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The Perfect Family on Willow Lane

The Creepy House Next Door

By Kratika SaxenaPublished 9 months ago 3 min read
The Perfect Family on Willow Lane
Photo by Scott Webb on Unsplash

Willow Lane was the prettiest street in town 🌸. Every house had bright flowers, green lawns, and happy families. But the Carters, who moved into the big white house at the end of the lane, were… different 👨👩👧👦. They didn’t just move into their house—it was like they appeared one day, as if the house grew them itself!

Mr. Carter always smiled, even when it rained 🌧️. Mrs. Carter wore fancy dresses just to water the plants 💐. Their twins, Lila and Liam, never got dirty or yelled. Even their dog, Buttercup 🐕, never barked. She just wagged her tail… click-click-click… like a wind-up toy 🤖.

One sunny afternoon ☀️, the Carters invited my family over for tea 🫖. Mom said it’d be fun 🎉. Dad said to “be polite.” I hid under my bed 🛏️, but Mom found me.

Their house smelled like flowers and cleaning spray 🧼. The cookies 🍪 on the table were perfectly round, and the lemonade 🍋 was so pink it glowed. Lila and Liam sat on the couch, still as statues 🗿. Their eyes 👀 followed me like dolls’ eyes.

“Do you like rules, Clara?” Mrs. Carter asked, her voice sweet as syrup 🍯.

“Do you ever feel… messy?” Lila whispered, her smile too wide 😬.

I spilled my lemonade on purpose 💦. No one gasped. No one moved. Mrs. Carter just clapped her hands 👏, and a robot vacuum 🤖 zoomed in to clean it up. Beep-beep! 🚨

Then I saw the painting 🖼️.

Upstairs, in a hallway, there was a picture of MY FAMILY—Mom, Dad, and me—standing next to the Carters. We were all smiling 😊, but our eyes looked empty 👻. The date on the painting said next year 📅.

“Do you like it?” Mr. Carter appeared behind me, still smiling 😃. “We’re so glad you’re joining us.”

At dessert 🍰, Mrs. Carter gave me a slice of cake. The frosting tasted like chalk 🧑🏫. When I looked down, my clothes had changed 👗. I was wearing a frilly dress just like Lila’s. My hair was in perfect curls 💇♀️. Mom giggled—a high, squeaky sound I’d never heard before 🎶.

That night 🌙, I couldn’t sleep 😴. Buttercup was digging in the backyard 🐾. I tiptoed outside and found her pawing at a shiny locket 🔗 buried in the dirt. Inside was a photo of a girl who looked like Lila, but older 👧➡️👩. Scrawled on the back were the words: “Help us. They’re not my real—” ‼️

A shadow fell over me 🌑. Mr. Carter loomed, his smile reflecting in the moonlight 🌕. He snatched the locket 🖐️. “Silly dog 🐶,” he said. “And silly you. But don’t worry… we’ll fix that.” 🔧

Now, strange things keep happening 🤔. My homework 📚 is always perfect 💯. My room stays clean 🧹 without me trying. And when I look in the mirror 🪔, my reflection waves… a second after I do ⏳.

Lila visits my window at night 🌃. “You’ll be just like us soon,” she says. “No more mess. No more mistakes.” 🚫

But last night, I scratched my wrist 🤚. Under my skin, I felt something… rough. Like tiny stitches 🧵.

The Carters aren’t a family 👨👩👧👦. They’re collectors 🕴️. They want everyone on Willow Lane to be “perfect”—quiet, still, and smiling forever 😶.

I won’t let them win 🏆. I’m writing this to warn you: If you see a house too perfect 🏡, a family too still… RUN 🏃♀️💨.

And check your wrists 🩺.

familyHorrorMysteryShort StorythrillerYoung AdultFan Fiction

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