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**"The Uninvited"**

'' A Man Starts Hearing Strange Noises from his Attic ''

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
**"The Uninvited"**
Photo by Adrien Brunat on Unsplash

Ethan had always found comfort in the quiet solitude of his old, two-story house. Nestled on the edge of town, it was a place where he could retreat from the world and lose himself in his books and thoughts. But lately, the silence had been interrupted by something unsettling.

It started with faint sounds—barely noticeable at first, like the creaking of old wood or the scurrying of small animals. Ethan dismissed them as the natural noises of a house settling. But as days passed, the sounds grew louder and more distinct. At night, when the house was at its quietest, he could hear it clearly: the unmistakable sound of footsteps coming from the attic.

He tried to ignore it, convincing himself that it was just his imagination or perhaps a raccoon that had found its way inside. But deep down, he knew it was something more. The footsteps were deliberate, as if someone—or something—was pacing back and forth above him.

One evening, after a particularly loud thud echoed through the house, Ethan decided he could no longer ignore it. Grabbing a flashlight and a heavy wrench from his toolbox, he steeled himself and made his way to the attic.

The attic door creaked open, revealing a dark, dusty space cluttered with forgotten memories. Boxes of old clothes, holiday decorations, and yellowed newspapers were piled haphazardly around.

Ethan’s breath was shallow, his heart pounding in his chest. He strained to listen, but the attic was eerily silent now, the oppressive quiet amplifying his fear. He cautiously stepped inside, the floorboards creaking underfoot. The air was thick with dust and the smell of aged wood.

As he moved deeper into the attic, he noticed something strange—a section of the floorboards near the far wall looked different, newer somehow. His flashlight flickered, casting shadows that seemed to shift and move on their own. He swallowed hard, inching closer to the spot.

Kneeling down, he ran his fingers along the edges of the floorboards. They were loose. With a trembling hand, he pried one up, revealing a small, dark space beneath. His flashlight beam revealed what was inside: a makeshift bed, old blankets, and scraps of food. Someone had been living in his attic.

Ethan's mind raced. How long had they been there? Why hadn’t he noticed sooner? And where were they now?

Suddenly, the hairs on the back of his neck stood on end. He wasn’t alone. The soft sound of breathing, slow and steady, came from the darkness behind him. Ethan froze, fear rooting him to the spot.

He turned slowly, the flashlight beam trembling in his hand. Standing in the shadows was a figure—a gaunt man with hollow eyes, his clothes dirty and tattered.

“I didn’t mean to stay so long,” the man whispered, his voice raspy and low. “I was just looking for a place to hide… but I couldn’t leave.”

Ethan’s blood ran cold. The man took a step closer, his eyes locked on Ethan’s, pleading yet menacing.

“I’m not alone, you see,” the man continued, his voice barely above a whisper. “They’re here too, in the walls, in the shadows… They don’t want me to leave.”

As the man spoke, Ethan felt the air around him grow colder, the darkness pressing in from all sides. The house seemed to come alive with the faint sounds of whispering, footsteps, and scratching—coming from everywhere and nowhere.

Ethan realized with a sickening dread that he wasn’t just dealing with an intruder. There was something else in the house, something far more terrifying. And it wasn’t going to let either of them leave.

Horror

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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