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The Sound of Nothing

When Silence Speaks Louder Than the Storm

By Karl JacksonPublished 3 months ago 6 min read

There should have been noise.

The world outside should’ve been roaring—the clatter of dishes from Mrs. Darby’s diner, the screech of car tires along Main Street, the barking of that one beagle who hated mornings as much as Lena did. But that morning, there was nothing. No hum. No whisper. Just an empty, weighty silence that pressed against her chest like a held breath.

Lena sat up in bed, blinking hard, thinking maybe her ears hadn’t caught up to her brain yet. Sometimes after deep sleep, sound felt delayed, like waking underwater. She rubbed her ears, then clapped her hands together. Nothing. No smack, no echo, no familiar pop of skin on skin. Just silence.

She laughed nervously. Or tried to—her mouth moved, her throat tightened, but the sound didn’t come out. Panic rose like cold water climbing up her spine. She stumbled out of bed, her heart thundering—though even that, she realized, she couldn’t hear. She felt it, yes, but it was muted somehow, distant.

The world had gone mute.

🕯️ The Hollow Morning

Outside, the sky looked wrong too. Not gray, not blue—just pale, washed out, as if someone had dimmed the saturation of the entire town. Lena waved her arms at her neighbor, a kind old man named Mr. Keating who always watered his petunias at 7:15 sharp. He looked up, gave a friendly nod, and said something—she could see his lips moving—but no sound reached her. When she pointed to her ears and shook her head, he just smiled politely, misunderstanding.

It wasn’t him. It wasn’t them. It was her.

She rushed back inside and turned on the TV. Static light filled the room, people’s mouths moved, but still—no sound. Her phone buzzed violently against the table, the vibration jarring her. Her sister’s name flashed across the screen: CALL FROM MAYA. She swiped it open and shouted, “Maya? Maya, I can’t hear anything!”

Except, of course, she couldn’t hear her own voice either.

Maya’s face appeared on video chat, frantic. Her lips were moving fast, her eyes wide. Lena tried to focus, reading what she could: “What’s wrong?” “Are you okay?” “Say something!” But she couldn’t respond. Her throat felt useless. The call ended with Maya’s face frozen mid-scream.

That image lingered like an aftertaste—Maya’s open mouth, silent and helpless.

🌫️ The Disappearing World

By noon, Lena realized it wasn’t just her hearing. The silence wasn’t simply lack of sound; it was consumption. It devoured things. When she turned on the faucet, the water didn’t splash—it moved, but it was somehow too slow, too smooth. Like time was thinning.

Her coffee cup slipped from her hand and hit the tile floor. No crash, no shatter. Just a dull visual of ceramic breaking apart like brittle paper. The pieces dissolved before her eyes, turning to fine gray dust that evaporated into the air.

The air tasted metallic, like fear.

She wrote on a sticky note: IF ANYONE CAN READ THIS—COME FIND ME. THE WORLD IS LOSING SOUND. AND MAYBE… SOMETHING ELSE.

She stuck it on her door and left her house. The silence followed her like fog. Even her footsteps didn’t exist anymore. No crunch of gravel, no slap of sneakers on pavement. It was like watching a movie on mute—but worse, because the film was her life.

🏚️ The Silent Gathering

She wasn’t the only one.

At the town square, a small crowd had formed—people waving frantically, mouthing words, trying to communicate in gestures. Some were crying; others looked dazed, like this was a dream they couldn’t wake from. Lena caught sight of Maya running toward her, hair wild, eyes red.

They collided in a desperate hug, trembling. Maya pulled out a small notepad and wrote in all caps:

IT STARTED AT MIDNIGHT. NO ONE KNOWS WHY.

Lena scribbled back:

DO YOU THINK IT’S JUST SOUND? OR SOMETHING BIGGER?

Maya hesitated, then wrote:

PEOPLE ARE MISSING.

THEY VANISH WHEN NO ONE’S LOOKING.

Lena’s stomach dropped. She looked around the square—dozens of faces, all terrified. A little boy pointed to the clock tower, eyes wide. Its hands weren’t moving. Frozen at 12:00 exactly.

Time had stopped.

Or maybe, the silence had swallowed it too.

