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"The Unquiet Grave"

''Two Friends Sneak into a Local Cemetery to Play a Game of "Ghost Hunting,"

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
"The Unquiet Grave"
Photo by Simon Alibert on Unsplash

The moon hung low in the sky, casting an eerie silver light over the old cemetery. Tombstones jutted out from the ground like crooked teeth, their inscriptions worn by time. Two friends, Jake and Alex, stood at the entrance, their flashlights cutting narrow beams through the darkness.

“This is going to be awesome,” Jake whispered, his excitement barely contained. He adjusted his backpack, filled with “ghost-hunting” gear—an old camcorder, a makeshift EMF reader, and a book of supposed ghost rituals he’d found online.

Alex, less enthusiastic but unwilling to back down, gave a nervous laugh. “I don’t know, man. This place gives me the creeps.”

“That’s the point!” Jake grinned, leading the way through the creaking iron gate. “We’ll be legends after tonight.”

They ventured deeper into the cemetery, the silence broken only by the crunch of leaves underfoot. Shadows danced between the graves, and the air grew colder with each step. The boys stopped at a large, weathered mausoleum, its stone walls covered in ivy. Jake pulled out the camcorder and began recording.

“Here we are at the oldest part of the cemetery,” he narrated, his voice low and dramatic. “Legend has it that this mausoleum is haunted by the spirit of a woman who died under mysterious circumstances.”

Alex shivered, glancing around nervously. “Are we really going to do this?”

Reluctantly, Alex agreed, and they set up their gear in front of the mausoleum. Jake opened the book to a page titled “Summoning the Lost.” The ritual was simple enough: light a candle, recite a few words, and wait for a sign.

Jake struck a match and lit the candle, the small flame flickering in the wind. He took a deep breath and began to recite the words, his voice trembling slightly.

“Spirits of the lost, hear our call. We seek to bridge the gap between worlds. Come forth and show us a sign.”

“That’s enough, Jake,” Alex said, his voice tight with fear. “Let’s get out of here.”

But before Jake could respond, the ground beneath them began to tremble. The air grew heavy, and a low, mournful wail echoed through the cemetery. The boys froze, eyes wide with terror.

“What was that?” Alex whispered, his voice barely audible.

Jake shook his head, too frightened to speak. The wailing grew louder, closer, until it felt like it was coming from all around them. The candle suddenly snuffed out, plunging them into darkness.

“Run!” Jake shouted, grabbing Alex’s arm. They bolted through the cemetery, stumbling over gravestones and dodging low-hanging branches. The wailing pursued them, a relentless, chilling sound that seemed to echo inside their heads.

They reached the cemetery gate and burst through it, not stopping until they were several blocks away. Breathless and shaking, they collapsed onto a park bench, their hearts pounding in their chests.

“What the hell was that?” Alex gasped, looking over his shoulder as if expecting something to follow them.

“I don’t know,” Jake replied, his voice trembling. “But we definitely woke something up.”

The boys sat in silence, the events of the night replaying in their minds. They had come looking for a thrill, but what they found was far more than they had bargained for. The cemetery, once a place of harmless curiosity, had become a place of terror—where the line between the living and the dead had been crossed.

As they walked home, the wind carried a faint whisper through the trees, a final reminder that some games should never be played, and some spirits should never be disturbed.

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    This look scary men but its a great story

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Interesting and damn scary 😨. Nice one

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