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The Price of Evil

When guilt comes knocking, the only escape is to face the darkness you once ignored.

By Hazrat BilalPublished 5 months ago 4 min read

The rain had been falling since midnight, a steady curtain of water that blurred the neon lights of the small city. Jonathan Hale stood at the window of his apartment, watching the world distort through the glass. He wasn’t waiting for anyone, but he couldn’t shake the feeling that something was approaching. Something inevitable.

It had been five years since the night that ruined him. Five years since the betrayal, the blood, and the decision he could never take back. Jonathan had built a quiet life since then—routine job at the docks, evenings spent in solitude, and no friends close enough to ask questions. But evil has a way of finding the people who think they’ve outrun it.

At 2:17 a.m., a knock came at the door. Three short raps. He froze, heart hammering. No one visited him at this hour. No one visited him at all.

“Who is it?” he called, his voice steadier than he felt.

A pause. Then, a woman’s voice—soft, almost trembling. “I think you knew my brother.”

Jonathan’s mind started racing. He opened the door just enough to see her. She was drenched from the rain, dark hair plastered to her cheeks, eyes fixed on him with an expression he couldn’t read.

“My name’s Claire,” she said. “My brother… his name was Daniel Reed.”

The name hit him like a blow. Daniel. He could still see the man’s face in the flicker of that terrible night.

Jonathan stepped aside and let her in, though every instinct told him not to. She sat on the edge of his couch, her hands clenched around a leather satchel. “I’ve been looking for you,” she said. “For years.”

He forced himself to speak calmly. “Why?”

Her gaze didn’t waver. “Because I know you were there the night he died. And I know it wasn’t an accident.”

The room seemed to shrink around him. He had told himself no one would ever connect him to what happened. He had buried the truth deep enough that it should have rotted away by now. But there she was, proof that some evils don’t fade—they wait.

“I didn’t kill him,” Jonathan said, the lie tasting like rust.

Claire tilted her head. “Maybe not. But you didn’t stop it, either. And I want to know why.”

Jonathan could have thrown her out, denied everything, even called the police. But he found himself sinking into the chair opposite her, as though this confrontation was something he had been rehearsing for years.

“Your brother,” he began slowly, “wasn’t who you think he was.”

Her eyes narrowed, but she didn’t interrupt.

“I worked with him,” Jonathan continued. “We were hired to move certain shipments. Not legal ones. I was desperate for money, and he… he was already deep in it. But then he crossed the wrong people. Stole something from them. Something worth killing for.”

Jonathan’s voice broke slightly, though he tried to hide it. “That night, they came for him. I was there. I could have warned him. I could have helped him escape. But I didn’t. I told myself it wasn’t my fight. That I’d just get myself killed too. So I watched. And when it was over, I ran.”

Silence hung heavy in the room.

Claire didn’t cry. She didn’t scream. She simply opened her satchel and pulled out a small black revolver.

Jonathan tensed. “What are you doing?”

“My brother wrote me a letter,” she said, her voice flat. “Said if anything happened to him, I should find you. He said you’d either help me get justice… or you’d pay for what you did.”

Jonathan looked at the gun, then at her face. She was shaking, but her eyes were steady. He knew she hadn’t come here just to talk.

“You think killing me will make it right?” he asked.

“No,” she said quietly. “But it’s the only way I can sleep at night.”

The rain outside grew louder, as though urging her to decide. Jonathan could feel the weight of his own guilt pressing down on him. In some twisted way, he thought maybe he deserved this.

But then Claire’s hand faltered, just enough for him to see the hesitation.

“You’re not a killer,” he said softly. “If you do this, it’ll own you. Just like it owned me.”

Something flickered in her expression. She lowered the gun slightly, though her knuckles were still white around it. “Then help me,” she said. “Help me finish what he started. Take them down.”

Jonathan stared at her for a long moment. It was madness. The people she was talking about were dangerous beyond imagination. But he saw in her eyes the same fire that once burned in him—before fear and selfishness had smothered it.

“Alright,” he said finally. “I’ll help you. But once we start, there’s no turning back.”

She nodded. “I don’t want to turn back.”

They shook hands. The deal was made—not in ink, but in the unspoken understanding that both of them might not live to see it through.

As the rain eased outside, Jonathan felt something strange. Not relief, not hope—something darker. A sense that evil, once awakened, can only be answered with action. And perhaps, in facing it, he might finally pay the price he had been avoiding for years.

Somewhere in the city, the men responsible for Daniel Reed’s death were sleeping soundly, unaware that the storm outside had just found its way to their doorstep.

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About the Creator

Hazrat Bilal

"I write emotionally-driven stories that explore love, loyalty, and life’s silent battles. My words are for those who feel deeply and think quietly. Join me on a journey through the heart."

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