The Troll Knoll Hole
A tongue-twister satirical take on the Microfiction Magic Challenge.
There was a troll who lived in a hole. A hole in a knoll. The troll demanded a toll. A toll from those who passed over the knoll. His goal was to buy another hole. Another hole in another knoll. A second knoll hole for a second knoll toll.
The troll took a stroll. The troll spoke with Mole, who also had a knoll. They spoke about a recent knoll real estate poll that showed a decline in knoll hole ownership. This was taking its toll.
While the local knoll authorities came and filled the troll knoll hole.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!
Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from Paul Stewart and writers in Fiction and other communities.
Luxury Meets Innovation on the Green Field
The morning sun spread gently across the wide green field, turning every blade of grass into a small mirror of light. The field lay just outside the city, a place where nature still breathed freely and the noise of traffic felt far away. On this quiet land stood two remarkable cars: a sleek Lamborghini, glowing in deep metallic orange, and a modern Tesla, smooth and silver, reflecting the sky above it.
By Bilal Mohammadi2 days ago in Fiction
Comments (10)
I read this out loud and can’t stop laughing 😆
Hahahaha this was brilliant!
Not so much tongue- as mind-twister, leaving us in a state where either local knoll authorities will require the filling of this hole it's left behind in my cranium, or a troll I fear will take up residence.
Ha HA! Quite clever and fun to read!
love this. Packed in quite a bit while also being funny!
Very funny and cute. Now, read it out loud really fast. 😂
Impressive & cute!!!💖💖💕
Clever take!
Very good, fun and rhyming!
Good one!!