The Truth Can Kill
For Raymond Taylor's "Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but..." CHALLENGE
"Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but..." Her death stopped her dead cold. She slumped in his arms. There was no saving her, like the others. Still, he had to try.
"Next!" he shouted, as he hung up the phone.
______________
For Raymond Taylor's "Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but..." CHALLENGE, which you can find HERE.
About the Creator
Gerard DiLeo
Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!
Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/
My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo
Keep reading
More stories from Gerard DiLeo and writers in Fiction and other communities.
Seeing from the other side
So, after getting some blood work done, I was told that I had traces of another human in my blood, which means it's a dead twin. This happens when a set of twins is in the same wound, and 1 twin dies during development and gets absorbed by the stronger twin as nutrients. Basically, resulting in the surviving baby as a chimera.
By stephanie borges4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Please forgive the clumsy cut and paste. I would like to publish your entry (or entries) to the Oh-Jeff challenge in an upcoming book and of course need your permission to do so. Details are all here: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/oh-jeff-the-book%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thanks, Ray
WOW! Well done!
Highly inventive, original and troubling. Well done
I don't get it. Was she cheating on him?
Brief and powerful!!!
Well this was a suitably warped DiLeo take! great job!
One more down....how many to go? Next
Guess he'll have to keep going until he gets it right.
The truth doesn’t set us free? Dangnabbit! Clever take on the Challenge, Gerard!