It began with a sliver of light.
Emery hadn’t meant to look—she was only walking past the half-closed study door, the one that was always shut when her father worked. But the thin gold line of lamplight caught her eye, and her hand, without permission, rested against the polished wood.
Through the crack, she saw him—not in one of his commanding moments, not in the sharp suit that seemed to carry its own gravity—but sitting on the floor. The desk chair was pushed aside. He had a small wooden box open in front of him, something carved, old. Inside were folded papers and a few photographs, worn at the corners.
Her father lifted one—a photo of a boy standing barefoot in a field, grinning, mud streaked up his shins. The resemblance was impossible to miss. He was holding something—a fishing pole made of a stick and twine—and he looked like he had built it himself.
Emery had never seen her father smile like that. Not in any of the pictures framed on the walls, not in the house where everything was clean, cold, precise. This was softer, almost uncertain. A memory, maybe, or a ghost of a self.
Then he closed the box. Just like that, the light in his face disappeared, replaced by the still mask she knew. He rose, brushed invisible dust from his sleeves, and became again the man who filled every space with certainty.
Emery backed away before the floor could creak.
She went to her own room, past the quiet shelves and uncreased sheets, the scent of lemon polish and money so thick it had no air in it. But her pulse wouldn’t slow. That small, secret scene wouldn’t leave her.
She tried to work—emails, plans, tomorrow’s itinerary—but every word blurred against the question rising in her chest:
What had he given up to build this? And what was she giving up to keep it?
The next morning, she drove out of the city. No destination, no driver, just herself in a car she barely knew how to fill with gas. The landscape unfolded in unfamiliar ways—fields, small towns, laundry lines stretching between porches. Somewhere along the way, she stopped for coffee at a diner where no one knew her last name. The waitress called her “hon” and poured refills without asking.
For a moment, she felt the world shift—quietly, without drama, just the way light changes when a cloud moves.
She didn’t make any declarations, didn’t decide to sell everything or start anew. But something had tilted inside her.
She began seeking what couldn’t be bought: a meal cooked from scratch, a walk without purpose, the way strangers talk when there’s no performance involved.
Sometimes, years later, she would think about that night at the door—the look on her father’s face before he put the box away. It wasn’t shame she’d seen. It was longing.
And that was what had undone her—the realization that comfort, all along, had been the thing that took life out of living.
Not in one dramatic instant, but in a quiet, almost imperceptible trade.
She’d seen it through a keyhole.
And somehow, that small view had shown her everything she was missing.
About the Creator
R. Byer
I'm the average. The plain. The everyday. You can barely see me.

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