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The Said Tomato

"A heartwarming tale of a talking tomato that teaches the forgotten art of listening to nature."

By USAMA KHANPublished 8 months ago 2 min read

The Said Tomato

In a forgotten corner of Granny Eloise’s garden, nestled between the rosemary bush and the rusted watering can, grew a single, odd tomato. Unlike the others, it didn’t rot or wither with age. It ripened, glowed a deep crimson... and one day, it spoke.

“Don’t pick

me,” it said calmly, just as seven-year-old Miles reached out with grubby fingers.

Miles yelped and stumbled backward, dirt spraying into the air.

“I—I must be dreaming,” he stammered.

“Nope,” the tomato replied. “You’re wide awake. And I’m quite real. My name’s Thomas. Thomas the Tomato.”

Miles blinked. Then grinned.

“You’re alive? Like, actually alive?”

“Indeed,” Thomas said. “And I have something important to say. But only to someone who listens.”

Miles sat cross-legged in the dirt. “I’m listening.”

Thomas regarded him, or at least seemed to, even without eyes.

“Most humans,” he said, “pluck things the moment they’re ripe. They rush. But nature… nature works differently. It takes time. Patience. Purpose.”

Miles frowned. “But… my grandma says tomatoes are best when they’re ripe.”

“Ripe to you is not the same as ready to me,” Thomas said. “You see a red tomato and think ‘time to eat.’ But I? I say, ‘time to speak.’”

Miles looked around, half-expecting a camera crew to pop out. But no, it was just him and the talking tomato under the open sky.

Thomas continued, “Everything in this world has a voice. Even if you don’t hear it. Plants. Trees. Even soil. But most people have forgotten how to listen.”

“But why you?” Miles asked. “Why are you the only tomato that talks?”

“I was grown from a seed planted with intention,” Thomas said. “Your grandmother whispered to me when she buried me. She said, ‘Grow with love.’ And I did.”

Suddenly, Granny Eloise called from the kitchen window, “Miles! Lunchtime!”

“I gotta go,” Miles said, brushing off his pants.

“Wait,” Thomas called. “Take this with you: Not everything that grows is meant to be picked. Some things are meant to be understood.”

Miles nodded, then hesitated.

“Will you still be here tomorrow?” he asked.

“I’m not going anywhere,” Thomas replied. “Unless a squirrel gets bold.”

The next day, Miles came back with a notebook. Then the next, and the next. He listened to Thomas tell stories about the soil’s memory, the dreams of dandelions, and how the sun speaks in golden code.

Soon, other kids from the village joined him. They didn’t all hear Thomas at first — but slowly, by listening deeply and respecting the garden, they began to feel... connected. Some swore the rosemary whispered. Others claimed the wind carried secrets.

One day, as summer waned, Miles came to the garden and found Thomas shriveled on the vine, dried and silent.

He wept.

Granny Eloise came beside him. She didn’t seem surprised.

“He did his job,” she said softly. “He taught you how to listen.”

Summary / Lesson:

“The Said Tomato” is a whimsical tale about a talking tomato who teaches a young boy the value of listening — not just with ears, but with the heart. The story’s unique lesson is that not everything that appears ready is meant to be taken, consumed, or used. Some things, like wisdom and connection, are meant to be understood and respected. In a world rushing to consume, this tale reminds us to slow down, listen deeply, and honor the silent voices of nature.

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About the Creator

USAMA KHAN

Usama Khan, a passionate storyteller exploring self-growth, technology, and the changing world around us. I writes to inspire, question, and connect — one article at a time.

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