”

The world went quiet.

Even the rain outside seemed to stop for her.

Now, Samuel stood at the pier again, five years older, letter in his pocket, her name on his lips.

He unfolded the paper with shaking fingers.

“I was wrong,” he’d written. “You were the calm, not the storm.”

He tore the letter into pieces and let the wind take them.

Each scrap danced into the air, then fell like white petals into the water.

The rain came harder. He didn’t move.

In the distance, lightning lit up the sea, and for a moment—just a moment—he saw her.

Clara. Barefoot, smiling, holding a paintbrush dipped in starlight.

And then she was gone.

Samuel returned home, soaked and silent.

He opened his old guitar case and found her painting tucked inside. He didn’t remember placing it there.

He hung it on his wall.

Every morning after that, he’d wake to the sound of rain and whisper,

“Clara, I’m still here.”

And though she never answered, sometimes—when the morning light touched the frame just right—the man in the painting looked like he was smiling.

AdventureClassicalFablefamilyFan FictionFantasyHistoricalHolidayHorrorHumorLoveMicrofictionMysteryPsychologicalShort StoryYoung Adult

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shakir hamid

A passionate writer sharing well-researched true stories, real-life events, and thought-provoking content. My work focuses on clarity, depth, and storytelling that keeps readers informed and engaged.

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