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The Stranger Who Knew My Story

Someone randomly approaches the main character, telling them a story from their life — but they’ve never met.

By Abbas AliPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

I was late, as usual.

The sky was the kind of gray that seemed undecided — not quite ready to rain, but heavy enough to press on your mood. I tugged my coat tighter and hurried down Main Street, weaving through the early evening crowd. Just another Tuesday, or so I thought.

That’s when I saw him.

He stood at the corner of the bakery I used to visit with my father. Tall, maybe in his late 50s, wearing a faded blue coat and a hat that looked too small for his head. What made me stop wasn’t how he looked — it was how he looked at me.

Like he knew me.

He smiled, soft and slow, and said, “Still biting your nails when you're anxious?”

I froze. My hand was near my mouth. I hadn’t even realized.

“Excuse me?” I managed, blinking.

He tilted his head. “You always did that before your piano recitals. Third grade, remember? Mrs. Lindley’s class.”

My stomach dropped. That was something I hadn’t thought about in years. Something only I knew. I’d played Für Elise and forgotten the middle. I bit my nails so bad that day I made myself bleed.

“Who are you?” I asked.

He laughed gently. “Not important. What matters is I know your story. I’ve been waiting for this moment.”

“Okay, no offense, but this is weird.”

“I understand.” He looked out toward the street, then back at me. “You never told your mother how much you hated staying at Aunt Renee’s. You were afraid she'd think you didn’t love her.”

My chest tightened. “Who are you?”

He sighed. “When you were ten, you buried a dead bird in a shoebox behind the school. You cried because you thought no one would come to its funeral.”

I stepped back. My voice dropped to a whisper. “How do you know that?”

He pulled something from his coat pocket. It was a folded piece of lined paper, yellowed with age. I took it, hands trembling.

It was mine.

A letter I wrote at sixteen. Not a real letter — a journal entry I titled “To My Future Self.” I never showed it to anyone. I had sealed it in a copy of The Great Gatsby, buried on the top shelf of our old garage.

I looked up. “That book was thrown out.”

“No. You left it behind when you moved. I found it.”

Tears welled in my eyes, uninvited and confusing. “Why? Why are you doing this?”

The man looked at me — really looked — with kindness and something close to sorrow. “Because sometimes, when people lose themselves, they need a reminder of who they used to be.”

I didn’t speak. Couldn’t. My hands clutched the old letter like a lifeline.

He continued. “You’ve spent years running. From guilt. From grief. You think forgetting will make it easier, but it’s not working, is it?”

My voice cracked. “I didn’t ask for help.”

“You didn’t have to.”

He smiled again — this time with something heavier behind it. “I knew your story because it’s mine too, in a way.”

I narrowed my eyes. “What does that mean?”

“I lost someone too. Years ago. I did what you’re doing now — ran, pretended, buried the pain beneath work and noise.” He touched his chest. “But it stays with you. Until you face it.”

A silence passed between us, filled with sirens in the distance and the rustling of cold wind.

“Why me?” I whispered.

“Because you stopped playing piano. Because you stopped writing. Because the little boy who held funerals for birds grew up and forgot how to mourn properly.” He paused. “And because I believe you still remember.”

Tears slid down my cheek. I didn’t wipe them.

He took a step back. “I’ll go now. But read that letter again. The part where you said, ‘I hope you’re still curious. I hope you still believe in second chances.’ That part was meant for this very moment.”

I clutched the paper to my chest.

“Wait,” I said suddenly. “What’s your name?”

He smiled once more. “Call me a reminder.”

And with that, he turned and disappeared into the fog of the street.

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  • Zafar Khan Zafar Khan6 months ago

    Great

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