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The Voodoo Queen's Curse

A Tale of Love, Power, and the Spirits That Haunt Us

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
Photo Credit:https://www.deviantart.com/elysium56/art/Voodoo-queen-6-1013775343

People who dared to say the name Marie Laveau, the Voodoo Queen, got chills. She lived in the middle of New Orleans, where the humid air stuck like a shroud and the Mississippi River whispered stories of long ago.

It was said that Marie had skills that no one could understand. Her house was a run-down mansion deep in the swamp. It was filled with charms and fetishes, which were scary symbols that kept the living and the dead away. People in the town talked about her in whispers because they were both afraid of her power and eager for her favor.

A young couple got lost in the tangled swamps around Marie's domain one stormy night, as thunder rumbled like the drums of faraway rites. Sarah and Dario, who were newlyweds from upstate, came looking for excitement but got lost in the murky maze of frogs and trees covered in moss.

They were lost and desperate when they found Marie's house, which had a façade lit by flickering candles. Icense smoke and the faint sound of singing filled the air inside.

Marie herself met Sarah and Dario. She was a scary-looking woman in flowing black robes, and her eyes shone with ancient and magical knowledge. Marie's voice, which was both sweet and scary, rang out: "You've come looking for safety from the storm." "But be warned: once you cross my threshold, there is no turning back."

The couple, who were both interested and a little scared, agreed to stay with Marie. She fed them a hearty stew that smelled like secrets and told them vague things about their fates. Sarah was mesmerized by Marie's aura and begged to learn voodoo because she thought it would help her get what she really wanted.

Dario, on the other hand, stayed suspicious. He thought Marie's power was just a show, a smart way to play on people's fears and superstitions. As the days turned into weeks, Sarah spent more and more time learning Marie's lessons. She learned the rituals and spells that she thought would make things happen the way she wanted them to. Dario, who was feeling more and more uncomfortable, tried to get Sarah to leave, but the promise of power captivated her.

One night when there was no moon, Sarah went into the middle of the swamp by herself to test her new skills. She ignored Dario's pleas and did a ritual under the old oak tree that was supposed to bring ghosts from beyond the veil to her. As she recited spells that had been passed down through generations, the air became thick with excitement.

All of a sudden, shadows gathered around her and whispered threats of power and fear. Sarah's joy turned to fear when the ghosts she had called to her wouldn't be contained. As they moved around her, their voices were a cacophony of anger and desire that chilled her to the bone.

Dario rushed to the swamp because he thought Sarah was in danger. The haunting cries that echoed through the night helped him find his way. He found her shaking and pale under the oak tree, surrounded by shifting shadows that were hungry for her soul. With Marie's help, he fought to get rid of the evil spirits by calling on old safeguards and negotiating for Sarah's freedom.

Sarah made it through in the end, but she will always be changed by the shadows that almost ate her. After what happened, Dario, who now believed in supernatural forces, led her away from Marie's house. The ordeal made their faith in each other stronger.

The Voodoo Queen, Marie Laveau, watched from the shadows of her house. The lightning in her eyes looked like it was going out. The witch knew that the ghosts were tough to control and that their desire for human souls was as strong as the swamp. Marie whispered a warning to the night as Sarah and Dario disappeared into the fog. She said that the veil between worlds was thinner than most people dared to think and that people who looked for power in the dark could lose more than they could ever gain.

Horror

About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Amy littleabout a year ago

    Impressive work

  • Milrose samboque2 years ago

    Nice read

  • Kennedy Smith2 years ago

    Elegantly written

  • Shelby 2 years ago

    Impressive work

  • Denelsia Walker2 years ago

    Looking forward to more!

  • John Baxter2 years ago

    Amazing read. I can’t wait to read more of your work

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