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The Silence Between the Pines

Lost in the wilderness, survival is more than just staying alive.

By HazelnutLatteaPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

The sun was gone.

Not just hidden behind clouds or sinking beyond the ridge - but gone, swallowed by a sky so dark and deep, it felt like falling. Lily tightened her grip on the Swiss Army knife. It wasn't much, but it was the only tool she had left.

Three days ago, she was just another college student trying to prove something - solo hiking through the Cascade Mountains. No GPS. No phone signal. No backup. Just her, a map, a bagpack that contained things - food, water purifier, emergency blanket -, and the illusion of control.

Now, she was cold, bleeding, and very much lost.

The first mistake, she had been following the deer trail, instead of the main path. The second, she had been trying to shortcut across a ravine. Her ankle twisted on a loose rock, and the fall had cost her not only her footing, but her backpack, which tumbled into the stream below.

She had watched helplessly as her supplies - food, water purifier, emergency blanket - were swept away. All she'd salvaged was her knife, a wet granola bar, and the clothes on her back.

It seemed like the pines around her whispered with every breeze, like they knew she didn't belong there.

On the second night, hunger clawed at her insides like a wild animal. She started to try chewing on pine bark, after remembering a survival video. But, it made her sick. She tried to drank water from the stream, while hoping that the water wasn't carrying parasites.

Now, on the third night, she was shaking uncontrollably - not just from cold, but from the creeping sense of time that unravelling. She hadn't seen a trail marker in hours. No planes overhead. No signs of the other hikers.

Just trees. And the silence between them.

She built a fire with trembling hands, scraping sparks from the knife's adge onto a bundle of dry moss. The flame caught, a tiny sun she fed like a sacred thing.

She talked to it. Sang to it. Anything to keep her mind from unraveling. And to keep her mind to not to lose her mind.

"Keep going," she whispered to herself. The words like breath in the air. "Keep moving. Someone will come."

But, the only response was the wind.

Everytime she whispered to herself to keep going, to keep her mind unraveling, to keep her mind not to lose hoping, the only response was always the wind. Not a person. Not a deer.

But, on the fourth day, suddenly she heard a sound that didn't belong - a branch snapping with purpose. Not a deer. Not wind.

She froze.

Another snap. For a heartbeat, she wondered if the forest had learned to mimic hope.

Then, a voice.

"Hey! Is someone there?"

Her legs gave out. Relief hit her so hard, it felt like pain. She managed a cry, weak, and broken, then, "Here!"

Branches parted, a man in a ranger's uniform stepped through.

She didn't remember falling into his arms.

Later, she was wrapped in a blanket inside a rescue vehicle, sipping warm broth, she stared at her reflection in the rearview mirror. Her face looked older, her eyes shadowed.

"You're lucky," the ranger said gently, "Another night out there, and...."

He didn't finish.

She nodded, silent.

Because, she understood now: survival wasn't just a battle against nature. It was a war within. Against fear. Against doubt. Against the voice that whispered, "You can't do this."

But, she had

And now, every silence wouldn’t haunt her.

It would remind her: she fought, she survived, and she would never be the same.

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About the Creator

HazelnutLattea

Serving stories as warm as your favorite cup. Romance, self reflection and a hint caffeine-fueled daydreaming. Welcome to my little corner of stories.

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  • Antoni Setiawan8 months ago

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