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The Light Beneath the Lake

Some secrets aren’t meant to be solved—just felt

By Mudasir Hakeemi Published 6 months ago 1 min read

When Ellie was seven, her grandfather told her that the lake behind their family cabin held a secret—one that only revealed itself to the lonely.

She never forgot that.

Years passed. Summers came and went. Her grandfather passed away, the cabin was boarded up, and Ellie grew into a woman who preferred cities to silence. But heartbreak has a way of undoing years of distance, and after a particularly cruel breakup and the loss of her job, she found herself driving back to that old cabin. Alone.

The lake hadn’t changed. Neither had the silence.

That first night, sleepless and numb, Ellie walked to the dock barefoot, carrying a flashlight and her grief. She sat with her knees pulled to her chest and stared at the water until it shimmered with moonlight.

Then she saw it.

A soft glow beneath the surface. Not a reflection. Not a fish.

It moved.

Curiosity overruled fear. She stripped to her underwear and dove in.

The water was ice-cold, but clarity struck as soon as she submerged—so clear she could see to the bottom, where the light pulsed softly like a heartbeat.

She swam closer.

It wasn’t a thing. It was a feeling. Warmth wrapped around her, not from heat but from memory. Her grandfather’s voice. Her mother’s laugh. The first time she fell in love. The time she felt truly seen. The joy she’d buried under years of trying to be “enough.”

Ellie came up gasping, not for air but for understanding.

The next morning, the lake looked the same. Still. Ordinary.

But Ellie wasn’t the same.

She stayed a week. Then two. Writing. Painting. Breathing. The lake never glowed again, but that was okay. It had given her what she needed—a reminder that wonder still lived in the quiet, and that loneliness was sometimes an invitation to find something deeper.

When she left, she didn’t say goodbye.

She just whispered, “Thank you.”

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About the Creator

Mudasir Hakeemi

I am poor boy

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  • A Khan Khan6 months ago

    Nice

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