The Padded Chamber
Psychological Microfiction
This is for Mikeydred's June Challenge.
Speak when you need to.
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It was June in Latchcombe, a sunny month of soft blooms and long days.
The backwater town was lulled into sunny comfort by a single man's silence--Sir David Quill's. The retired speaking coach kept his mouth sealed as if it were gold--he hadn't uttered a word since his retirement.
The illustrious speaking coach had made and crushed the reputations of speakers with single, cutting words. Some townsfolk thought it was penance for his harshness--for sinister actions untold. Others thought that he was just practising what he preached. Now, he wore a plastered smile--one that chilled the hardiest bones.
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Reporter Ellie Marsh tore at tomes in Latchcombe's only library, hoping to reap harvest writing gold for her tribute on Sir Quill. The man was a true chamber of curiosities.
But, Ellie being Ellie, Sir Quill was a mere excuse.
A reason to pry--and find out exactly what it was that had driven him to silence.
After days of sleuthing, she broke into his cottage while he was on one of his long walks--he took them when he needed to get away from prying eyes like hers.
Only it wasn't a home.
It was an acoustic Fort Knox.
A Fort with tapes. And more tapes.
And walls, padded with not just foam, but intent.
Housed in an old journal entitled "When I Chose Silence."
His quiet had apparent fervour--passion stored in pads and replayed.
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She touched the pads lightly--and boom.
Sonic thunder, followed by a low hum.
And the sound of her name.
"Ellie. You were too young. You couldn't have known."
The words were reassuring. The tone? Dark. Too precise.
Too knowing.
The volume was low, but the message deafened.
The pads weren't silence--they were surveillance.
"I know what you did."
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Ellie remembered. Little David Quill.Β Quiet. Coiled up.Β
The lunch money. The many free lunches she had.
On his account.Β
Forced.Β
The push.Β
Into the ditch.
Dirt. Mounds.
The peals of echoing laughter. The village was suddenly louder than she remembered.Β
Shaken, Ellie ran from shame's razor-sharp teeth.
She wasn't sure if the voice came from within, or without. But this she knew for certain --she couldn't stifle unspoken truths.Β
She heard them. Echoes of her guilt bounced off Sir David's walls.
Recorded.Β
Remixed.Β
Returned.
In many ways, shapes, and forms.Β
Doubt in a compliment. Warnings, veiled by whispers.Β
Sir David's silence stalked. With soft-feet. And a too-sure grip.Β
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Sir David sat alone at his patio table, another labelled tape in his hands.Β
No speech.
No confrontation.
He didn't need a sonic boom.Β
He spoke --when he needed to.
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ποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈ ποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈ ποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈποΈ ποΈποΈποΈ
Original story by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (2)
Absolutely gripping! Loved the eerie charm and the slow unravel. If your walls ever start talkingβ¦ maybe donβt touch the foam. Just a vibe check. ;)
Oh wow, Ellie was a bully! What a plot twist!