🕰️ The Absence Deepens

That night, the stars didn’t come out. Not even one. Lena and Maya sat by candlelight, communicating in quick scribbles and tired glances. Every once in a while, Lena swore she felt a pulse in the air, like a deep vibration—not sound, but pressure. It came in waves, subtle but strong, like a heart trying to beat through thick fabric.

Then, around midnight, the pressure grew heavier. The candles flickered. The world dimmed again, colors draining faster. The silence began to feel alive.

Maya grabbed Lena’s wrist and wrote one last note:

I THINK IT’S TAKING EVERYTHING THAT MAKES US REAL.

The words hit like a scream in Lena’s head. She looked around and saw the edges of the room starting to blur. The furniture melted into shadows. Maya’s form flickered, translucent, her outline trembling like static. Lena reached out, desperate—but Maya was already fading, her notepad falling through her hand like smoke.

The silence pulsed once more, a final heartbeat, and then she was gone.

🌑 The Voice of Nothing

Lena fell to her knees, tears streaming down her face, though she couldn’t hear her own sobs. The silence was total now—not just lack of sound, but absence itself. She felt her body vibrating, as if she were being pulled apart by invisible hands. The walls rippled like water. Her reflection in the window was delayed, her movements stuttering.

Then, for the first time all day, she heard something.

A low hum, distant yet inside her skull. It wasn’t a sound made by air or matter—it was like her thoughts were being answered by something vast and ancient. A whisper without words, a consciousness in the void.

“You wanted peace,” it said, though not in language she understood. “Now you have it.”

Her throat tightened. She screamed silently into the blackness, shaking her head. This wasn’t peace. This was erasure.

“You filled your world with noise,” the voice continued. “You mistook chaos for life. So I took the sound away. To see what remained.”

Lena stumbled backward. She tried to form words, but none came. The hum grew stronger, vibrating through her bones.

“There is nothing without sound,” it said. “Not even you.”

🌪️ The Last Echo

Something inside her snapped.

She thought of Maya’s laughter, the rattle of rain on windows, her mother’s humming while cooking dinner, the distant rumble of trains at night. She thought of all the small, imperfect sounds that made up her world—messy, beautiful, human.

She forced her lungs to move, her throat to strain. The voice told her resistance was useless. The silence pressed harder.

But then, it happened—a faint sound. A tiny, trembling breath, almost imagined. Her own. She gasped again, louder this time, pulling the noise from somewhere deep and ancient. And with that breath, a crack appeared in the stillness.

The air trembled. The candles flickered back to life. For a split second, she heard a sound—her name. Faint, but real.

“Maya?”

The world seemed to listen.

Then the hum returned—angrier now—and the crack sealed shut.

Everything went white.

🌤️ The Morning After

When Lena woke, the world was back. The noise had returned—sirens in the distance, birds chirping, cars honking. The clock ticked. The world moved. But it all sounded… different. Too crisp, too deliberate, as if someone had put the soundtrack back in but hadn’t remembered how it was supposed to sound.

She sat up and looked around. Her house was intact. Her hands were real. But Maya’s notepad sat on the table, blank.

Lena picked up a pen and wrote the date—October 30. The ink faded as soon as it touched the paper. Gone.

Outside, the world bustled like nothing had happened. But when she walked down Main Street, no one met her eyes. Their mouths moved, but she couldn’t hear them. Not fully. The sound came delayed, like a dubbed film out of sync with itself.

And for a moment, when she blinked, the whole town flickered.

Lena smiled faintly, the corners of her mouth trembling. The silence hadn’t gone—it had simply learned how to wear sound’s skin.

FAQ

Q1: What inspired the story’s focus on silence?

It explores how much of our identity is tied to sensory experience. Without sound, communication, and connection, we begin to lose not just noise—but meaning.

Q2: Is the silence supernatural or metaphorical?

It can be read both ways. The silence acts as a mirror, reflecting humanity’s dependence on chaos to feel alive.

Q3: Why did the ending feel uncertain?

Because silence doesn’t end—it waits. The story suggests that what Lena experienced may happen again, or never stopped.

Q4: What message does the story leave behind?

That even the smallest sound—like a breath or a whisper—can defy oblivion. And that sometimes, what we call “quiet” isn’t peace, but warning.

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About the Creator

Karl Jackson

My name is Karl Jackson and I am a marketing professional. In my free time, I enjoy spending time doing something creative and fulfilling. I particularly enjoy painting and find it to be a great way to de-stress and express myself.

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