
Man, the silence hit Ashley first. She'd totally expected noise—Mom’s old records playing, maybe Dad clanging around in the kitchen, or heck, even a big "Surprise!" But nope. As soon as she got the door open with her key, the house just ate all the sound from the hallway. Just this deep, empty quiet.
She tossed her keys onto the ceramic console dish. Clink. Oof, that was way too loud. And lonely. She’d driven a brutal eight hours from the dorms, running on cruddy coffee and dreaming of a huge, amazing welcome. She checked her phone again, staring at the five unread texts from her mom. All super normal: Have safe trip. Dinner at 7? Let me know when you arrive.
But the kitchen light was off. The living room was dark. The house was spotless, actually—a huge red flag, suggesting they hadn't been home for hours. She peeled off her hoodie, disappointment settling in like a chill. She was tired, super hungry, and just really wanted her folks.
She walked into the living room, noticing the throw pillows were placed with geometric perfection. Everything was in order. Everything was too quiet.
It was 11:30 PM. Seriously? She was reaching for the light switch when it happened.
BAM-BAM. BAM-BAM-BAM.
The sound was wrong. It wasn’t some timid neighbor tap, and it wasn’t a frantic emergency bang, either. It was heavy, intentional, and perfectly spaced. Two, pause, three. It felt like it was rattling the floorboards right up into her spine. It was a rhythm that didn't belong here, not now.
Ashley froze. Okay, immediate panic. Every bit of travel tiredness vanished, replaced by cold terror. If it was a person, they’d be yelling her name or apologizing for the time. This was just too structured, too deliberate.
Wait, she thought. If Mom and Dad aren't here, how could anyone even know I just walked in?
She tiptoed silently back toward the hall, trying not to let her sneaker squeak. It had to be a faulty appliance, or maybe a delivery guy gone crazy? But those impacts had too much purpose.
She reached the front door, leaning against the cool wall. The light strip usually visible beneath the door was oddly dim, like something big was blocking the source. The silence returned, too deep and heavy, just swallowing the sound of the knock. Whatever had done it was now just waiting, perfectly still.
Ashley felt a knot of pure dread, but her college-honed brain kicked in: she needed intel. Holding her breath, she crept forward and lifted her eye to the concave glass of the peephole.
The view was just this weird, distorted light. The hallway looked totally empty. But down by the mat? There was a box.
It was dark, weirdly smooth wood, about the size of a bulky shoebox. It had no seams, no hinges, and was sealed up with this thick, oily, shimmering resin. It looked less like a package and more like a manufactured black hole.
Then she got it: the knock hadn't been a hand at all. It was the sound of someone dropping this incredibly dense box right onto the mat, probably ducking out of sight right after. The box was the visitor. How did they get it to the sixth floor without the elevator or any sound? This was giving her total existential dread.
She reached for the deadbolt, her hand shaking. The brass felt cold and solid, the only real thing in this baffling situation. She hadn't even texted her parents that she was home yet. No one knew she was here, alone with this impossible object.
She turned the deadbolt. Click-thunk.
She twisted the knob and pulled the door inward just a crack. The scent that slipped in wasn't dust, but something mineral and cold, like ozone and granite.
She nudged the door open wider, seeing the box clearly. And then she spotted a tiny detail: pressed into the thick, shimmering resin, right by the carpet, was a single, flawless indentation.
It was a perfect thumbprint. It was impossibly huge and deep. But the truly chilling part was the spiral of the print itself. It was backwards. It went the wrong way, a mirror image of how a human print is supposed to be.
Ashley hesitated, battling the desperate urge to slam the door and run versus the need to know. She knelt, picked up the box—it was shockingly heavy, like lifting a concrete block—and pulled it inside.
As the door swung shut, the normal click of the latch was replaced by a soft, resonating whine, a spooky sound that seemed to come from the apartment frame itself, like it was sad the box was now inside.
She placed the box on the kitchen counter, where it cast a weirdly dark shadow that just seemed to soak up the light around it.
And then, a new sound, much softer: a fine, grinding whisper, like wet sand on glass. The shimmery resin seal started to dissolve, falling away in tiny, glittering specks.
The box was opening itself. Ashley didn't move. She waited for the strange, unscheduled arrival to finish its grand entrance.
About the Creator
Alexandria Hypatia
A philosopher and Libra to the fullest. I have always enjoyed writing as well as reading. My hope is that someday, at least one of my written thoughts will resonate and spark discussions of acceptance and forgiveness for humanity.




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Damn this was amazing