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"The Prison of the Mind"

"The Prison of the Mind"

By Rajoan IslamPublished 10 months ago 4 min read

"The Prison of the Mind"

Lena sat by herself in the psychiatric hospital's tiny, sterilized room. She felt as though she was confined to a snow globe, cut off from the outside world, because the walls were so white. The fragrance of antiseptic, which she had been all too accustomed to in recent months, permeated the air. Feeling the rough skin of her palms, the only solace in a world gone awry, she clasped her hands together.

Everything was different two months ago. Lena had been a prosperous lawyer who was self-assured, driven, and lived a purposeful life. Then everything began to fall apart. It started with the late evenings spent at work and progressed to the ongoing sense of dread. Her formerly clear-headed and concentrated thinking began to become hazy due to illogical notions. She felt trapped in a maze of uncertainty and horror, as though her own brain had turned against her.

Lena had made an effort to persevere. She told herself she was just stressed and disregarded the nagging anxiety. However, things became worse. She was unable to trust herself or her thoughts. The hallucinations began—shadows that moved when no one was around, whispers in the room's corners. She initially believed it to be fatigue. The voices suddenly grew louder and more insistent. She was unable to get away.

Lena's family and coworkers were worried when she eventually lost it. In an attempt to discover a remedy, they sent her to the hospital. However, according to the doctors, it was more than just stress. She was diagnosed with a serious mental illness brought on by years of overstressing herself. She had been living in a mental prison, they said, where her mind had erected barriers that were too strong for her to overcome.

Dr. Carter, Lena's therapist, was the only one who appeared to comprehend. She felt as though she was not totally lost because of his soothing presence and caring manner.

In one of their first meetings, Dr. Carter had remarked, "I want you to think about the walls inside your head, Lena." "What do they consist of? What are their feelings?

Lena had initially objected. She wasn’t ready to face the chaos inside her own thoughts. But she gave herself permission to consider the topic thoughtfully.

She understood that the walls were composed of her worst fears rather than merely being barriers or bricks. She is afraid of failing, of not being good enough, of disappointing everyone. She had developed them through years of self-doubt and pressure to live up to unrealistic standards. The walls grew thicker as she ascended higher and higher until she was confined and suffocating in her own fear.

She learned more about her inner world with each visit to see Dr. Carter. The work was difficult and exhausting. However, Lena sensed a change within herself with each stride. She began to face the anxieties that had ruled her life. She acknowledged that since she felt she had to be flawless—always flawless, always in control—she had never let herself be vulnerable or genuinely begged for help.

However, that was untrue.

She did not need to be flawless. She might be a person.

After months of therapy, Lena sat in her room one evening and gazed out the window. She was starting to feel as though she was emerging from the mists after a long and difficult journey. The shadows had ceased to move, and the voices had subsided. Her mind was gradually clearing from the tumultuous labyrinth of fear. Although the walls remained, she was now able to dismantle them piece by piece.

Dr. Carter informed her that it was time to return home the following day.

"You have come a long way, Lena," he stated with pride in his voice. "You are prepared."

Lena was excited and afraid at the same time. In order to return home, she had to return to the reality she had known before her mind had deceived her. However, she was also aware that she had changed. She had changed from the broken, terrified woman who had entered that hospital months prior.

Lena took a deep breath as she gathered her belongings. She was not entirely cured. There will be challenging days ahead, times when she felt like she could not scale the barriers of her thoughts. Now, however, she was aware that she was strong enough to confront them. She had discovered that it was acceptable to be imperfect and to not know everything, and she had learned to be kind with herself.

The sun was beaming and the entire world was bathed in a warm glow when Lena left the hospital. She felt the burden of the world subside for the first time in months. She had freedom.

Lena was prepared to live, even if the road was far from complete. She was no longer trapped by her own thoughts and could create a life based on acceptance, development, and the conviction that she was sufficient just the way she was.

-I hope the spooky story was enjoyable! If you require any changes or another story, please let me know. Thank You.-

AdventureClassicalFableHistoricalPsychologicalSeriesShort StorythrillerYoung AdultScript

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Rajoan Islam

Hey, Life is very beautiful, you have to enjoy it while it lasts.

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