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The Return of a Promise

Two friends, a lost bracelet, and a reunion that proves some promises never fade

By Tariq JameelPublished 4 months ago 3 min read

The rain had only just ended when I stepped into the café. Drops clung to the glass windows, and the pavement outside glistened like it was covered in stars. Inside, the warm hum of voices and the soft hiss of the espresso machine gave me a momentary sense of calm. I ordered my usual coffee and chose a table near the window, expecting nothing more than another ordinary evening.

But then, the door opened, and everything shifted.

She walked in with damp hair and a loosely wrapped scarf. Her eyes scanned the room until they found me, and she smiled—a smile that struck a long-buried chord in my memory. In her hand, she held a small, frayed bracelet. At first glance, it was just an old piece of thread. But my heart knew otherwise.

“Do you remember this?” she asked, her voice gentle, almost uncertain.

My breath caught. “I think I do,” I whispered.


Years peeled away in an instant.

I saw us again—two children sitting at the edge of a playground, making promises as though we understood what forever meant. She had tied a bracelet around my wrist, made from nothing more than scraps of thread we had found in the grass.

“When we grow up,” she had said with childlike certainty, “let’s meet again, no matter what.”

And I, just as certain, had nodded. “Promise.”

But promises made by children are fragile. Life carried us in different directions. Schools changed, phone numbers were lost, and time blurred everything into the background of growing up. I hadn’t thought about that day in years.

Until now.


Back in the café, she slid into the chair across from me.

“Lina,” I said, finally finding my voice.

“You still remember my name,” she teased, though there was relief in her tone.

She explained she had only recently returned to the city for work. The bracelet, she told me, wasn’t just an old keepsake—it was her anchor, a reminder of a childhood promise she couldn’t bring herself to let go of.

I glanced down at my wrist, where once I had worn the twin of that bracelet. Mine was long gone, lost to time and carelessness. I admitted as much, a little embarrassed.

She only smiled. “I kept mine for both of us.”

The words sat between us, simple yet profound.


We talked for what felt like hours, though the world outside still glowed with the fading light of evening. She told me about her travels, the people she had met, the dreams she had chased. I shared my own stories, smaller and quieter, but real. It wasn’t just catching up—it was rediscovering a connection we had both carried silently all these years.

When the café began to close, we stepped outside together. The city lights shimmered against the wet pavement, and the air smelled faintly of rain.

“You know,” she said softly as we walked, “I used to wonder if I imagined it all. If maybe that promise was just something kids say and forget.”

“But you didn’t forget,” I said.

She shook her head, her eyes on the bracelet. “No. Some things are worth holding onto, even if they don’t make sense at the time.”


At the corner where our paths would split, she paused. For a moment, I thought she might say goodbye the way people do when they know they won’t meet again. Instead, she pressed the bracelet into my palm.

“Here. Even if you lost yours, this one was always for both of us.”

I hesitated, then closed my hand around it. The threads were worn, fragile, but they carried the weight of something larger than themselves.

“See you again?” I asked, almost afraid of the answer.

“Maybe,” she said with a quiet smile. “Or maybe this was the moment we were meant to have. Either way, I’m glad we kept our promise.”

And just like that, she turned and walked into the city night, her figure slowly blending with the crowd.


I stood there long after she was gone, the bracelet in my hand. Maybe we would meet again, or maybe this was the end of our story. But as I slipped the bracelet onto my wrist, one truth became clear: some promises don’t fade with time—they wait, quietly, until the moment they are remembered.

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