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The Pontianak: Midnight Delivery

A Singapore Short Story

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 5 months ago β€’ Updated 5 months ago β€’ 3 min read
Top Story - August 2025
The Pontianak: Midnight Delivery
Photo by M Rishal on Unsplash

Hot days. Humid nights. Banana leaves swaying in the breeze.

Juxtaposed against a brilliant, metropolis skyscape.

The Pontianak is a renowned female ghost from Malay folklore--a spirit that haunts banana trees.

And unsuspecting bananas.

She taunts men--particularly those who harm or betray.

And that's why many Singaporeans give this long-haired woman in a filmy white dress nods of respect.

She's still feared--by delivery riders who ply the city streets at night.

Exploit--and be exploited. Don't potong jalan.

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"Eh, don't Potong Jalan my delivery leh--I was supposed to pick up that mysterious $100 order!" Aziz parallel-parked his PMD haphazardly and stormed over to a group of Grab Delivery Riders, accusing them of cutting into his job.

The mystery order was the highest paid anyone had delivered yet. It was for a VIP--a Very Important Patron. The type of order that could get them to weave through traffic weal and park connector woes.

The other riders met him with scoffs. "VIP--Very Important Pontianak, is it?" Singapore's favourite (and feared) female spirit was the bane of night shift delivery drivers--and banana trees. Pedals were pushed to the limit.

"Eh, maybe that order isn't so shiok after all," Ahmad, an elderly member of the group, had his generation's superstition. "We don't want her to go after any one of you..."

He pointed a finger, circling the group.

Male-the perfect targets for female spirits that entice from the fruit of banana trees.

Ahmad continued.

"That order goes to a colonial house. Seems that the last Grab rider who did the job got grabbed."

Phones started to ping in unison. Order 999. Special Delivery.

To the said colonial house.

The National Day race was on.

"Don't Potong Jalan!"

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The riders were speed demons who made Sonic blush, spines drooped.

They zoomed faster than a pup's Zoomie through heartlands and park connectors, hollering "Chiong ah" so loudly that laryngitis was a guarantee.

The fiercest race was between Aziz and Zul, each determined to claim the VIP order prize.

The winning edge belonged to Aziz--his PMD was the first to reach the address.

A low, semi-detached abode, once covered in layers of exquisite ivory paint, now chipped.

Wild Morning Glory crept on the wall, layering them in heavy purple.

Aziz's fingers pressed on the doorbell in rapid succession.

Then, the creaking of the heavy main door.

Her dress was white.

Impeccable, the embroidery, delicate.

Her hair--long. Black.

Her skin---pale.

Her eyes--bloodshot.

Staring empty.

Aziz let out a scream louder than a banshee's.

The other male riders heard it and stopped in their tracks towards the door.

The ghoul sensed their trepidation and raised a hand.

"Relax," Her lilt was soft. "I'm not here for--she encompassed the male riders in a sweep of her arm. "You're safe."

Everyone's feet stayed planted.

Then Aziz spoke, his voice layered by a nervous quiver.

"What do you want, ah?"

The Pontianak stroked her chin with slim fingers, almost pricking it with her curved, pointed nails.

" Believe it or not, I want to help."

Her ghostly voice almost inaudible, she explained that she was targeting a group of----

Scammers.

Notorious crooks exploiting riders with empty promises of high-paying deliveries.

Zul took a step towards the door, slowly losing his fear.

His skin prickled at any injustice.

"Hey, we'll be stuck with packets of food and no payment. Suay ah."

Aziz nodded. The face of competition changed.

"Let's get them." The other riders turned to each other.

No reason to protest.

Aziz turned to the Pontianak. "Where do you think we can find these criminals?"

She gestured towards the surrounding housing development heartland.

"All over. You'll have to wait for the next false delivery, of course.

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The rider's wait wasn't long.

Fifteen minutes later, at the void deck of a housing development apartment.

A ping from a phone..

Banana leaves rustled in the wind.

By a stroke of blowing Pontianak fortune, the scammers----a group of delinquent teenage boys---were seated at another nearby void deck.

Hackers of an inept delivery system.--the boys had tapped it to send the riders instructions.

The riders "chionged', and squeaks of worn rubber filled the air.

The boys leapt onto their bikes, a group of fleeing gazelles.

Whoosh.

Under rows of perfectly aligned banana trees.

Where she hung above.

Eyes darting, Waiting.

Then--

A drop.

Of a white sheet.

With enormous banana leaves attached.

A quick flick of the wrist, and an extension of blood red thread.

Each boy became a pisang.

A lamppost became their binding tree.

They dangled within the leaves, mouths agape.

Bananas--showing the boys that 'potong jalan' wasn't allowed.

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Glossary of Singlish Terms

potong jalan: To cut in, exploit or take advantage of someone's weakened position

chiong: charge

shiok: a pleasant experience

suay: unlucky

Original Singapore Story by Michelle Liew, published in conjunction with our country's National Day, which fell yesterday, 9th August. AI tags are coincidental.

For Mikeydred's August Prompt:

Short Story

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Imola TΓ³th5 months ago

    I just love how you mixed everything together in this story, Michelle! No wonder it's a TS! πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰ Congrats!

  • Aspen Noble5 months ago

    This was an absolute riot from start to finish. The blend of folklore and food delivery culture had me grinning the whole way through. I love how the Pontianak became an unlikely avenger of the gig economy, equal parts spooky and satisfying. Those final images? Banana poetic justice at its finest. Brilliantly done!

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    Ah yes, I need to write one for Mike. Great example to follow here Michelle, this was chilling and scary as heck, congrats.

  • Cadma5 months ago

    Your opening paints an evocative, almost cinematic backdrop humid air, swaying banana leaves against a glowing cityscape which immediately pulled me into the world of the Pontianak myth. The interplay of folklore and urban setting promises a haunting, layered story; the tone and setting are already powerful and unforgettable!

  • ijaz ahmad5 months ago

    nice

  • Hahahahahahahha they all became pisangs! 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 Congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰β™₯οΈπŸ€—

  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    A female ghost that haunts banana trees, that's interesting. I like how the banana leaves were almost reacting to that ping from yet another scammer. A story for Singapore's national day, that's sweet and this story was very entertaining and adventurous. I liked that I learnt Singlish along the way. Especially potong jalan. I might have butchered the pronunciation, but I liked the way it sounded and now I like the meaning. Especially when used in the context of the story. Nicely done, Michelle πŸ€—β€οΈ

  • Mother Combs5 months ago

    ❀️

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