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The Waiting

And the inevitable disappointment

By Poppy Published 3 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

I pressed my pen to paper

The running writing letters

Mapping out a path to

Bring him back

Home to me

I burnt a candle in the window

Musk and mango scented

The flame fighting against

The outside wind that crept closer

I rain on the flowers out front

With my flimsy watering can

Hoping the blooming tulips

Call to him from afar

I hope and wait and

Scream with impatience

I wait some more

and more

and more

He doesn't come back.

Love

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Poppy

poetry in progress

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    We keep candles in our windows to light his way home, though we know that he has found a better home from which he will never return, except in our hearts & memories.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Awww, I felt the longing and then the impatience! Waiting is the pits. Wonderful work :)

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